Comprehensive correction 6 mistakes Comprehensive correction 8 errors in total, including 4 typos

This semester, the school held the "Scholarly Campus" (Mistake 1: The name of the activity does not need to add the title of the book, you can add double quotation marks) activity, and the students actively participated in it and gained a lot. Liu Fang said

She (Error 2: direct quotation, should use "I" instead of "she") read "The Grass House" (Error 3: Parallels need to be added or "and" in the middle of the same kind juxtaposition) "If I were given three days (Error 4:

The correct title of the book is If I Give Me Three Days of Light, the author remembers correctly, it should be Helen Keller)" and other books, and also participated in the reading club (False 5: Same as False 3) newspaper meeting, and the extracurricular life (False 6: Extracurricular life should be said to be enriched, not improved) and the level of writing have improved.

This activity is really meaningful! ”

Mistake 1: The name of the event does not need to be added to the title of the book, but can be added with double quotation marks.

Mistake 2: Use "I" instead of "she" in direct speech

Mistake 3: The juxtaposition of the same kind requires a conjunction such as a gaton or "and".

False 4: The correct title of the book is that if you give me three days of light, the author remembers that it should be Helen Keller.

Error 5: Same as Error 3

Mistake 6: Extracurricular life should be said to be enriched, not improved.

Hahaha, I'm sorry, I think the 6th mistake I picked a little reluctantly. But personally, I think it's almost there.

Damn, you don't have to stop between books, who said it must be stopped! When I was in my second year of junior high school, there were so many sentences in the book that didn't have a pause. The sixth is not reluctant at all!!

This semester, the "Scholarly Campus" activity held by the school, students actively participated in it and gained a lot. Liu Fang said: "She read books such as "Grass House" and "If You Give Me Three Days", and also participated in the reading club newspaper, which enriched her extracurricular life and improved her writing level.

This activity is really meaningful! ”

1. How approachable Mr. Chen is, he never loses his temper with us. During class, she was often with us and patiently taught us how to read and write. Even though she criticized us, she was just a little harsh, but she was still so kind to us afterwards.

2. I concluded that Zhang Ming would definitely be admitted to a key school because he studied very hard. Once, he spent more than an hour trying to understand a math problem, but he didn't get bored at all.

1. How approachable Ms. Chen is, she never loses her temper with us. During the lessons, she patiently taught us to read and write, and she was often with us. Even if he criticized us, he was just a little harsh, but he was still so kind to us afterwards.

2. I concluded that Zhang Ming would definitely be admitted to a key school because he studied very hard. Once, he spent more than an hour trying to understand a math problem; But he wasn't bored at all.

1. Overcome hardship and change hard.

2. Always and always repeat the cumbersome.

3. Changing from manic heat to dry heat.

4. Sweating.

5. If you change it, even if you change it.

6、……Bitter reading until late at night", change".

7. Stimulate and motivate.

8. Peak to front.

Bitterness - hard, review the new lesson - preview the new lesson, irritable - dry, but also double the sweat, peak - front, stimulate --- motivate, the associated words are not properly collocated, if changed to even.

There are four typos prompted, but I can't find four, only three.

Revision is a review of what you have learned, so you should use a preview for a new lesson.

There is always a meaning of always, so I also think that it is always always, repeating long-winded, and deleting one of them.

Bitter and diligent: gram changed to engraved.

Always and always a little wordy.

There is also a new lesson that should be a preview.

Heat change to heat.

Also left doubling changed to sweaty.

If it is changed to although.

The peak is changed to a front. Inspire becomes incentive.

He practiced to live to the front to tell the story of "Avanti's skillful fight against the rich man". Because Zhang Xiaohua's voice was a little hoarse, he spoke very seriously. The students listened very energetically

Line 1: He found it was difficultLine 2: Took off

Line 3: Remove (on) every nightLine 4: when he was tryingLine 5: made him angry

Line 6: After changed to before, asked the man not (to) do Add to.

Line 7: Line 8:

Line 9: I can't find anything else, please continue downstairs.

Another:This TM is a question I did when I was in school.。。。 Still using it... It can be seen that education in China.

A gentle breeze blows, and the turquoise water ripples, making people feel refreshed. The flower bed by the pond is [in full bloom] with peonies, moon seasons, and peonies. Although they bloom so brightly, each one is more beautiful than the other, and from time to time they emit an attractive fragrance [fluttering around].

This pool, this flower bed, and the rockeries, pavilions, and trees in the distance [make up] a beautiful picture.

1.Replace the word "days" with the words "seasons".

2."The content is varied and colorful" was changed to "the items performed are colorful".

3.Replace the word "join" with the word "participate".

4.Replace the word "point" with the word "put".

5.Remove the ellipsis after "etc.".

6.Give "increase" to "promote".

The first June is a month, not a day.

The development of capitalism is based on the mistake and corrected as the basis for maintaining the Qing Dynasty and the rule of the Qing Dynasty;

Zhang Zhidong made a mistake and corrected it to Liang Qichao; The mistakes of the reformists led by Sun Yat-sen were corrected to the revolutionaries;

The mistake of "mastering the long technique to control the razor" was corrected to the Three People's Doctrine;

Hu Shi made a mistake and corrected it to Li Dazhao;

Down with the Confucian shop" mistake and corrected it to "democratic science".