Hello, I have an English letter to a foreign friend, please take a look

Literally, ignore some of the irregular expressions in English:

Actually, I didn't want to be an announcer, because I always believed that the economy dominated the development of society (in other words, I probably wanted to study economics more), but I chose to study the major of announcer, because I believe that language skills or communication skills are indispensable and very important to accompany the progress of human society, and communication is inseparable from any occasion. So, I realized that the broadcasting major I chose was still very applicable.

Undergraduate students will get a receipt from their university (similar to a diploma), but when graduates enter the society, the society will not pay much attention to the diploma (it will not issue anything like a certificate like a university). Our university admits a large number of candidates every day. CCP (short for an institution) has been experiencing a lot of problems in the teaching system.

We've also found some things that we can improve further with our application in the Chinese education system, but as you know, our education system in China is almost perfect (better if contextualized here!! You should know that the CCP is still a young organization (there is still a lot of room for growth), and the CCP must adjust their entire system in China.

The above translation needs to be combined with the actual context to understand correctly. The level of this letter is not flattering.

maybe it above all could give you a hand!

It's not English, it's just a bunch of English words. Speaking is not a pen, the most important thing, whether it is speaking or writing, first needs to think in the correct English in the brain, in order to come up with the right thing.

Thinking in correct Chinese, Chinese, correct English, English is generally no play! Can't get out.

Actually, I don't want to be a broadcaster. Because I want to maintain social control over the development of the economy. But the reason I chose the broadcaster is that language skills or communication are very crucial to human development.

Communication is needed in every area. Radio education taught me how to communicate with society, how to communicate with the world. So, I just realized that my major was very practical.

After graduating, students receive a diploma from the university. However, when students go out into society, society will not pay attention to that diploma. Our college admits a large number of candidates every year.

The Chinese Communist Party's education system has many thorny problems. We've seen some unfortunate progress in China, and that's that, as you know, China's education system is improving. You must know that the Chinese Communist Party is still young.

They have to adjust the whole system in China.