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You still have to copy the composition, I'll teach you to write it.
The design of the original and chic title attracts the reader.
The title of the article is the window of the article, and it is a concise sentence that summarizes the content of the article. When a reader reads an article, the first thing that catches his eye is the title. A good topic, like a person's eyes, can convey affection and show God, so that readers can "fall in love at first sight" and be unforgettable.
Therefore, when students are composing, if it is not a propositional essay, they can first give the article an attractive and impactful idea, so that readers will be surprised and delighted when they see it, and they will not give up the following title. For example, the American writer Schulberg's ** "My Wonderful Bad Poems"; There are also topics such as "Noble Alms" that students have used in their writing, which can give us a refreshing feeling and add infinite brilliance to the article.
First of all, use rhetorical devices to add charm. Because rhetoric is an effective way of language expression, if used well, it can achieve the effect of turning abstraction into concrete. For example, a student wrote about the earth in the article "Care":
In ancient times, the earth was like a young and beautiful woman, and the green earth was the ...... of her beautiful skin"Reading an article like this is like admiring a beautiful picture.
Second, make good use of famous sayings. If we use it appropriately when writing, we can get the finishing touch with half the effort.
Choose a language that is in the spirit of the times. For example, some words that reflect the development of the times - "cloning", "gene", "Internet", "emotional intelligence", etc. If these words are used in some of the essays, the sense of the times in the essay will also come to life.
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My hometown Taishun is known as the "Hometown of China's Covered Bridges" and "South Zhejiang Bridge Museum", with a large number of bridges and various types of structures. It is understood that by the end of 1987, there were 958 existing bridges in the county, and 248 stone pillars, of which 476 were built before liberation. There are more than 30 covered bridges in the Ming and Qing dynasties, including wooden arcade bridges, wooden flat covered bridges and stone arcade bridges.
Among them, there are 6 wooden arcade bridges that occupy an important position in the history of bridges in the world, namely Sixi Sister Bridge, Sankui Xue Zhai Bridge, Xianju Bridge, Shinomura Wenxing Bridge, and Three Bridges.
The shape of the covered bridge is beautiful. Almost everyone who has seen the Taishun Covered Bridge will say that the covered bridge is a strange sight. Because there is a bridge house on this bridge, and this house has doors but no doors, and windows but no windows.
Between the green mountains and green waters, the covered bridge is like a flying rainbow across the stream, harmoniously reflecting the surrounding environment.
Let's talk about the Xidong Bridge in Sixi, she really has the momentum of "rainbow qi is in the void, and the shadow shakes the moon". There are 15 porch houses built on the arch of the bridge, several of which are high protruding. The wing angles of the eaves are high, and several exquisitely carved green dragons are entrenched on the ridge of the roof, and some look back at the distance, as if whispering; Some raised their heads to the sky, as if they were about to drive away from the clouds.
On the ridge of the roof, there are small and delicate stone lions squatting every other section, they listen to the sound of the rushing water under the bridge day and night, and silently wait for this beautiful covered bridge. In the morning, everything in the town is so quiet, the covered bridge in the misty clouds is like a thin veil, and the hazy figure is even more beautiful and light. In the evening, a touch of sunset afterglow sprinkled on the bridge, and the orange figure was reflected in the water, like a dragon diving.
When the mountain flowers are in full bloom, the green trees and red flowers line the quaint covered bridge, which is bright and elegant. In the cold winter, the snow is covered, and the covered bridge is more and more charming.
The covered bridge in Taishun has a long history. According to records, the earliest covered bridge in Taishun has a history of more than 1,000 years. Faced with the dilemma of crisscrossing mountain streams and ravines blocking pedestrians, our ancestors used their industrious and intelligent hands to build the most advanced covered bridges at that time, providing convenient passages for people from the south to the north.
Xianju Bridge was built in the fourth year of Ming Jingtai (1453), Xidong Bridge was first built in the fourth year of Ming Longshu Daqing (1570), Beijian Bridge was built in the thirteenth year of Kangxi in the Qing Dynasty (1674), and Wenxing Bridge was built in the seventh year of Xianfeng in the Qing Dynasty (1857) ......It is undoubtedly a miracle that these wooden bridges have survived hundreds of years of ups and downs, and that they are still so well preserved. To this day, there are still many moving legends about the construction and repair of bridges in our folk. The covered bridge is like an ancient book of Void Wisdom, telling people about the stormy years of the mountain people.
Hometown Covered Bridge, I love you! You are the pride of the people of Taishun.
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The long-awaited May Day has arrived. Early in the morning, I was waiting at the door for my father's friend's car to pick us up, aiming for the Taishun Covered Bridge.
The car is driving on Linyin Avenue, the sky of the mountain village is extraordinarily blue, the water of the small stream is particularly clear, the green mountains and green water, the water and the sky are the same color, it is really beautiful.
In less than an hour, our car was at its destination. The uncle parked the car on the side of the road, and everyone walked to see the covered bridge. Along the way, we saw a lot of wild flowers, as well as wild strawberries, everyone was full of interest, and they went to pick strawberries, picking too much, our hearts couldn't let go, so my sister opened the umbrella to load, it was really interesting.
When I arrived at the covered bridge, it was really crowded and lively. The covered bridge is like a long rainbow across the stream, which is spectacular. There were many wooden houses on the bridge deck, and people came and went, and my father said that they were all made by ancient skilled craftsmen, and I couldn't help but admire their wisdom.
Later, we went to the small stream under the bridge to tread water, and we were barefoot on the slippery stones, moving step by step to the opposite bank, which was really happy.
After playing a group, everyone is leaving, and I am reluctant. Dad pointed to the rape fields on both sides of the bridge and said, "If you come a month earlier, when the rape flowers are in full bloom, then it will be called beautiful."
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My hometown is in Taishun, where the mountains and rivers are beautiful, the scenery is picturesque, the air is pleasant, especially every summer vacation, our family likes to go back to Taishun to escape the heat, don't turn on the air conditioner when you sleep at night, but it's comfortable!
Speaking of the most beautiful Taishun is our Taishun covered bridge, with historical investigation, Taishun well-preserved Tang, Song, Ming, Qing Dynasty wooden arcade bridges totaled more than 30, its number, craftsmanship, beauty of modeling and harmony with the surrounding environment, in the history of the world's bridges called a must, is the "Qingming Riverside Map" in the Hongqiao structure reproduction, the covered bridges are inlaid between the mountains like a treasure, which has attracted the attention of experts at home and abroad, and also ushered in the upsurge of Taishun's characteristic tourism.
The one I've been to the most is the Sixi Covered Bridge, where there are stone steps that float on the water, which is a good tool for crossing the river, and this is one of my favorite parts of the covered bridge.
The water there is crystal clear and bottomless. Next to the bridge is a thousand-year-old tree, which is so thick, strong, and straight, like a grassland sentinel. There you can buy folk crafts. There are also farmhouses, farmhouse souvenirs ......
If you have time to remember, you can also go to Taishun Covered Bridge to play.
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Our great motherland is a great museum, and there are many places of interest and historical sites.
Whenever I see a video about the scenery of Lushan, it reminds me of the summer vacation last year, when I, my father, my mother and my brother drove to Lushan by themselves. Lushan is a global geopark, it has beautiful scenery, there are too many beautiful scenery, I am intoxicated, but the three stacks of spring left me the deepest impression.
On the second morning of coming to Lushan, we finished breakfast and went to visit one of the famous scenic spots in Lushan - Sandi Spring. Since ancient times, Sandi Spring has been known as the "soul of Lushan", and the distant view is like a snow dragging down from the air, how majestic, how magnificent. We walked down the steep stairs and walked more than a thousand steps to the bottom of the spring.
Standing at the bottom of the Sandi Spring, listening to the sound of the spring water and enjoying the cool and clear spring water splashing on us, it is really very comfortable! Although everyone was a little tired, their faces were flushed, and their clothes were wet with sweat and spring water, everyone felt that this place was really worth visiting!
We slowly climbed to the top of the mountain along the rugged stone steps, standing on the top of the mountain, watching the waterfall of Lushan Mountain, I couldn't help but chant the masterpiece of the famous poet Li Bai of the Tang Dynasty: "Wanglu Mountain Waterfall" "The sunshine incense burner produces purple smoke, and the waterfall hangs in front of the river." The flying stream went straight down to 3,000 feet, and it was suspected that the Milky Way had fallen for nine days.
Seeing many tourists having fun in the creek under the waterfall, I couldn't help but want to cool off. I climbed over rocks as high as I did, and touched the clear, cold water, so I folded up my trousers and took off my shoes and walked leisurely in the water. Indeed, the cool spring water and waterfall are the unique beauty of Lushan.
The short and unforgettable trip to Lushan came to an end soon. On the way back, looking at the beautiful and verdant Lushan Mountain, I remembered Su Shi's famous sentence: "I don't know the true face of Lushan, only because I am in this mountain." During my few days in Lushan, I felt the beautiful natural scenery of my motherland.
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And Mathilde, who longs to enter high society, wears a necklace and dreams of happiness, but does not expect that this happiness is so short-lived, and she pays a heavy price for her happiness.
For the money-hungry Grande, having a mountain of gold coins is probably his greatest happiness. But how sad it was when he stared at his chamber in a wheelchair in old age and weakness, and even in the last moments of his life he was obsessed with his gold.
Many times people tend to lose sight of their own happiness and feel that the happiness of others is dazzling. I can't think that the happiness of others may not be suitable for me, and I can't imagine that the happiness of others may be my own grave.
When China's feudal students took "the night of candles in the cave room, and the nomination of the gold list" as the greatest happiness in their lives, and fought for it for life, Wu Jingzi used his pen to paint us a scene of Fan Jin being overjoyed and crazy after the lift, is happiness like this? I doubted it.
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