Write a 400 word essay with the title Better than a relative .

Li'er is a kind and simple little girl, and in Li'er's village, only their family is Han Chinese, and most of the rest are Miao people.

Li'er's neighbor is Grandma Li, whose legs and feet are inconvenient, and her only son works in the city and has no relatives around.

Li'er's mother was a warm-hearted person, and often said to Li'er: "Li'er, Grandma Li is not in good health, you should help Grandma Li do something." Lil always said cheerfully, "OK! ”

One day, after Li'er finished lunch, she thought that there was still a basin of clothes and bed sheets at Grandma Li's house that had not been washed, so she quietly came to Grandma Li's house, for fear of waking up Grandma Li, who was taking a nap, to beat the water, bring a washboard, and began to wash, washing and washing, she felt that washing by hand was too laborious, so she simply took off her shoes and pants, and washed it with her feet, and the more she stepped on it, the more energetic she became. The sound of Li'er washing clothes and sheets woke up Grandma Li, who walked out and watched Li'er wash clothes and sheets. Because Li'er was washing hard, she didn't see Grandma Li, Grandma Li got up, looked at Li'er who was sweating profusely, and cried out in distress

Lil! Li'er was suddenly startled, Grandma Li walked to her side, touched Li'er's face with her hand, and then leaned against Li'er with her face, Li'er was a little embarrassed, Grandma Li said to Li'er: "Good boy, you are closer than my son."

Lil said, "This is what I should do. ”

In the end, both the old and the young laughed happily.

In a remote mountain village, there are many ethnic groups, including Miao, Han, and Hui ......Among them, there is a Miao grandmother, whose wife has long passed away, and her only son works in other places all the year round, and it is rare to go home once, so she has to live alone. The family's financial situation is good, but because the grandmother is old, she is over 70 years old, and her body is unbearable, and she is always unable to do housework.

A little girl who lives nearby is not very old, only ten.

Five or six years old, is a warm-hearted, neighbors say that she is a helpful child, after she learned about the grandmother's situation, she often went to help the grandmother with housework, and the relationship between the two became very good.

One autumn morning, when the autumn breeze was blowing, the little girl went to help the old grandmother with the housework, and went out into the yard, and saw the bucket full of dirty clothes and dirty sheets, so she rolled up her sleeves and washed the clothes without saying a word. The old grandmother sitting in the house, was worried about the clothes and bed sheets that had been changed, suddenly, the sound of washing clothes came from the yard, and she walked to the yard in confusion, and saw the little girl washing clothes, her face was red from the cold, and her hands were stiff, and the old woman was very distressed when she saw it, and immediately walked over, rubbed the little girl, stroked her face, and said kindly: "Thank you, on such a cold day, you still help me wash my clothes, what a sensible child."

The little girl was embarrassed and said, "No thanks, this is what I should do." ”

Although they are not relatives, they are better than relatives.

From the perspective of textbook writing, it seems that the content of this writing is not very close to students, it is not easy to write, and students may not write well. I tried my hand at writing instruction. It focuses on instructing students how to observe the picture and be able to imagine it through the rich picture.

Look at the picture: Who are the people in the picture? What are they doing? From their clothing, grooming, movements, and surroundings, can you tell their age and status?

Looking at the picture composition, the picture cannot show a complete storyline, it must be imagined to make the vivid picture emerge, what else can you think of from this picture? (Why do you do laundry for grandma?) What will they say to each other?

Why are they more like relatives? ......Write a story based on these.

The following are three of the students' assignments for discussion and study on whether they meet the relevant requirements of the assignments.

Better than a loved one. In the Miao village, there is a pair of neighbors, they live in harmony and live a very good life.

The little girl's mother helps the grandmother next door with housework every day, and the little girl was still young at that time and could only help the grandmother sweep the floor, so she was not satisfied with herself and hoped that she would be able to do more things for the grandmother when she grew up. The little girl is looking forward to it, she is finally growing up and can help her grandmother do more.

One day, after the little girl had finished her homework, she suddenly remembered that the old woman's bed sheets and clothes had not been washed, so she quietly picked up the bamboo basket, picked up the basin, went to the river to wash the clothes and bed sheets, and then quietly ran back to the courtyard. The little girl was drying her clean clothes and sheets, and the old grandmother came out excitedly, holding the girl's head in both hands, and put her hot face on the little girl's face, and said with a smile: "You are such a good boy!

Better than a loved one. The girl, Ame, lives with a Dai grandmother, and their lives are happy.

When Ah Mo was five years old, her young and strong father suddenly fell seriously ill and died. Soon after, Am's mother also passed away because of excessive sadness. The death of his parents has brought a big blow to Am, who has no relatives and becomes an orphan, often hiding in a dark corner of the house and crying.

One day, the old grandmother went to the street to catch the market, saw Ah Mo in the corner, and sympathized with her, so she took Ah Mo home and took care of her carefully. Ten years have passed, and Ah Mo is fifteen years old, she is well-behaved and sensible, and often helps her grandmother with housework. In the cold winter, Ama endured the cold and washed the clothes for the grandmother.

She didn't care if her own hands were red from the cold; When the grandmother was sick, Ah Mo made tea, poured water, and fed medicine for the grandmother, and cared for her very much; The grandmother's clothes are torn, Ah Mo never lets the grandmother do it herself, she always sews clothes for her grandmother by herself, her immature ** I don't know how many times she has been punctured by a needle, and she doesn't say a word. He boiled water, chopped wood, cooked, and never let his grandmother ...... itAh Mo and Grandma take care of each other, and life is getting better and better.

Ah Mo and the Dai grandmother are not related, but the relationship between them is better than that of relatives. There is true love everywhere in the world, and true love can stand the test of time and the tempering of years!