This poem needs to be revised! Urgently need to adapt ancient poems! Thank you!

Pondering and asking about today, whether today is the same as yesterday.

Inexplicably distressed and worried, always when the fear of sincerity strikes.

Wave torture is difficult to know itself, and it is ambitious to sing about wine.

A thousand cups are not drunk, but now they are drunk, tears fall without a trace, and their hearts are broken.

People laugh at me for being aspiring. I laugh at the ignorance of the people.

Everyone didn't look at it coldly. When the husband's ambition rises!

It's okay to write! In battle, the rhythm is accurate. At least there's nothing I want to change at my level.

Looking at the present and stopping suddenly, thinking about the road and looking back silently, the difficulty of the grinding days, the faint fear of the pain in the heart, everyone ridiculed me for having no ambition, indifferent and cold eyes, and wanted to put the cup of ambition, but the heart was infinitely worried, a thousand cups are not drunk today, the man is not broken with tears, I laugh at everyone ignorance, who knows the husband's heart.

According to your request, according to the original poem, change it to the following:

Lost and confused about today's events, and repetition of yesterday.

Leaking rain, frost, cold and sorrow, the sea of clouds is unprovoked and dense fog locks.

When the wine is full of ambitions, there are many obstacles to the (di) of arrows.

A thousand cups are not drunk today, and tears fall without a trace.

Everyone laughs at me for Sai Adou, and I laugh at everyone for not being jade.

Green plum boiled wine is cold-eyed, if there is no ambition is stupidity.

2) Seven-character poems.

I think about the past with melancholy, and I don't see many good dreams today!

Ask you where you can relax, and hide your tears with sadness!

Du Kang accompanied me into a dream, who did I say a little bitterness?

The soul of Jiangdong is still there, and the man should be wrapped in a horse corpse!

If there is any inappropriateness or other request, please ask!

It's still well written, but I personally feel that it's too straightforward, and the expression seems cumbersome, I don't understand it, I hope it helps

Stunned by this matter, bitter tears welled up.

If you want to reverse yesterday's road, how can you be embarrassed?

Raise a glass to pour out your sorrows, how can you be a man!

Regardless of idleness, it is a sleeping dragon.

What kind of do you want? Is it funny? Or is it original?

There's a bunch of funny ones below.,There's another song that's original.,See if it's appropriate?

Roasted sweet potatoes in front of the bed, roasted and roasted.

Raise your head to eat one, bow your head and paste two.

There is also an original song:

Why do you need to ask when you meet, see the sages and think together.

I hate to meet you early, and the evening breeze blows the golden bottle.

The snow faded on both sides, and the people on the riverside began to appear.

I only hope that you will return to the reward, and the pear blossom is easy to melt.

Lamei spits fragrant, and people appear on the riverside.

Looking forward to the return day, enjoy the March flowers together.

The pear blossoms are beginning to bloom, and the birds on the riverside are crisp.

On the day of your return, watch the March snow together.

1. It should rhyme, that is, the last word of the sentence is similar to the finals;

2. Pay due attention to the arrangement of the voice;

3. In general, try not to appear the same words in the poem.

The theme of this short poem is clear, but the layers are confusing, and the wording needs to be rich. If you change it, it will be very moving, and it will not be your poem when you write it.

The ship waits in the harbor for the wind to lift its sails,Flowers in the green bushes waiting for the rain and dew to waterThe neighing of horses awaits thousands of rivers and mountainsI'm standing alone in the middle of a sea of peopleI'm waiting to see you again.

I can refuse to hit an umbrella in the rain,I can refuse to drink and smoke when I'm lonelyI can even stay up all night and refuse to sleepJust can't be powerless to say no to youNever-ending thoughts.

Butterflies are waiting for the breath of flowersThe egret is waiting for the fish swimming by the lakeThe long night was quietly waiting for meI have been silently waiting for you. When it comes to writing, it's all about youClose your eyes and smile at youIt's all you in the back of your mind at all timesMissing is a sharp carving knifeKeep carving every bit about you,Missing is a sharp arrow that pierces the heartI know I've lost. Lost the meaning of real survival,

From then on, I had to do it over and over againLicking the deepening wounds,Painted with brighter and more melancholyRecall.

This is a short poem based on your theme and my own feelings, I hope it can be used as a reference for you, and I hope that you can complete your own poems independently.

Wait for the phoenix flute in front of the mountain, wait for the fish and geese behind the mountain, and wait for you in the sea of people