I made a song homework Yushuyuan, please help revise Thank you, come master.

The green grass is beautiful, and the fragrance of flowers is left around.

Just ask a few classmates;

Can the fragrance of books be contained in the heart?

What do you want? What do you want?

Knowledge makes people great.

The green grass is beautiful, the fragrance of flowers lingers around the heart, how can there be a lack of friends in the wonderful land;

Can you take it by yourself?

Helpless? Helpless?

Ten years of cold windows.

Your poems are good now, but in ancient times, two points are missing.

The first point of rhyme, no rhyme, no matter how good the poem is, it is a waste.

The second point is that the words you use are too modern and too straightforward.

Sadistic and merciful, hopeful, satisfied.

As the saying goes, "write poems and fill in the words", Song words have a word grid, and the word lz seems to be filled in according to the word grid of "Like a Dream Order", I don't know right?

Like a dream. 仄 平平仄 (rhyme).

仄 平平仄 (rhyme).

Ping Ping (sentence).

仄 平平仄 (rhyme).

平仄 (rhyme) 平仄 (stacked).

仄 平平仄 (rhyme).

The grass is green.

Bursts of light incense tempt people.

Just a classmate is a teenager.

Penetrate the country at the same time.

Just. Just.

I can stay today.

Sketch it out, throw bricks and lead the jade, I feel that your theme is very good, but there is a little bit of lacking, such as 1 The word is heavy, 2 It is better to add some modifiers, 3 It is an antique word, so it can't be too straightforward, even if the meaning of the expression is this, then it should be covered up a little, and it is better to give people some aftertaste.

I think the rhythm of the original work is a hundred times stronger than that of the torture of love!

The words you write don't reach the point, and you are still qualified to say that others don't have rhyme, no matter how good they are, it's a waste?

Look at what you wrote yourself, flipping through those few sentences.

It's disgusting to watch!

I don't need me, I just can't see that some people are too self-righteous!

It's just a matter of a few words going back and forth. Ignorant!

The jade tree does not fall, God bless China - the poem recites "Together".

If we say that Wenchuan left a wound to the sons and daughters of China two years ago.

He has just healed in the New Year in the land of Bashu.

Once again, the claws of death slashed my mother's cheek.

In an instant, the jade tree turned into ruins and was devastated.

At that moment I heard the majestic plateau crying.

The whole of China was shocked and heartbroken by your cry.

More than a thousand aftershocks followed.

My elderly Tibetan grandmother, my young children.

How can you bear it?

My handsome Kham man.

How thou hast stood tall in the tremor of the earth.

At this moment, the distant jade tree is our burned heart.

The sensation of pain went straight down to an altitude of 3,000 miles.

Suffocating everyone's breath this spring.

Your wounds are our pains.

Our pain is your teardrops.

How difficult it is for me to prosper the nation, my vast land of China.

It has always been a whole of life that is connected by flesh and blood.

Together, we are with Yushu, and the party and the people are together.

Behold, the past week, 1.3 billion pairs of affectionate arms.

How did they stretch out to the bloody plateau together, rushed to help life, passed on hope, and how did they bring the children of Yushu who were bruised all over their bodies.

Tightly hugged into the warm embrace of the big family of the motherland.

From the general secretary's trip to return home in a hurry after interrupting his foreign visit.

I saw that there was no distance between time and space in the love jade tree.

From the faces of the Sichuan team members who arrived in Yushu first.

I have understood the boundless love and the meaning of renewal.

The jade tree will not fall, and the jade tree will always stand upright.

I have heard you at the source of the Great River civilization.

The rattle of Princess Wencheng's entry into Tibet woke up the desert Gobi.

I have embraced you in the immortal epic of King Gesar.

The bells of the thousand-year-old temple in Jiegu Town strike the legend of history.

Your beautiful life is like a Gesang flower blooming on the plateau.

It is closely attached to the earth of spring.

Together, we are with Yushu, and the military and civilians are side by side.

My fellow human beings who are suffering in the tent at this moment.

Please believe it.

You are your mother's most beloved steed.

You are the eagle that the motherland is flying.

With us, there is your new green home, a beautiful new home.

Looking back at the 98 flood fight and the 3 years of SARS.

There are also 2008 ice and snow disasters and 512 large**.

Which disaster fight is not the condensation of China's great love across thousands of mountains and rivers.

Which disaster is not the legend of the earth where fifty-six nations build a new homeland today, in front of your world's largest Nima pile.

We vow to use the power of the whole country to free up the splendor of your tomorrow.

We're going to make the eagle with folded wings.

On the heavenly road through the cold zone, auspicious wishes are sown again.

We're going to get the wounded horses.

Soar across the rainbow sky on the blessed Qinghai-Tibet Plateau.

Together, we are with Yushu, brothers and sisters of all nationalities are together, and at this moment, we have to tell the future loudly.

Any disaster leaves us with nothing but tears.

Even if the pain takes away everyone's tears.

What you get can only be an ending.

That is the plateau of life again and again.

Sacred in the hands of the unyielding sons and daughters of China.

Together, we are with Yushu, victory and the motherland together.

If it's the first time you're writing words, that's not a bad idea. First of all, as said upstairs, as Song Ci, you have to write the word card, this is "Like a Dream Order". As for the words, there are requirements for the flat and rhyme feet, if the Chinese teacher is not very tricky, we don't care about the middle of the rhyme.

"Dream Order" requires rhyme, and except for five or six sentences of rhyme, other sentences cannot be repeated. According to your first sentence, I put the rhyme you can press, and the last word of each sentence that needs to rhyme can only be selected from below, and don't use a word twice. You make changes according to what I said first, and I'll take a look at it for you.

Since I can't help people write, you'll have to revise it yourself, and I can only tell you how.

Twenty-five have] there is a wine head mother [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] woman [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] after Liu You fights the dog for a long time [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] thick hand shou [(Shang Lu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] right by the puppet to go to Fu [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same ] Nine Hou blame serval roar broom dirt uncle Niu Lotus rotten elbow leek mu [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] cut the temptation of the peony [(Shanglu Xia Wu) rhyme with the same] 缶酉 Gou ugly buckle knock a certain Shou Shou Jiu grant ravage [You Yuntong] kneading [You Yuntong] Twisting and nagging the coupling of the juggling and twisting the thumb of the dough and shaking the steep worm basket swarthy and swarthy[(Shanglu and Xiawu) rhyme].

Twenty-six You] You Hou is for sale [You Yun Tong] Shou [You Yun Tong] Xiu Xiu Su [Xing Naksha] Playing the Beast Leaking Rich [Yu Yun Tong] Ugly Hunting Day, Kou Mao, Old Zhou Zhou Sleeve, Xiu Yu, Fu Fu [Again] Save the Stable, Stinky You, Right Confined Beans (Dou Bean), Dou Thin Gargling Curse, Guilt and Wrinkles, Sniffing, Slippery Iron, Teasing Thoroughly, and Reading [Sentence Reading] Servant Deputy [Yu Yun Tong] Rusty Vulture Crepe (Mouth Zhu) Moxibustion Criticism of Kou Xuan [Verb].

There is a person downstairs who is right, you should use word cards, don't create your own, that is a matter of literary masters.

There is also a flat rhyme. You use "Dream Order", the format should be 6,6,5,6,2,2,6, don't make jokes.

The grass is delicate, and half of the flower smell remains.

If you want to ask your classmates, do you have the fragrance of books in your heart?

What do you want? What do you want?

Knowledge makes people great.

The green grass is beautiful, and the fragrance of flowers is around the ring, and I asked a few classmates;

Have you ever left the fragrance of books in your heart?

What do you want? What do you want?

Knowledge makes a person excellent.

First, since it is a Song word, what is a word card? The second, I feel that there is no logic.

1. Multiple choice questions (1 point per question, 15 questions in total).

1. "Four Masters of the Early Tang Dynasty" refers to (a).

a.Wang Bo, Yang Jiong, Lu Zhaolin, Luo B., Wang BWang Bo, Yang Jiong, Shen Jiong, Song Zhiwen CShen Yanqi, Song Zhiwen, Lu Zhaolin, Luo Bin Wang DWang Bo, Yang Jiong, Wei Zheng, Chen Ziang2, in the early Tang Dynasty, it was (d) that "the solitary article overwhelmed the whole Tang Dynasty".

a.Wang Bo's "Send Du Shaofu to Shuzhou" bLu Zhaolin's "Ancient Meaning of Chang'an".

c.Chen Ziang's "Song of Dengyouzhou" dZhang Ruoxu's "Spring River Flower Moonlit Night".

3. Continue to write Wang Wei's poem "Weichuan Tianjia": Tianfu hoes to the lotus, and the words of meeting are still in the air. （a ）a.

That is, this envy is leisurely, and it is faint bThe moonrise frightens the mountain birds, and the spring stream cThe stream is lonely, and it has opened and fallen d

The bright moon shines among the pines, and the Qingquan stone is upstream4, and the author of "Yan Ge Xing" is (b).

a.Cen Shen BGao Shi CWang Changling DWang Zhihuan 5, the allusion of "scrutiny" comes from the poet (C).

a.Han Yu BMeng CGia Island DLi He.

6. Bai Ju's representative work of sentimental poetry is (c).

a."Song of Long Hatred" and "Pipa Xing" b"Song of Long Hatred" and "Farewell to the Ancient Grass".

c."Pipa Xing" and "Farewell to the Ancient Grass" d"Song of Long Hatred" and "Charcoal Seller".

7. "This situation can be recalled, but it was already lost at that time" from (b) aLi Shangyin, "Night Rain Sending North" bLi Shangyin's "Jin Se".

c.Du Mu "Three Quatrains of the Qing Palace" DDu Mu "Bo Qinhuai".

8. The production of the word is related to the popular **(b) at that time.

a.Yale BFolk music cQingle DFeast.

9. Later generations commented: "In the early Song Dynasty, the ancestors did not describe the two masters, and the charter was in the middle." The word "center" refers to (c).

a.Li Jing BLi Yu C

Feng Y. DWen Tingyun 10, the first sentence of Yan Shu's famous work is "a new song and a glass of wine", and the word card of this poem is (a) aHuanxi Sha B

Butterfly love flower cTasha Line DWater Dragon Yin 11, Qin Guan Zi (B).

a.Zizhan BLess travel cJain DFang Hui.

12, there are three wonderful descriptions at the end of "Qingyu Case, Ling Bo is not Hengtang Road", which are (C) ALast night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went up to the tall building alone, looking at the end of the worldThe mountains and rivers are empty, and the falling flowers and wind and rain hurt the spring even more, so it is better to take pity on the people in front of you

A Sichuan tobacco, the city is full of wind and flocculents, and the plum is yellow when it rains.

d.It is expected that the intestines will be broken every year, the bright moon night, and the short Matsuoka.

13. Li Qingzhao has an essay on words, called (a).

a.Treatise on Words, b"Words Say" c"Words" dThe Analects

14. Jiang Kui's "Yangzhou Slow" in "Du Lang Junsheng" refers to (a) aDu Xianyan BDu Fu CDu Mu DDu Xunhe 15, "like a Qibao tower, dazzling, broken and dismantled, not into fragments" describes whose word (c).

a.Li Qingzhao BZhou Bangyan CJiang Kui DWu Wenying.

The answers I provide to you, I can guarantee that they are accurate.

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Du Fu's poetry is very rich, simply put, it is worried about the country and the people. Just look at the higher education version of "The History of Chinese Literature". The following is also about Xin Qiji.

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This is followed by a short answer to the ......It's only five points.

How do you do that?

1."Yang Flower" and "Fireworks" are related to willow, "Yang Flower" can evoke the reader's association with Wang Changling (wandering far away), and "Fireworks" can express the scene of Yangzhou in March (full of flowers).

2.Entrust "my" "sorrow" to the moon like a crop, as an empathetic confidant. Teleported to the distant west of Yoro through the evening breeze.

The author watched the lonely sail of his friend's boat drift away until it disappeared at the end of the clear water and blue sky, and still looked at the scene where the sky and water meet, and expressed his reluctance to leave his affection.

1."Yang Flower" and "Fireworks" are related to willow, "Yang Flower" can evoke the reader's association with Wang Changling (suffering from debasement, loneliness and frustration), and "Fireworks" can express the scene of Yangzhou in March (prosperous and busy).

2. The author who heard that Wang Changling moved to the left and Long Biaoyao had a bold imagination to express his sympathy, care and concern for his misfortune to his friends in a novel way, which is good for the artistic technique of personifying the objective scene.

Qi out of the singing (three songs) ......02 Tanka Line (2 songs) ......08 Qiu Hu Xing (two songs) ......11 Good deeds (three songs) ......15 A total of ......... cold18 steps out of the summer gate (five chapters) ......19

Ha. Cao Cao's poems all have haha ridiculous.