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At night, the enemy stared out of the small window of the turret at the gloomy reed pond, and the stars in the sky seemed to be immersed in water and were about to drip. It is only in the middle of the night that the sound of waterfowl flying and singing in the reed pond is made, and during the day they hide tightly in their nests to avoid the shelling. The reed is still drilling up so fiercely, and the target seems to be the sky.
On a clear moonlit night, people's eyes are sharper, and they can see a small boat coming out of the reed pond, in the lake, like a reed leaf, rushing to the southeast.
The moon sagged and floated in the sky like water.
The moon had set, and there was some rustling wind in the reed pond after midnight.
The next day, at noon, it was very muggy. On the day of a red sun, a layer of smoke floated on the water.
There was no figure in the lake, only a mass of white silk-like water birds, which also flew north from the devil and fell under the big lotus leaf to rest and cool.
The water here is as flat as a mirror, as clear as a blue sky, and the elongated aquatic plants float gently at the bottom of the water.
There, fresh reed flowers, a patch of purple velvet, are fluttering in the wind.
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1. Portrait description:
Supporting the boat was an old man of nearly sixty years old, ,......The old man, wearing only a pair of blue shabby shorts, stood on the stern of the boat and held a penny in his hand. The old man had no flesh on his body, and he was as thin as an old osprey. But the tanned face, the short white beard is particularly energetic, and the pair of deep-set eyes are particularly bright, and it is rare to see such sharp and bright eyes, unless they are on Baiyangdian.
Write about the old man, although he is old, but he should be strong when he is old, pay attention to describing his eyes, and highlight his ability and shrewdness.
2. Language description.
You will give me everything, and I will give me everything on the water, all insurance"; "Nothing, let's sleep in peace"; "Don't be afraid, wash it, what a handsome child! "Don't be afraid, the searchlight on the little steamer, it can't shine on us. ”;Don't be afraid, he can't beat us!
3. Action description:
P15 "The old man's body jumped up and ,......He grabbed the stern of the boat with his hand and floated a few steps before pushing forward desperately. —showed that he was surprised by the accident.
p17"A thin old man, wearing only a pair of torn shorts, stood at the stern of the boat, holding on to the penny, while his hands were busy peeling off the fat and large lotus flowers, and throwing them into his mouth one by one. —show the composure of the old man.
The action description focuses on that heroic act, he plays tricks on the devil, lures the devil into the bait, raises the penny and hits the devil's head fiercely, causing the devil's head to bleed.
4. Psychological description:
P16 – Shows that the old man blames himself for the bleeding of Daling.
The above depictions are all frontal depictions, and there are also side depictions:
For example, "Every evening, the singing in the reed pond is still so loud, unlike the hungry people singing, the fragrance of rice and fatty fish still wafts out of the reed pond." Another example is to write about Nitsubishi's suspicion and distrust of the old man, and write about the heroic behavior of the old man on the side. There is also a strict blockade of the enemy, and it is also written from the side that the old man is capable and shrewd.
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The scenery of Luhuadang is described as follows:
1) Isn't the silvery white reed flower like an endless white snow? The metaphor is too cold; Is it like a white cloud? This metaphor is too far-reaching; Like a piece of brilliant tassel?
This parable is too hollow ......I stopped imagining and let myself have a sweet dream on the picturesque reeds.
2) On the river bank, some of the reeds are sparse, some are dense, the dense reeds are dancing with the posture of the Na, slim and elegant, the shadows are swaying, I broke off a reed full of reeds, waving it, under the blowing of the wind, the reeds are like the goddess scattering flowers, and they are fluttering overhead!
3) The reeds in my hometown are still blooming year after year, which touches my distant memories. I want to go home to see the beautiful and quiet scenery of the water town by the Grand Canal and the Llama Lake, and once again approach the reeds in my hometown, smell the fragrance of the reeds in my hometown, listen to the chirping birds in the reeds, and enjoy the magnificent scenery of the large and dense reeds in the wind.
4) This reed swing is a masterpiece of the combined force of nature and artificiality. The brickyard dug up most of the earth, and a spring flowed out of the ground, and during the three years of natural disasters, the torrential rain turned the place into an ocean, and the rhizomes of the reeds spread out of the ground, gathering strength and jumping out of the water in a vigorous posture.
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As follows:
In the northern part of the Shanxi-Chahar-Hebei border area, there is a river returning to the hometown, and there are many reeds growing in the river. There is a small village by the river. When the reeds bloom, from a distance, the yellow-green reeds seem to be covered with a thick layer of snow.
As soon as the wind blows, the goose-feathered reeds fly up leisurely, covering these dozens of small houses in soft reeds.
The sun has long since set. The floating clouds floating in the blue sky are like pieces of red silk, reflected on the Huixiang River, like a big cockscomb flower. The reed flowers of the reed pond are blown up by the wind and flutter on them.
The river is quiet, and the river is flowing down in a whirlpool. Bugs chirp in the grass nest.
The beautiful scenery of Luhua Village", the author hints here that "the beautiful rivers and mountains of the motherland are being ravaged by the Japanese invaders"; "The beautiful scenery of the Huixiang River", the author used "the floating clouds in the sky are reflected on the Huixiang River, like a big cockscomb flower" to set off people's nostalgia for the rain.
The general function of scene description is to exaggerate the tension and promote the development of the plot, and lay the foundation for the development and outcome of the following story.
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Luhuadang" environmental description sentence:
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