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Buy more ham sausages, pies, bread, milk, etc., and that's all you can eat.

Or buy some beans for a snack.

Now that the car is already packed, how did you get a spot as a primary school student? This is not scientific, so it should be changed to not many people when you start getting on the train, but after a few stops, the number of people suddenly increased. The ending is a bit far-fetched, and it could be over-embellished a bit.

I am a 10-year-old elementary school student and I am in the second grade of 5th grade this year. I was a happy primary school student, but I was so sad and angry because of my busy studies and my parents' mouths that I was so angry. Every day when I finish my homework and turn on the TV, a sentence comes from me:

Write some more homework and don't write it until you eat! Or I'll beat you! Continue after eating! "At night, I turned on the TV, and then my mother turned on Hubei TV and watched. I can't watch TV anymore.

If I had been given some freedom, I wouldn't be like this.

Give me some freedom!

Walking alone on the forest path, the path has transformed into a bleak yellow. The trees on both sides began to shed their leaves in large areas, and the bleak wind mixed with crushed teardrops sent the fallen leaves to the distant sky. Autumn is really a sad season, like a shadow covered by melancholy, so thick that it can't be dissolved, and it can't be faded.

I've never liked this kind of confusion and sadness, even though it's inevitable from the changing seasons.

In the middle of the yellow leaves, I inadvertently raised my head and saw a white bird vibrating its wings in the sky. Is it going to go to **? One volt together, one high and one low, one close, the smooth and perfect trajectory instantly attracted my attention.

It is a peculiar way of flying, not a straight extension, not always high and high, but a combination of ups and downs, high and low. As if chasing something, and as if abandoning something, the light and white wings swept across the sky, leaving only a very connotative back to me.

A gust of autumn wind swept in, rolling up the yellow leaves flying all over the sky, have they ever bloomed intoxicating smiles in spring, and have they also enjoyed the caress of the sun in summer? Now, that's long gone. But this is the inevitability of the cycle of the four seasons, just like the trajectory of a bird flying in the sky, with ups and downs.

There are highs and lows. Prosperity and withering in nature is a common thing, it will not always be a spring full of flowers, nor will it always be a cold winter, only the four seasons continue to cycle, prosperity and decay continue to go back and forth, there is this blue and full of vitality of the beautiful world.

When I think of this, I am relieved. I finally understood the philosophy of flying birds: no bird will never fly high, but no bird will always fly so high, only by flying together can we fly farther.

In life, no one will always be in adversity, and no one will always enjoy glory. What we have to do is to have an indifferent heart, not to let adversity wear out our courage to overcome setbacks, and not to let happiness wear out our self-motivated heart. Do this, and you will find that the trajectory of your life will become an eternal landscape.

There is such a great writer in my country: he often wears a simple Chinese-style gown, his short hair stands straight like a brush, and his thick beard becomes a "one" character ...... official bookHe is Lu Xun.

I didn't know Lu Xun before, but I often heard it from adults. Speaking of Lu Xun, I know that he is a great writer, and I don't have a deep understanding. This semester, through the study of a group of texts, I really got close to Lu Xun and understood Lu Xun.

Reading "Juvenile Leap Land" made me see such a Lu Xun: his family was in a good situation, but he was in a dark feudal society, he could only be locked up in a high-walled compound, and he was deeply dissatisfied with the environment, so he envied the well-informed Leap Land and loved the colorful rural life.

Reading "My Uncle Mr. Lu Xun" made me see such a Lu Xun: he is very busy, he has a lot of opportunities, but he can take time out of his busy schedule to translate fairy tales for his niece, ask her about her learning and teach her to read and study seriously, not sloppy. Mr. Lu Xun was very humorous, optimistic, and actively fought against reactionary forces.

He also cares about the toiling masses and thinks more for others and less for himself.

Reading "One Side" made me see such a Lu Xun: he cares about progressive young people and worries about the country and the people. He was tired, his health had been swallowed up by hard work without rest at all, he had given his life to our nation, he was a warrior who grew older and stronger!

Reading "Some People" made me see such a Lu Xun: although he has passed away, his spirit will always remain in the hearts of others. He loves and hates clearly:

He hated the reactionaries, but he poured out his support and concern for the toiling masses who did not have enough food and clothing. "Heng Mei coldly pointed at Qianfu, bowed his head and was willing to be a son of a cow" is his true portrayal.

After studying this group of texts, Lu Xun left a deep impression on my heart: he is a diligent person who thinks more for others and less for himself. He served the people wholeheartedly and was willing to be a public servant of the people.

After the study of this group of texts, I learned about Lu Xun. I think I should also study hard and carry forward the spirit of Lu Xun: care for others, save time, read more books, write more, contribute to the country, and become the pillars of the motherland.

1＋1＝2。Ours, I'm here today! End this afternoon, go today, go today,

Hello. Comments: "Mother's love" is not a very new topic, but the author can condense this silent mother's love flowing in the bottom of his heart between the lines, activate mother's love into a silent spring, and inadvertently penetrate into the author's study, life and heart!

It is this casual outpouring that precisely reveals the author's sincere feelings.

The language is fluent, beautiful, and well-conceived. The simple article vividly expresses the thick and dignified mother's love and the psychological process of "me" feeling mother's love, which is a rare masterpiece.

Hopefully, thank you.

The article is well-written and beautifully written. The general idea of the paragraph is clear and clear, and the rhetorical devices such as comparison and metaphor are used appropriately and freely, which makes the article vivid and moving, and the article does a good job of echoing the front and back, starting and ending the topic, and the whole is good.

Suggestion: Since your central topic is to write"Affection", so I think that if these two examples of motherhood are replaced by a love story about a father or other relatives who live with parents, it would be more reflective of this big theme, and not just a small element of "maternal love".