In the composition of the first year of junior high school, the teacher asked me to write 200 words,

It is very easy to write, for example, you can use plants and animals to enter the topic, green pine is strong, bamboo is higher than noble, lotus is out of the mud and not stained, cold plum is cold and spring dawn and so on, of course, it is best to write unique, such as cactus, lonely and lonely in the boundless desert, but do not give up, not cheap, endurance and strength are unmatched

First suppress and then promote, you can first write a negative statement, such as this animal and plant is very ugly, no one likes it Think for yourself, just finished eating, and your brain is not very bright Hehe.

Structure: 1. Introduction, that is, the first suppression.

2. The text, raise it, focus on the character of this kind of thing, what is worth learning.

3. By extension, how should we behave.

200 words is still very good = =

You can borrow a thing to write about it, and get something worth learning from it.

You can write that you thought your mother was very chatty at first, but later found out that your mother loved you.

200 words was too easy, our teacher asked us to write 300 words.

Promise words. Supporting things and words is to rely on a specific "thing" of the individual. As a result, this "thing" has a certain symbolic meaning, and becomes the sustenance of the author's interests, wishes, or ideals.

The author's personal "aspirations", with the help of this specific "thing", are expressed more subtly, more perfectly, more fully, and more infectiously. For example, "pine, bamboo, plum" is often used to express noble aspirations; "Dirt" is often used to express feelings of humility; "Candles" are often used to celebrate the spirit of selfless giving.

The meaning of "to" can be described from ambition, taste, ideal, pursuit, and performance. Express thoughts and feelings by depicting the image of specific things (mostly used in poetry and prose).

Summer is quietly gone, and autumn is coming unconsciously in the sound of geese and autumn, fluttering and falling leaves. In the early morning, the mischievous fog girl put on a thin layer of gauze for Mother Earth, and when she entered the school, she was shown a large lawn in front of her, the green lawn of the past had shown signs of decay, and the two pines and cypresses in the middle of the lawn were still standing tall like two mighty warriors in the autumn wind. The dew drops on the leaves of the trees are refracted by the sunlight and smile at us like a pair of small eyes.

The rockery in the center of the lawn is locked in a thick fog, like a fairyland. There is a thin layer of mist floating in the pool below the rockery, and the fish in the pool swim lazily, like old people walking leisurely in the courtyard. The water of the pool is cool and cool, and reaching out to touch it makes people feel cool.

And lo and behold! There is also a sleeping Buddha in the far side of the rockery, as if sleeping in a thick fog. Autumn mornings on campus are refreshing.

At noon, the warm autumn sun shone on us, and the playground was full of jumping students. Some were slapping the ball, chasing each other; Some are scrambling to play basketball; some in skipping rope and hide and seek; Others are catching butterflies and making specimens. The campus at noon in autumn is a harvest season, and there is a vibrant scene everywhere.

As the sun set, the students all went home from school one after another. The students cleaned the entire teaching building, giving the whole teaching building a new look. The teaching building shines in the orange sunlight, as if it is a golden lobby.

The pool under the hexagonal pavilion is illuminated by the sun, the goldfish in the pool are leaping, splashing out ten thousand lotus flowers, the water surface instantly becomes sparkling, this happy ripple is the proud masterpiece of the sunset, the calm water surface is not broken by the sunset?

At dusk, the lights are on. Night is approaching, the earth is slowly sleeping, the cleaning workers sweep the fallen leaves, the sound of rustling, in the autumn night, like a harmonious music, to welcome another new tomorrow for the school.

If you want to promote and suppress :

In composition, this technique is used to express dissatisfaction with the thing or person being described. And then, in general, always in one or two small things, there was a sudden change of opinion. But in the process of transformation, the emotions are natural and can resonate with the reader.

The effect of this technique is that it can well express the author's abundant feelings, make the plot changeable, form ups and downs, and create sharp contrasts, which is easy to make the reader feel suddenly enlightened and leave a deeper impression in the process of reading. Example: Lu Xun's "Fan Ainong".

Entrustment of words: Entrustment of words is to express one's ambition and willingness through the description and narration of objects. Function: Sing things first and then words, make the article vivid, vivid, and more able to touch the reader's heartstrings. Examples: Xu Dishan's "Falling Peanuts", Yuan Ying's "Poplar".