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The first sentence is good, the book has an ending, taking the book as an initiative, giving people the same as if the book is a living object, he slowly tells you a moving story in front of you, with a deep and deep voice, narrowing the distance with the reader, and there is a sense of intimacy. In the second sentence, it feels like it has been ended, and there is an author between the book and the reader, which is not conducive to the emotional communication with the reader.
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Personally, I feel that the first sentence focuses on the content of the book, for example, if you write a book, then the focus is on the improvement of the plot; And the second game focuses on the process of writing your book, which is roughly equivalent to - finally finished, and the effect is probably like this.
If the book is coherent and the writing process is not long and tortuous, it is better to plagiarize the first sentence; If the content of the book is discrete, e.g. a collection of sources, the collation of some stories, and the process of collation is tortuous and difficult, then the second sentence should be better.
In general, the first sentence expresses the end of the content of the book, and the second sentence expresses the end of writing a book in real life. (This is the book you wrote by default).
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There are grammatical errors in both sentences.
The first sentence: the subject is "book", the predicate is "there is", and the object is "ending", which does not make sense.
Either say "the storyline of this book has a happy ending", so that the subject is replaced with "storyline", so that there is a solution.
The second sentence: The subject is "book" and the predicate is "end", which also does not make sense.
Either change it to "the exhibition of this book has ended successfully", so that the subject becomes "the exhibition" and there is a solution.
Summary: 1. The "complete" in the first sentence is used as a definite sentence; The word "perfect" in the second sentence is used as an adverbial and should be changed to "perfectly".
2. "Happy ending" generally refers to the storyline; "Successfully concluded" generally refers to the event.
The class has an axe, please advise.
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The book has a happy ending" is better, because the "over" in the second sentence feels a bit bleak and the emotional tone is low.
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I think the latter sentence is better.。。。 Prove that the book is valuable. But the previous sentence only shows that the ending is good, but the process is not good.
Trust me... He is a poor student of the Chinese department.
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Well, looking for test papers on the Internet, it's the information age, and it's too easy to get a test paper.
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I don't understand! Unclear! I don't know what I'm talking about? I saw**. But I couldn't read it. Meaning.
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Wrong place: Inspired by the back, responding to the school's strengthened physical exercise.
The right way to change: Be inspired and respond to the school's sports program to actively strengthen physical exercise.
In various sports competitions, Chinese athletes broke one world record after another, which greatly encouraged the students. In response to the school's call to strengthen sports training, the students actively participated in the training activities of "Sunshine Sports".
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Divisible by 11, the Leaky Oak knows that his score is a multiple of 11.
Brother, in fact, I have encountered this kind of thing, and I have thought of a seemingly seamless reason, but as a person who has come over, I remind you that paper can't contain fire, and my parents are so old, what storms have they not experienced? In the end, the lie is exposed, but it will discount your impression, be considerate of the poor mother, find out the matter, determine the relationship, even if it is difficult for the parents to agree to live together for a short time, but after the relationship is clarified, even if you make up a white lie, saying that you live with a colleague, your parents may also know in their hearts, at least you don't have much guilt.
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