I have a passion for creation, but the compositions I write are always average, and I ask for advice

It's very common, don't get too excited when you're writing, take a deep breath, calm your mind, think about what you want to write about, and then come up with a topic, and then write around it, using a lot of rhetorical devices. After the level of writing is improved, you can use foreshadowing and other methods to sublimate the article.

The first year of junior high school students answered.

Handmade. Hope.

The problem is a bit similar (I studied hard, but my grades were not top-notch). First of all, there is the question of methodology, which is different from the essay in that it considers less of the idea and more of the structure, and in this regard, it needs to be constantly practiced and summarized. Second, from the perspective of literary literacy, it is best to have talent in writing, and secondly, to have accumulation, reading more is very helpful, when I was a child, I felt that my reading volume was relatively large in the class, so I was complacent, and then gradually broadened my horizons, I realized that it is worth reading not only those that are often mentioned masterpieces.

In addition, if you read more and practice consistently, I believe that your writing will never be bad. Finally, there is the idea and conception of the article, which requires a comprehensive test of your reading, experience, imagination and observation. However, this is not particularly important for essays that are not usually contested.

Let's start with a rough outline, and if you have any other questions, you can continue to reply to me.

It should be an old story, such as Red Rock or the like, that reminds you of the difficult times in the past, and you can find motivation to work hard from your children.

Personally, I believe that 5,000 years of culture is used for reference, not for show-off; Patriotism is the fuel in the heart, not the firecrackers in the sky.

If you really have patriotic enthusiasm, you don't need to say much, just write your true feelings; If you are trying to perfunctory the teacher, then I suggest you write it like this:

First of all, list several humiliating events in modern times, such as the Treaty of Xincho, the Treaty of Shimonoseki, the Treaty of Nanjing, and so on;

Then, express the admiration for the heroes who saved the country and the people, and derive the reminiscence of the history of 5,000 years of civilization, and the pride should be on the paper;

Finally, shouting slogans and praising the better, such as: Our young people in the new era must work hard for the great rejuvenation of the motherland, we must carry forward the tradition of hard struggle of our ancestors, and let the motherland always shine in the east of the world, and so on;

In this way, whether you are really patriotic or not, it is enough to wear the national flag and go around the field for three weeks. bar.

Patriotic, sprinkled, filling the heavens and the earth,

Wow, it's not just 200 words, it's more than 300 words, it's speechless, it's not bad to give you five points with less blood in the future, hehe, add me as a friend 886 goodbye.

Enthusiasm makes youth splendid The reason why youth has become the best memory in most people's lives is because the years were full of vitality and vigor. The vitality of youth is based on optimism about life, and the optimistic belief in life comes from the enthusiasm for life and the world. Enthusiasm, let the youth shine.

The attitude of society towards everyone is the same, the difference is everyone's attitude towards society. Enthusiasm, or indifference, small differences can make a huge difference. Three wallbuilders were at work, and a child asked them what they were doing.

The first person said angrily, "Don't you see?" Drywall!

The second man looked up and said, "Oh, I'm going to build a skyscraper." The third man said with a smile as he whistled

I'm going to make this a big city! "Years later, the first man was still building a wall on the construction site; The second person sits in the office and is a designer; And the third person is the boss of the two of them. Passion for the cause has led to successful entrepreneurs one after another; A passion for truth has given rise to countless great scholars.

The famous physicist Galileo Galilei, who would have thought that he would initially embark on a path of studying medicine. The young Galileo had little interest in medicine, and during his medical school days, he diligently studied science, physics, and other natural sciences, questioning many "truths" in the eyes of the world. For example, in the famous "Iron Ball Falling to the Ground" experiment, Galileo taught the world a vivid lesson with his passionate pursuit of truth, and passionately created a great physicist!

Today, under all kinds of pressure from teachers and friends, it is difficult for students to raise their enthusiasm for learning. But even if you lose your enthusiasm for your studies, you must not lose your enthusiasm for life. Passion for life is the premise of everything.

I have a friend who never pushes himself, relaxes when he is tired of studying, and does some small handicrafts to adjust his life. She is passionate about these small knick-knacks, which both relax the mind and re-energize her motivation to learn. Naturally, with her enthusiasm, she not only got a pair of skillful hands, but also kept her grades steadily upstream.

We always feel that other people's youth is like fire, and only our own is bleak. Everyone has the same youth, it is not difficult to let youth shine brilliantly, what we have to do is to let everyone live with enthusiasm every day. Enthusiasm can make achievements, and enthusiasm makes youth brilliant!

Teenagers have gone through a gorgeous turn and entered the world of youth.

Youth is synonymous with youth and ignorance, and enthusiasm is the magic wand that perfects youth.

Enthusiasm has created many people, such as Galileo who experimented on the Leaning Tower to defend the truth, and Yuan Longping, who worked tirelessly in the rice fields to disregard the cold words of others. Enthusiasm will open a door to ideals, and youth is the best period to strive to achieve ideals.

We often complain about God's injustice, that we don't have a prominent family background, that we don't have extraordinary talents. On the battlefield of youth, we are fully armed, but we don't know where to go. Gradually, we lost our direction and fled along the blueprint laid out by our parents.

We hold up the unfathomable night in one hand and measure the length and breadth of knowledge with a pen in the other.

Sigh, melancholy, then decadence.

It's a pity that such a youth is so young.

Let the passion baptize you! Treat every test as a test paper of life, and every assignment as a treasure trove of knowledge. We walked on the sands of time, leaving beautiful footprints along the way.

Even if the whole world is frozen, we still have a burning heart beating in our chest!

Wait, if there's a problem coming in, I'll take a look first, and I'll continue later.

Next, if youth is the night sky, then enthusiasm is the stars, and its embellishment makes the whole black curtain shine; If youth is a drawing board, then passion is the paintbrush, and its smearing makes the drawing board beautiful (this idiom doesn't seem to be very appropriate, you can change it yourself).

It is the enthusiasm that awakens the sleeping students, and it is the enthusiasm that leads them to spin in circles and form an elegant dance posture.

Youth is the rising sun, and enthusiasm only adds another beam of light to it.

Let your passion fly, fly to the wide blue sky, fly to the distant green mountains, and fly to the depths of your heart.

That beam of light will completely light up youth.

I took it, don't copy it, just in case, 81 middle school, junior high school 2, 1* class!