Write a paragraph in a combination of second person direct lyricism and narrative lyricism

The use of the second-person "you" and "you" narration seems to be a dialogue with the reader, which can shorten the distance with the reader and make people feel more intimate; It can be close to life and easy to resonate emotionally with readers.

For example, "Pomegranate": "You see, it gradually turns red, and gradually refines (cracks) from the top into four petals, no matter how sharp the scissors are, you can't cut it so evenly, but who made so many vases with red agate, and delicately inserted the flowers?" The use of the second person here is like a dialogue with the reader, narrowing the distance between the reader and writing about the external beauty of the pomegranate.

The second person is the act of speech referring to an obedient person as opposed to the speaker. Such as:"You"The use of the second person in narrative literature is a rare form of narration.

Its role and advantages are as follows: 1Increasing intimacy and being more direct, this method has the effect of being as if the author is talking to us, invisibly narrowing the distance between the reader and the original text.

2.It is easy to dialogue, easy to lyrical, has a calling effect, and can enhance the appeal; Used for objects, it has an anthropomorphic effect.

There are at least three advantages to writing in the second person: first, you can quickly get into the role, mobilize emotions and integrate them into the text; Second, it is convenient to express feelings, since the second person is used, the author naturally becomes lyrical; Third, it will make readers more intimate and easy-going to read. From the text, I naturally and directly expressed my deep attachment to Mr. Liu.

Summer Rain That summer night, the weather suddenly cooled. I slept with the window closed until the next morning.

The next morning, I woke up from a sound night's sleep and opened the window, and a fresh smell with the scent of earth came to my face. Fresh air is really a medicine, a medicine that can refresh the mind and moisten the lungs. Yikes! It rained last night.

The sky was still overcast, and it seemed that the rain children could not stay in the sky again. At first, there was a small thunderclap, and with the thunder, countless tiny, tiny raindrops began to swoop towards the ground. One by one, they were quite powerful, and it didn't take long for them to "attack" before the ground became wet again.

But they remained silent, quietly, quietly, gradually "occupying" everything on the ground.

Suddenly, there was a thunderclap, a bolt of lightning, and dozens of larger, darker clouds that made people forget the slight drizzle that had just begun, followed by a moderate rain that splashed the petals of the rain when it fell on the ground. The rain was loud and noisy, and the ground began to be noisy. There are more umbrellas on the streets, red, green, blue, flower, transparent ......, like bright mushrooms after the rain, like a hundred flowers in spring.

The sound of the rain is also different, from the stream, the stream to the lala, the lala, the stronger, like thousands of troops, vast.

Gradually, the army was far away, and the rain became thinner and thinner, and floated softly in the brightening sky like a cow's hair.

Eventually, the light rain was gone. Wow! Rainbows appeared, red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, purple, ......Like a ribbon hanging diagonally in the sky.

The sun was smiling like a child. At this moment, the earth was full of spring, and the green branches and leaves were hung with water droplets, as if they were about to drip water, and even the grass was particularly fresh, a scene full of vitality, as if it was spring, not summer.