Chen Hongying composed poems, Chen Shi has forgotten the past, the red dust and the road must be bro

Chen Hongying: I love you, do you know it?

The first time I wrote a poem, it was also a Tibetan poem, and I wrote this kind of poem for her. It feels like you and her used to be very "close" friends, but now for some reason, you are separated. You can understand that you miss a little, but you don't want to remember her too much, and you don't want to know too much about her, because this is a past that you can't go back.

I feel that the artistic conception is already good, and the rhyme is a hard injury.

There are some words that could be reconsidered.

For example: you have to break through, it's a bit colloquial, if it were me, I would write it, and I have to insist. In this way, it can not only form a homonym with the previous sentence, but also reflect his persistence and courage more vividly from the artistic conception.

The heroes don't stay here, my words, I will write, the heroes don't leave this phoenix. This sentence is an inversion of your sentence, and Fenglin refers to a rarity, in terms of diction and word meaning, it has also risen a notch.

The above is just a personal opinion, I never help others change poems, if you want to change it, you can change it yourself, after all, it belongs to you, that is your memory.

The past has been forgotten.

The red dust road has to be broken.

The heroes are not left behind.

I want to go to her country.

Love for the old days.

But you are gone.

Don't tell me where you are.

Knowing that you are not empty and sad.

The Tao is told to whom I know my heart.

No, it is due to the consequences of the correction.

It's good, the key is to do it yourself, and you have the heart in it.

That's good, but there's room for improvement.

The past has been forgotten.

The red dust road has to be broken.

The heroes are not left behind.

I want to go to her country.

Love for the old days.

But you are gone.

Don't tell me where you are.

Knowing that you are not empty and sad.

The Tao is told to whom I know my heart.

No, it is due to the consequences of the correction.

This is also a poem I wrote to my favorite Chen Hongying.

Aged wine. It's all over the place, your past with me.

The handsome one was wounded.

Waved his hand for a moment.

Drunk tea. Picture of mountains and rivers.

It's all you, in the eyes.

Myths that do not think, do not read, are indifferent.

Li Zhenchen's white poetry collection was taken on a travel trip.

Grievances Ming Yue Guanshan Spring Thought.

At the end of the South Mountain, the people of Husi Mountain stayed in the wine to bid farewell and drink alone under the moon.

Far away, there is no way to cross the river, and it is difficult to cross the Shu road.

Liang Zhixian Fu chanted the bird crying at night, and the Wuqi song.

The south of the battle city will enter the wine and travel and hunt.

The flying dragon leads two songs, and the Pegasus song is difficult to travel three songs.