Material 1 The lamb is to walk alone in the desert, 10

It is better to teach a man to fish than to teach him to fish.

Although the proposition essay is very important, as long as it is not too unreliable and too political dissident (political reactionary), then it will not be directly betrayed to death. This material gives a clear hint:

It is not only the hope left for those who come after him, but also the way back for himself.

What does that mean? The lamb did not listen to his mother's instructions and ate all the grass along the road, and as a result, there was no food on the way back, and he put himself in a desperate situation. The little sheep did everything desperately, so he had no way out.

This case just goes against the allusion of Xiang Yu breaking the kettle and fighting against the water. Xiang Yu had to give everything he had and finish his work in one battle, because he had no way to retreat, so he could only put it to death and come back to life; And the little lamb can obviously leave a way out for itself, and it buries this way of retreat itself.

How about this essay? To give you an idea: start from environmental protection, talk about sustainable development, cite some permanent and irreversible damage to the environment caused by over-mining, and assess the possible devastating impact on future generations; Then it was extended to the ancient emperors who were reckless and militaristic, and they were tyrannical in the country, wantonly squeezing the people's fat and people's cream, and finally led to the warning of the country's ruin.

Arrange these examples reasonably, arrange the transition between the examples, and click on the question at the end of the article.

The skeleton of the article is good. Polishing is not something that can be exercised by one or two essays, it requires a lot of reading and writing accumulation. Keep in mind, though, that whether or not an essay can get a high score depends on several factors:

1. Literary collection - to supplement one's vocabulary, two directions, one is to seek lessons from ancient poems and ancient texts, and the other is to seek lessons from foreign excellent fragmentary literature; The advantage is that it can enrich the vocabulary and accumulate a lot of allusions, which is a good material for writing essays;

2. Story structure - this is simpler, just master the structure of the conventional theme, and see how others write prose and discussion;

3. Intention - The idea should be close to the proposition, not necessarily very high, but it must be appropriate.

Leave yourself a way back.

The lamb did not heed his mother's advice and ran out of grass as he crossed the desert, and as a result, he could not find his way home. did not leave a way back for himself, so that the lamb fell into a desperate situation. The experience of the lamb tells us:

To do things, you have to leave a way back for yourself and others. Only in this way can you avoid falling into a desperate situation.

To do things, you must leave yourself a back road, only in this way can you avoid falling into a desperate situation.

If there is no way back to do things, people are easy to fall into a desperate situation and find it difficult to extricate themselves.

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