How to write the feeling after reading the triangle

Cao Wenxuan's "Triangle" touched me deeply.

Sometimes, it's not that we can't be good, it's that we don't want to be good. This is the case for people who live in the Triangle. This family has five children, in fact, all of them are top people, but no one cares about them, including their parents, so they don't want to be good.

After discovering the advantages of each younger sibling and holding the mentality of making the people in the triangle more lovable, it was the eldest son who led the younger siblings to change their lives, and finally won everyone's praise.

Don't we also need someone to lead us forward in life? Isn't it just to make us better at all costs? No matter who it is, no matter what, we need to be grateful to them.

However, we still need to rely on our own efforts, no matter how others give, and we also need our efforts to complement each other.

On the road of struggle, even if we encounter bitterness and tears, the final result will always be joyful, as long as we pay, it will always be a happy result - just like in "Triangle", after experiencing many things, we finally embarked on the road full of sunshine.

Talent is of course extremely important to us, but what is more important is the effort we make the day after tomorrow, which is another truth revealed in "Triangle". Like every child in the story, not only for himself, but also for the people who love him and his love for the dates!

"Triangle" is another short story written by Cao Wenxuan**, which is a story ...... a family from decline to prosperity

This is an article written in the eyes of a person, the eldest son of Triangle, who was a notorious family a few years ago, gambled, drank heavily, and scored zero on the second brother's exam; The eldest brother plays football well, but he always kicks other people's windows and breaks ......

It is such a family, the protagonist "I" lives in a haunt for sixteen years, until one day, a friend who is very important to him laughs at him and makes "I" decide to revitalize the triangle! After a series of remediations by "me", the triangle has finally become a new look.

This reminds me of a story about two people who drifted to a lonely island, with a garden created by the descendants of pirates on one side and poisonous snakes on the other, which was a hell on earth, and one went to the garden, and the other gave up the comfortable life in the garden and decided to live in this place where poisonous snakes were infested, and twenty years later, the man in the garden became very rich because he had done a lot of work for the pirates, and inherited the garden, and one day he had nothing to do to visit the man who had decided to set up his own door, I didn't expect this person who drifted with him to build this hell on earth like heaven, even better than that garden!

Both of these stories made me realize that "there is nothing difficult in the world, only afraid of those who have a heart". Even if the starting point is not good, as long as you put in it, you can get a reward.

The basic idea of the impression after reading is as follows:

1) Briefly describe the relevant content of the original text. Such as the title of the book and the article, the author, the year of writing, and a summary of the content of the original book or original text. The purpose of writing this part is to explain where the feelings come from and to pave the way for the discussion that follows.

This part must highlight the word "simplified", and must not describe the specific content of the book and the text in large paragraphs, and the resistance to ants is to briefly describe the part that is directly related to the impression, omitting things that have nothing to do with the impression.

2) Clarify the basic point. Choose the point that you feel the most and make it clear in a concise sentence. Such a sentence can be called an "opinion sentence".

This opinion sentence expresses the central thesis of the article. The position of the "opinion sentence" in the text can be flexible, it can be at the beginning, at the end of the article, or in the middle of the article. For students who are new to writing, it is best to use a straightforward approach and write your ideas at the beginning of the article.

3) Present facts and reason around basic points. This part is the ontology part of the discussion, which is the elaboration of the basic viewpoint (that is, the central thesis), and proves the correctness of the viewpoint by presenting facts and reasoning, so as to make the argument more prominent and convincing. In this process, we should pay attention to the fact that the facts and reasoning must be closely centered on the basic viewpoint and serve the basic viewpoint.

4) Connect with reality around basic ideas. A good feeling after reading should have the atmosphere of the times and a sense of truth. To do this, you must be good at connecting with reality.

This "reality" can be an individual's thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a certain social phenomenon. When connecting with reality, we should also pay attention to closely centering on the basic viewpoint and serving the viewpoint, instead of blindly linking it and disconnecting it from the front to the back. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing and reading feelings, but this idea is not immutable, and we must be good at mastering it flexibly.

For example, "brief description of the original text" is usually preceded by "clarifying the point", but it is also possible to reverse the order of the two. Furthermore, if the facts presented in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, there is no need to write the fourth part. Sense the following issues after writing and reading: