What should I do if I can t write a detailed description when I write an essay?

1. You should read a lot of extracurricular books, especially excellent short stories**, novellas**, excellent essay selections, etc., and there are many details in the writing of people, objects, and narratives, which are very well written. As the saying goes, reading more than 10,000 books is like a god.

2 Develop a good habit of careful observation on weekdays. Observe the appearance, demeanor, language, and actions of the characters, and be able to figure out the psychological activities of the characters through the language of the characters.

3. Keep an observation diary, preferably one a day, write more and practice more--- practice makes perfect. It's best to sort out the people and things you see every day, and find something meaningful to write, the more detailed the better. After a long time, your problem of not being able to write down the details will be solved.

Hope it helps.

It is not difficult to describe the details, first of all, you have to put on a magnifying glass to look at the living environment; Second, look at the process of the activity; Third, look at the physical structure. Usually record a lot and observe. Write realistically, and write the details concretely.

It shows that there are few materials and are not good at accumulation.

In addition, we must be good at observation, get in touch with nature, and see more to be more knowledgeable.

Read more model essays and figure out the good practices of others.

The first is to choose a good moral extracurricular writing tutoring class, which can strengthen the training in a targeted manner; The second is to read more model texts, which should be read with learning purposes, not like reading a story.

Try to write about your personal experience, and pay attention to writing more about your mood, scenery, etc., so that you can set off the details.

Read more articles with beautiful words, preferably the kind that describe landscapes and people.

I often hear some middle school students say, "I'm afraid of writing, I have a headache when I pick up a pen, and I always feel that I have nothing to write." He once said, "It is best to draw a man's eyes in a very frugal way." "Not long ago.

Students, you always feel that there is nothing to say about the composition, the writing is not specific, today let's learn a few tricks together and try it, everyone must do it seriously.

How to write an essay specifically (1):

Learn to ask a few more "how" questions to expand the plot.

When composing, some students are only accustomed to summarizing and describing. What to do? If you learn to ask a few more "hows" in the text, you will be able to write the plot in detail.

Example 1: "Swimming".

The water in the pool was clear. My dad and I went down into the water. My dad was standing five or six meters in front of me, and I swam towards him. My father pointed out the problems to me and patiently guided me to practice, so that I had a good grasp of the essentials of the movements. Finally I was able to swim five or six meters in one go.

You can ask it this way;

1. What is "clear water"?

2. How did I "swim" to my father?

3. What "faults" did Dad point out to me?

4. How to guide "patience"?

5. What are the essentials of the action?

Wouldn't it be specific to add these contents and write them out again? Let's take a look at the revised composition.

Swimming" modified text:

The pool is newly replaced with water, and you can see the bottom at a glance, and every movement under the water can be seen clearly. Ha! This is the perfect opportunity to learn to swim.

I went into the water with my father, who stood five meters in front of me and said, "Come, come here!" I held my breath and plunged headlong into the water, using my hands and feet together, and swam towards my father.

When I stood up and saw my father standing in front of me, he said, "Your main problem is that you don't do the essentials of your foot movements, you can't just push hard in the water, and you have to hold the water hard......."He demonstrated as he spoke. I followed my father's command, and my legs moved rhythmically.

Eventually, I was able to master the movement of my legs and was able to swim five or six meters in one breath.

In addition, there are several other aspects that should be paid attention to in detail description, such as the language should be concise, the detail description should be representative, general, and reflect the profound theme, and so on. In short, the scope of detail description is very wide, and its role is also multifaceted. The expressive details are like the bricks of a skyscraper, without which the building would collapse; The details of each expression are like cells in the human body, and if the human body does not have cells, people lose their lives; If the article lacks details, the character image will lose the artistic effect it wants to express and lose its due brilliance.

A detail sometimes plays the same role in revealing a character's personality traits as a plot or a scene. The great masters of the past and present have made good use of the sharp ** of details, so that their articles can be passed down through the ages. We should also learn from the excellent achievements of our predecessors, capture the details, use the details, let this golden key be used for our own use, and make our articles shine!

Detail depiction The golden key that brings the characters to life.

"Characters" is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' assignments are often the same, with no personality or vividness, and the whole article seems dry and boring, lacking appeal. A careful reading of these works reveals a common problem: they often only blindly seek to write a complete story, but neglect to describe vivid, specific and nuanced details.

The scope of detail description is very wide, and its role is also multifaceted, but it is mainly to portray the character and shape the character image. The details that convey the spirit are like the cells in the human body, without it, people will lose their lives, and the characters will lose their flesh and blood and brilliance. Writer Li Zhun said:

A detail sometimes plays the same role in revealing a character's personality traits as a plot or a scene. As the saying goes, "see the spirit in the subtleties".

Literary masters attach great importance to the depiction of details. In Lu Xun's "The True Biography of A Zheng", there is a detailed description of the painting before the execution: "When I was about to draw a circle, the hand holding the pen was just shaking, so the man spread the paper on the ground, went down, and drew a circle with all his life's strength."

He was afraid of being laughed at, and he was determined to draw round, but this hateful pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient, and it was almost closed with a shake just now, but it shrugged outward, and became a melon seed. This detail of his behavior concretely, vividly, and vividly reflects the character traits of Ah Ah, who adhered to the "method of spiritual victory" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not find Ah ridiculous, pathetic, and pitiful?

How can we not "mourn their misfortune and be angry with them", and then think deeply about the root cause of national inferiority?

This is true not only for Chinese writers, but also for foreign writers. Such as Balzac's "Eugenie.

Dynamic modeling of sculptural details The use of verbs to dynamically display the depicted object is a very common method in detail description. Careful selection of words, clever use of rhetorical methods, and the use of figures of speech such as metaphor, personification, and exaggeration can enhance the vividness of language, turn abstraction into concreteness, and turn the invisible into tangible. Such as a description in Lu Xun's ** "Medicine",:

The old bolt also looked over there, but saw behind a bunch of people; They were all stretched out, like many ducks, pinched by invisible hands, and lifted upward. After a moment of silence, there seemed to be a sound that shook the person, and with a bang, they all retreated backwards until they were where the old bolt stood, almost squeezing him down. "Lu Xun is a master of painting, not only painting the appearance of the figure, but also deliberately painting the soul of the character through concise words.

It is as if many ducks, pinched by invisible hands, lift upwards, and "draw the demeanor of a group of ignorant and numb spectators." It can be seen that the dynamic display has played a higher role in the description of details and the shaping of characters.

Composition is life, which requires observation and thinking. Observation is to pay attention to the details of life; To think is to be inspired by the details of life. Only by observing life with a keen sense can we write a successful detailed description.

2. Mobilize all kinds of senses, and observe things in detail to make the description vivid and vivid, and when observing things, you need to mobilize your various senses to make detailed observations of things. For example, when writing about flowers in a garden (which engages all the senses), we can write something like this: The crescent moon in the sky shines a faint light and sprinkles quietly in the garden.

Under the misty moonlight, the flowers and verdant leaves that were purple and red during the day looked much darker. At this time, a few freshly opened epiphanyes are clear and jade, exuding wisps of fragrance, refreshing people's hearts. Yes!

There is also a budding bud, will it bloom? I held it for a while, and all of a sudden, the bud moved ......Finally, a small hole opened in the tip of the bud, and then, the hole slowly opened, and suddenly the petals gradually relaxed. The petals seem to be carved from crystal, and even the veins can be seen clearly; The heart of the flower is as white as tender, and the lace reveals a layer of goose yellow.

The author has made a detailed description of the flower, and the texture, smell, color, texture, and the whole process of the flower bud opening are as immersive as the scene, and the writing is delicate and vivid.

Our teachers teach. There is also a self-made I don't know if there is any noise with a rough book to mean the small characteristics of the characters. The characters are vividly depicted and the character traits are prominently depicted.

Pay attention to the details of the description. Sometimes it is good to ambush pen bench attendants. It makes people feel that the composition is written with a feeling.

Well, that's all. I remember it myself. No, you have to ask me. Let me give you an example. All right?

Reading Dream of Red Mansions, there are many detailed descriptions, calm down, those that you look at in a hurry are the detailed descriptions.

Pay attention to the little things that happen in your life and be good at grasping the little things