Excerpt 200 words essay with comment 5

The meaning of happiness.

I used to be confused, I didn't know what happiness was in real life and how to cherish it. I heard that everyone has their own happiness, whether you are poor or rich, old or young, beautiful or ugly. However, happiness is often like a drop of water tightly grasped in the hand, no matter how hard you try, it will quietly pass away from the hand.

I asked myself, what is happiness? I searched, I pursued, and then I finally understood.

During the festival, when the house was lively, my grandmother brought an apple and said to me kindly: "Come, good grandson, eat an apple for the New Year, and you can be safe and sound in the coming year!" After saying that, he put it to my mouth, but I pushed my grandmother's hand back and said:

Grandma, you eat first! ”。In an instant, my grandmother's face showed a satisfied smile, and I smiled too.

When people reach old age, the requirement for happiness becomes very simple, so simple that it is very satisfying to be happy when they just want to be with their children and grandchildren.

Oh! I understand. Happiness is the kind of gratifying gaze that shines in my grandmother's eyes!

I remember one time on my way home, when I passed by the market. Suddenly, I heard the cry of "Mommy, Mommy". The voice appealed to me.

Following the sound, I saw a middle-aged woman carrying a heavy schoolbag, holding a large bag of vegetables in her left hand, and holding her son's immature little hand in her right hand. "Mom......The little boy's voice was still a little astringent, "Let me carry my school bag." "No need.

The woman's voice was slightly tired, but the corners of her mouth showed a smile of relief. The child jumped slightly, grabbed the school bag, put it on his shoulder, and ran away briskly. In the bustling crowd, the mother tasted the warmth of life and immersed herself in the deep affection of love.

Happiness! Happiness is the intoxicating fragrance in my mother's smile!

I couldn't help but close my eyes and ponder: What is happiness? All of a sudden, I realized something -- happiness is actually a feeling, but also a state of mind. It will always be there for us, as long as you want to, as long as you "listen" with your heart.

Yes! I finally understood that happiness is like the fragrance of flowers, the wings of butterflies, subtle to casual corners, and beautiful to the sentimental heart. To taste happiness is to taste the light of the stars, the warmth of tears, and the vicissitudes of time with your soul.

The author uses writing to find out the true meaning of happiness, and uses many good words and sentences, and the happiness expressed is very accurate. The rhetorical question used in paragraph 2 of the article is very well used The beginning and end of the article echo each other. An article that makes the reader feel warm after reading it