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If a boy doesn't pluck a hair, we call him Iron Rooster. The girl who was with him, we called her the chicken coop sweeper;

If a boy often takes advantage of the fire to rob, we call him a bandit. The girl who is with him, we call her Mrs. Press;

If a boy has a furrow on his face, we call him a battle map. The girl who was with him, we called her a field commander;

If a boy looks miserable, we call him the scene of the car accident. The girl who was with him, we asked her to save the life;

If a boy is too thick-skinned, we call him the Queen Mother. The girl who is with him, we call her Huang Ama;

If a boy is a sissy, we call him Oriental Undefeated. The girl who is with him, we call her laughing and proud;

If a guy is disgusted online, we call him a frog. The girl who was with him, we called her Dinosaur;

If a boy pays for it regardless of whether he is good or bad, we call him a soft-shelled turtle. The girl with him, we call her Ma Jiajun;

If a boy is nosy, we call him nosy. The girl who is with him, we call her Man Jianghong;

If a boy is weak, we call him a cane. The girl who is with him, we call her amulet;

If a boy likes to make small reports, we call him the husband of the fart. The girl with him, we call her the catcher in the wheat field;

If a boy pedals several boats, we call him Norwegian Wood. The girl who is with him, we call her Tianlong Babu.

If a boy is withdrawn and cynical, we call him a hundred years of loneliness. The girl who is with him, we call her love to accompany her;

Composition is a way of turning your mind into words. In this essay, I revealed one of the biggest problems, that is, it is divorced from reality. In fact, composition is not a burden of language, not a deliberate pursuit, not a crude imitation, but a flower watered with the heart.

She may be unpretentious, but she is the epitome of life; She may be ordinary, but she is a portrayal of my heart; She may be imaginary, but full of vision for the future. Writing doesn't need to be embellished with beautiful language, it doesn't need to be accentuated by great examples. Plain is true.

It's really moving.

In the future, I want to get rid of the mistake of flashy composition. Good at reading, good picking, good at memorizing, good at viewing, good feeling, good at reforming, we must grasp a detail in life, write it in detail, and write out the true feelings. If demeanor can express people's hearts, why can't words?

I will remember: I write my heart by hand!

Because I don't have your essay, I can only write like this, hand-beaten, begging for adoption! Thank you).

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1.Take the initiative to undertake class work, meticulous and conscientious, meticulous and principled. Bravely faced and overcome all kinds of difficulties in study, work and life, and people have matured a lot. Get along well with your classmates and everyone likes you very much.

2.To be honest, you have regressed this semester, and the teacher is very anxious for you, hurry up and find the problems in your own learning, and correct them in time! You must be more conscious and patient when studying, only through continuous efforts, you will make progress!

4.A big girl, you have to abide by classroom discipline in class, write homework to do "today's things, today's completion" to develop good study habits, only in this way, your academic performance will improve, I hope you have to work harder!

5.You are a smart, imaginative child, and you can always be heard in class with surprising questions and answers, but when you do your homework, you can't help but be a little careless, and I hope you can get rid of this bad problem and strive for greater progress.

6.You will spend a lot of time studying and practicing the courses you like, and you can complete the courses you don't like as required. A very serious and hard-working person.

7.You are a capable child, you can always do things seriously for the class, you can always listen to your wonderful speeches, I hope you continue to work hard, meticulous, and strive for excellent results.

8.You are a smart and clever girl who usually completes her homework on time, studies more seriously, loves to talk and dress up, but you are not serious in class, your self-control potential is poor, and your academic performance is not stable enough. I hope to get rid of my bad habits in the future, write well, and strive to be a good student.

The essay is beautifully sentenced, much like prose, and there are several figurative sentences that vividly describe the beauty of the lotus flower, which reads very intimately, and reads it like the scene is right next to you. (I'm sorry, but that's all I have to say, and you can write it yourself.) ）

Plum Blossom Wang Anshi.

There are a few plums in the corner, and Ling Han opens it alone. I know that it is not snow, but there is a dark fragrance.

Praise the plum blossom for its pride, pure character).

Bu Operator: Yongmei" land tour.

Outside the post on the side of the broken bridge, lonely and ownerless. It was already dusk and I was alone, and it was even more windy and rainy. has no intention of fighting for spring, and a group of people are jealous. Scattered into mud and dust, only fragrant as before.

Be content with indifference, not strong)

There are many kinds of hydroponics, hanging pothos, silver queen, anthurium, these can be both soil and water.

Although he does not live in the water town of the south of the Yangtze River, he has a soft spot for lotus flowers. Because the lotus flower grows in sludge and blooms on the surface of the water, it has the deep meaning of producing sludge without staining.

Although I don't know much about lotus flowers, I praise lotus seeds from the bottom of my heart. Because the lotus seed has a strong vitality, even if it sleeps for thousands of years, as long as there is suitable water and soil, it will bloom and sprout, and the leaves will be green and red.

Where there is water, there are many lotus flowers. In the middle of summer, the branches and green stems of the lotus, with their noble and upright posture, stand on the mirror-like water surface; Like the green leaves of the umbrella, a piece of snow like rouge lotus flowers suddenly appeared, which is a peculiar pink color, white with pink, pink in the red. The budding flowers always have a feeling of wanting to say and be ashamed, which makes people happy when they see it.

Where there is a lotus, there must be a lotus. Just as the lotus blooms when it blooms, the lotus seeds will mature when the lotus withers. At this time, the lotus seed is simple and unpretentious, with a humble and gentlemanly demeanor, firmly sticking to the black and hard shell, protecting the lotus heart that is ready to go green.

In that "the green trees are thick and the summer days are long, and the buildings are reflected in the pond", it is also the day when the lotus flowers bloom the most prosperous, and the Southern Song Dynasty poet Yang Wanli, who is good at singing about the lotus, sees: "The lotus is still sad and hot in the twilight, and the low side is hidden in the blue umbrella"; However, the scenery seen in the eyes of Zhu Yizun of the Qing Dynasty was the opposite: "A few bursts of cool hair turning white leaves, continuous showers jumping pearl green."

In any case, the lotus flower gives the poet a much deeper meaning than its meaning as a plant itself; If not, how can people use it as a symbol of elegance and purity?!

In the pond, the water surface is covered with green lotus leaves, like a dense jade umbrella, covering the water surface tightly. The green lotus leaves are rolling with glowing dewdrops, and the morning breeze sends a faint lotus fragrance, which blows through like layers of green waves, like pieces of jade.

Soon after, the buds came out of the sludge, looking at the buds waiting to be released, some stood proudly on the branches, some hidden under the leaves, they all patiently waited for the roots to be fed, the leaves were nurtured, and they were always looking forward to the day when they would get ahead.

The flowers are blooming, the emerald green lotus leaves are from it, a branch is slim and elegant, the tender Xin condensing beads, the fragrant lotus flowers, like a shy girl, the face is crimson, smiling slightly, which reminds people: the lotus leaves are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers are different red.

Thanks, do you think all she left behind is the memories in people's minds? No, she left behind a lotus pod.

Behold, the lotus is like a little bowl full of rare things, which shakes gently with the wind, as if it were showing off themselves proudly.

The lotus flower is not as graceful and luxurious as the peony, not as cold as the plum blossom, nor as small and delicate as the orchid, however, she silently disperses the fragrance of the scorching heat and sends a trace of coolness.

I love the lotus flower, I love her pavilion.

In this article, I first wrote about my disdain and disgust for cleaners, and showed the cleaners' seriousness and love for the environment through the description of the cleaners struggling to pick up a plastic bag. At the same time, the author was deeply moved, and deeply regretted his disrespectful attitude towards the cleaner just now, and was also ashamed of his ignorance. It is true that the laborers are ordinary, but we have to admit that they are great.

They love life, and work hard to dedicate themselves to their posts for a long time, so as to create a clean environment for the prosperity of the society. This society should belong to the working people, and we should respect them and learn from their dedication.

The author portrays the conscientiousness of a sanitation worker with simple writing, which makes the reader very moved. This article contrasts the good qualities of the cleaner with its own naivety, which makes the article vivid and the image of the characters becomes distinct. The story is small and big, using the writing technique of first suppressing and then promoting, and the structure is complete, which is a good masterpiece.

The disadvantage is that some sentences are frequently used, which seems a little wordy, and the words are used repeatedly, and they are improved again, and I believe that they will continue to improve!