Learn how to describe the language, movements, and demeanor of a character in a text, and write a fr

Red-faced, freshman is not close. Again.

There is a mother who is not very good-tempered. She has not very dark hair, bright eyes, and some spots on her face. She's a bit fat, so she's not that good-looking. Although it looks very kind, the temper is not so good!

That time, I had already finished my lunch and my mother hurried back. Because a few days ago, my mother had promised me to buy me a beautiful schoolbag, but she hadn't helped me buy it back yet, so I asked, "Mom, Mom, didn't you promise to buy me a new schoolbag?"

But why haven't I seen even half of my schoolbag until now? Unexpectedly, I happened to hit my mother's musket, and she scolded angrily: "Buy a school bag, buy a school bag, you know that you want me to buy you a school bag, your original school bag can't be used!"

I don't have time to buy you a new school bag! The factory owner told me to wait for someone, I waited for two hours, but no one came, so I had to rush home first, until now, I haven't eaten lunch! ”

I was so frightened by my mother's words that I didn't dare to say anything. I had to walk out, and at that time, I had mixed feelings, I wanted to cry aggrieved, and I felt that I shouldn't be. I just sighed softly......

You see, my mom's temper isn't so good! Usually, I don't dare to say a word, but sometimes I am very good, hehe, my mother's temper is really uncertain, really fickle!

I'm also on this question, so I don't need it now.

Generally, your father doesn't drink alcohol, and you have a stroke of the coal chemical industry.

Patronage an occasional computer sports department can hold a meeting for free, unannounced plan transfer has the opportunity to look at a few months of imports and international to see Korean imports take a breath.

**As soon as it was sent down, Xiao Min put a piece of paper on it, with a satisfied smile on his face, dancing and waving the test paper, Zhuo Xiaohong looked at his 50-point test paper, and then looked at Xiao Min's 100-point test paper at the same table and cried, why is your score higher than mine?

Describe the character's demeanor, movements, language, and composition skillsFine Ant Burning Festival Specialization: Add language, demeanor, psychology, action and other descriptions to the sentence, so that the sentence becomes more vivid and vivid. Original sentence:

Xiao Ming's Chinese scores have always been very good, but the results of the final exam were announced, Xiao Ming's Chinese test only scored 80 points, he missed the award, and the reward for going to Shanghai Disneyland was also lost, Xiao Ming cried sadly.

Xiao Ming's Chinese scores have always been very good, but the final exam results were announced, and Lu Ming's Chinese language test in Xiaopengdong only scored 80 points, he missed the award, and the reward for going to Shanghai Disneyland was also lost, Xiao Ming's face was red and he covered his face sadly and cried.

Teacher: Next, let's make a game. Ask the students to describe the appearance of a classmate at will, and tell him to guess who he is talking about, and if you can guess it, we will reward the student with warm applause.

Sheng(9): He was tall, wearing a red and white football shirt, with a round face and big bright eyes, and he always had to kick something under his feet when he walked, as if he was always playing football.

Students] :(applause).

Students] :(applause).

Sheng(11): He is neither tall nor short, with jet-black hair and big bright eyes, and he looks very lively.

Student]: Can't guess. Because there are so many such people that there are no distinctive characteristics.

B. (12): ....

B. (13): ....

5. Instruct students to read fragments of characters described in the text. (5 minutes).

Teacher: Most of the students were able to grasp the physical characteristics of their classmates, but their descriptions did not quite reflect the personality characteristics of their classmates.

Sheng Yunqi reads the appearance of the characters in "One Side", "One Pair of Hands", and "Sketch of the Chief Designer of the Rocket".

Film presented].

Teacher: Can you see from these paragraphs what kind of people Mr. Lu Xun, Zhang Yingshan and the chief designer are?

Sheng (14): Mr. Lu Xun is very energetic, which can be seen from his straight hair.

Sheng (15): Mr. Lu Xun fights selflessly, which can be seen from the fact that he is so thin that people are worried.

Sheng (16): Zhang Yingshan is a hard-working person, and his hand is the best witness to Yuming.

Sheng (17): The chief designer is a serious, erudite, and dedicated person to the cause. This can be seen from his slightly bald head, cold expression, and clothing.

Teacher: Yes, it can be seen from this that a person's appearance, his personality, demeanor, and cultivation can be seen. When we write about the appearance of the characters, we should also grasp the character characteristics and spiritual qualities of the characters, and make reasonable trade-offs between the characteristics of the appearance to make them a whole.

In this way, we are depicting more than just talent"shape"to be able to have"God"is a living, flesh-and-blood person.