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One morning when I was working in the playground, someone came to me and said, "The essay has been posted in the newspaper column, and there is yours, and it is full of double circles." "I was so excited that I wanted to see it right away, but I was reserved and didn't want to show my eagerness in front of my classmates.
At noon, when the campus was silent, I slipped over like a thief and stood alone in front of the newspaper column, admiring my double-circled composition. With my heartbeat, I counted them one by one from beginning to end, and there were ninety-eight red double circles in total. This is the evaluation given to me by my Chinese teacher.
The essay with a double circle was posted in the newspaper column for a long time. One day, the comrades of the county cultural center passed by here, and when they saw it occasionally, they took it down and took it away. Soon after, my essay was published in the county journal.
The county journal was sent to Yangzhou area, and was selected by the regional publication for the second publication. After several turnovers, the following year, "Supplementary Examination" was published in the official publication of a publishing house in Shanghai. At that time, I had already gone to the countryside to cut in line.
My father encouraged me and said, "If there is one, why can't there be two?" I thought about it, so I continued to "toss", and later published a lot of ** and became a writer.
Without the ninety-eight red double circles on the essay back then, would I have everything I have today? There are countless tracks to go on the road of life, and the reason why I chose one of them is by accident and inevitable. Forever grateful to my teachers, to my alma mater for the newspaper, and to the double red circle hanging on the tree of my life.
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The main content of "The New Teacher Wang": wrote about a newly appointed teacher Wang in the first Chinese class to ask the "bad student" Cai Zhilin, which caused laughter, and after school, Teacher Wang gave Cai Lin a "poor student file" to encourage Cai Lin to study hard. The Red Double Circles on the Essay Because the teacher wrote ninety-eight red double circles on the essay "Make-up Examination", and finally published it, it gave the author confidence and strength, and since then he has published literary works one after another, and finally became a well-known writer.
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The teacher in the text is a serious teacher who is good at encouraging students.
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Hello, I'm Mr. Zhang.
This topic is not very good. The main reasons are:
But judging from the title, I already feel that your criticism is strong. Don't even look at the content of your essay.
When writing an essay, the topic should not be outrageous, and there should be no special words such as circles, which can easily be judged as a sail key mark.
In fact, the content you want to write should be roughly related to the meaning of the special logo of the teacher's correction of the essay. If so, it is advisable to change to a better topic, which can be a pun.
For example: "Red Memory"; "Special Symbols" and so on.
Of course, the specific topic depends on the main content of your essay and the thoughts and feelings you want to express. Start with these two aspects and refine your own essay topics.
Above, I hope to help you, if recognized,. Good luck with your studies!
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The red double circle on the essay gives the author confidence and strength due to the success of this essay.
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Why can't I understand what you approved?
Speechless. You can be a little more considerate of other compositions, but you can't describe them with the teachers you often get along with? I don't think it's okay to always rely on the internet or something, just on your own! If you exercise too much, you will naturally write essays.
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