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Silly things make up that colorful childhood, a happy childhood, and a nostalgic childhood. Although this golden time is slowly passing away from me, I am no longer so stupid, and I believe that the funny stories of my childhood will definitely become the most beautiful memories of my life.

Teacher's comments: This assignment is vivid and interesting, and it depicts an innocent and naïve childhood of the young author through two things. The full text is cleverly conceived, rigorously structured, rich in imagination, humorous in language, flexible in thinking, and beats between the lines of the child's innocent innocence, reflecting the child's humorous and witty childlike fun, and making people feel the author's yearning and nostalgia for the beautiful childhood after reading.

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Childhood is an ocean of joy. On the seashore of memories, there are countless shells, some gray, evoking a sad past; There are splendid ones that remind people of childhood anecdotes. I searched for the most beautiful shells on the shore of my memories, and ah, I found ......

What is childhood? It is a blank slate, carefree, simple and transparent; What is childhood? It is a gurgling stream, clear and transparent, singing all the way; What is childhood? It's a small fish that jumps around and jumps from time to time ...... memory water

Childhood is a camera, showing our wonderful moments, childhood is a brush, painting our sunny side, childhood is an essay, narrating our various experiences...

Childhood is happy, and the stupid things that I did in my childhood because of my childishness and stupidity still make people laugh when I recall it now.

Yes! The experience of childhood is truly unforgettable.

Whenever I see a little orchid, I think of that faint smile in my childhood. I seemed to see the withered yellow hand and the withered face again, but there was always that smile on her kind face, and her eyes were always looking at the sky, as if they were looking at someone. (Beginning).

Now, grandma has passed away, but the little orchids in the courtyard are still blooming so brightly, so fragrant, just like grandma's smile, faintly, faintly ......It's like the source of happiness makes me smile inadvertently......end)

Childhood was like a dream that made me very happy; Childhood is like a bird flying in the blue sky, carefree and free; Childhood is like a rainbow in the sky, with red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, purple colors, different shapes, including my innocence, my loveliness, my naughtiness, my sensibility, my happiness, my loss, and my stupidity. I can't forget these beautiful memories, and my childhood is like a dream in heaven! (Beginning).

The joy of being a child made me unforgettable for the rest of my life, my childhood was like a colorful dream, and this dream made me extremely happy! It's a dream in heaven! I'm going to keep this dream for the rest of my life! end)

Childhood is a book that records our bits and pieces; Childhood is a song that sings our ups and downs; Childhood is a painting that renders our colorful stories. (Beginning).

Childhood, childhood, with you, it makes my life more exciting! end)

Childhood is like a colorful box, full of sweets, full of laughter, and full of laughter. Looking back now, everything is like a crystal clear pearl, connected together like a beautiful and dazzling necklace, shining ...... the long river of memory(Beginning).

The memories of childhood are like colorful seashells, as long as you open it, you will find that it is so cute, funny, and will make you have endless memories. end)

My childhood was full of colours, and there were as many interesting things as the stars in the sky. The brightest and most dazzling of them all.

See Lu Xun From the Hundred Herb Garden to the Three Flavors Study.

Beginning: There are no taboos in childhood anecdotes, I really want to be like Sleeping Beauty and can't wake up like Sleeping Beauty, if I were to describe childhood anecdotes, I would compare it to a flower, a fragrant flower; A box, a box with many secrets; A trellis, a trellises overgrown with countless grapes......Let's enjoy the fairy tale together!

Ending: And when I was swimming in my childhood dreams, I really wanted to pluck the fragrant little flowers with my own hands; Open the box full of secrets and take out a secret; Pick the lovely purple grapes ......Childhood anecdotes make me have a lot of memories!

Childhood is a rushing stream, singing jubilant and childish ballads, flowing on the rocks of time. Let me pick up a pebble in the stream and tell you the story of my childhood.

Remember .........Childhood is always so innocent and so naïve. I believe that in the midst of failures and lessons learned again and again, I will be able to follow the stream of my childhood and gradually move towards a bright future.

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