Zhu Ziqing s Back wrote a reply letter to the father in the article

There are only four places to remember my father's words, and they are all very simple. It was not on the day of separation that my father only said these few simple words, but because these simple words were affectionate, he specially wrote them down. When the author repeatedly advised his father not to send it himself, his father said, "It doesn't matter, they can't go well!"

When the author got to the car and asked his father to go back, he said, "I'll buy some oranges." You're right here, don't move. When he bought the oranges and was about to get off the bus, my father said, "I'm leaving; Write over there!

After walking a few steps and turning back, my father said, "Go in, there's no one inside." How much pity, thoughtfulness, and reluctance are implied here! When we read these words, we not only felt these meanings, but also felt as if we were seeing the voice of the father at that time.

The second thing to do is to talk about the action of the narrative. To describe a person's movements, of course, you must first see his movements. Once you see it clearly, you have to write it in the most appropriate words so that the reader can see these actions as if they were seeing them.

This article recounts the father's journey to buy oranges, from walking the railroad to getting back to the car. The words used by the author are appropriate and well arranged, so that we feel as if we have seen these movements, and we feel that the father has really done a difficult but pleasant job. Also, all the places where the action is narrated are realistic, and only the phrase "the heart is very relaxed" added under the "dirt on the fluttering clothes" is seen in the author's eyes, and it is fiction.

This phrase is very relevant, it sets off the action of "throwing the dirt on the clothes" very vividly, and completely understands the father's willingness to do this difficult work.

There are a few places where the author explains what he means: when he describes that his father is going to deliver it himself, he says that he "has been to and from Beijing two or three times"; When narrating the price negotiation between his father and the porter, he said that he "always felt that he was not very beautiful when he spoke"; When recounting his father's solemn entrustment of the tea room in the car, he said that he "laughed at his detour in his heart". These have a foiling effect, and it can be seen that the father always regards the author as a child who still needs to be protected, so he gives him thoughtful care anytime and anywhere.

As for "I was really too smart then" and "I was so smart then", that is what the author meant by rethinking himself afterwards. "Too smart" and "too smart", in other words, "not smart at all". Why isn't it smart at all?

Because at that time, I only felt that my father "didn't speak very beautifully" and secretly laughed at my father's "roundaboutness", but I couldn't be considerate of my father's love for his son.

This article is clean, there are no superfluous words, no superfluous words, even a "of" word, a "has" word is necessary to use. Read a few more articles, and you will naturally have a number.

How long has it been since I saw you? What I love most is your back. Whenever I think of you, the back of the fat, green cotton robe and black cloth horse coat resurfaces in front of me.

You've worked hard all your life, but you don't want to do anything, and when you're a child, you can only miss the past when your deadline is approaching. We are all nostalgic for the past, we know how to cherish when we lose, and I cherish it now for you, but it is too late to regret it, and everything is beyond our reach. Your breath is so short, losing its eternal color, I reach out to grab you, but you ride the wind.

Everything is so regrettable. Thousands of years later, I am waiting for you in reincarnation, waiting for you, who have long since lost eternity.