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1. Original text. Holding Qi Yu with an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Wandering in the long、

Long. Lonely rain alley.

I hope it will be.

A clove like that.

A girl with a grudge.

She is. The color of lilacs.

Lilac-like fragrance.

Lilac-like sorrow.

Wailing in the rain.

Complaining and hesitating.

She wandered in this lonely rainy alley.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella.

Like me. Like me.

Silently.

Indifferent, desolate, and melancholy.

She approached silently.

Approached, cast again.

Tai Xi general vision.

She floated by. Like a dream.

It's as miserable and confused as a dream.

It's like floating in a dream.

A sprig of lilac ground.

This girl floated past me.

She was silently far away

Far away. to the crumbling fence.

Walk through this rainy alley.

In the lament of the rain.

Faded her color.

Scattered her fragrance.

dissipated, even hers.

The eyes of the breath.

Lilac-like melancholy.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Wandering in the long、

Long. Lonely rain alley.

I want to float by.

A clove like that.

A girl with a grudge.

2. Appreciation. Rain Alley is a modern poem written by Chinese poet Dai Wangshu in 1927. The poem describes the lyrical protagonist "holding an oil-paper umbrella" and wandering alone in a long and lonely rainy alley.

He had an ethereal hope that he would meet "a girl with a grief like a lilac," a girl with the color and fragrance of cloves, and a sorrow and grief in her heart. He met such a girl, but it was fleeting, "as in a dream," and her color, fragrance, "breath-like eyes," and "lilac-like melancholy" all dissipated in "the lamentation of the rain." He still "holds an oil-paper umbrella", wandering alone in the long and lonely rainy alley, still hoping to float past "a girl with grievances like lilacs".

In Rain Alley, the poet uses symbolic imagery and imagery groups to build lyrical space, convey inner emotions, and integrate the artistic nutrition of ancient Chinese poetry, especially the delicate and graceful poetry of the late Tang Dynasty. Not only that, but the poem's artistic success lies in its harmonious rhythmic beauty.

This is a lyrical mood rich in symbolic colors. Here, the poet metaphorizes the dark and dreary social reality of the time as a long, narrow and lonely "rain alley". There is no sound, no joy, no sunshine.

And the poet himself is such a lonely person wandering in the rainy alley. He had a good hope in his loneliness. I hope that a beautiful ideal will appear in front of me.

The poet's "lilac-like" girl is a symbol of this beautiful ideal. However, the psalmist knows that such a beautiful ideal is difficult to come by. She was as full of sorrow and melancholy as herself, and it was fleeting, drifting past her like a dream.

All that remains is the poet's own lingering in the dark reality, and the hope that is as fleeting as an unfulfilled dream!

Content appreciation.

Dai Wangshu's poems are deeply rooted in the graceful and beautiful poetic style of classical Chinese poetry, but they are also influenced by the French school of symbolic poetry, so his early poems generally show a kind of loneliness, depression and depression.

The poem is written in a hazy trance. "I" seems to have a heart full of worries, infinite worries, but I don't want to say it clearly, or I can't say it. "I" seem to be expecting something and pursuing something, and the goal of expectation and pursuit seems so distant and slim.

She "appeared, perhaps in a hallucination, or it was real, but "she" appeared so quickly, and passed away so quickly, passing by in an instant, disappearing in front of her, "as miserable and confused as a dream". "I" can only feel sorry for myself and sigh for myself.

The "girl" in the poem can be regarded as a real reference, a beautiful, noble and melancholy girl that the poet has been looking forward to for a long time. But we can also regard this "girl" as the poet's hazy ideal and pursuit, representing the poet's vision for the future when he is in a miserable life.

Rain Lane Dai Wangshu.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Lingering in a long, long.

And lonely rain alley, I hope to meet.

A clove-like.

A girl with a grudge.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella.

Like me, like me.

Silent, indifferent, desolate, and melancholy.

She approached silently.

Approached, cast again.

Tai Xi general vision.

It's like floating in a dream.

A sprig of lilacs, and this girl floated beside me;

She silently walked away, far away, to the crumbling hedge, and walked through the rainy alley.

In the lament of the rain, her color was eliminated, holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Lingering in a long, long.

Another lonely rainy alley, I hope to float through.

A clove-like.

A girl with a grudge.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Lingering in a long, long.

And lonely rain alley, I hope to meet.

A clove-like.

A girl with a grudge.

She has the color of cloves, the fragrance of lilacs, the sorrow of lilacs, and she complains in the rain, complains and hesitates;

She wandered in this lonely rainy alley, holding an oil-paper umbrella.

Like me, like me.

Silent, indifferent, desolate, and melancholy.

She approached silently.

Approached, cast again.

With a breath-like gaze, she drifted through a dream-like, dream-like bleak confusion.

It's like floating in a dream.

A sprig of lilacs, and this girl floated beside me;

She silently walked away, far away, to the crumbling hedge, and walked through the rainy alley.

In the lamentation of the rain, her color was extinguished, and her fragrance was scattered.

dissipated, even hers.

The eyes of the breath, the melancholy of the lilacs.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Lingering in a long, long.

Another lonely rainy alley, I hope to float through.

A clove-like.

A girl with a grudge.

She approached silently.

Approached, cast again.

With a breath-like gaze, she floated like a dream, like a dream as miserable and confused.

It's like floating in a dream.

A sprig of lilacs, and this girl floated beside me;

She silently walked away, far away, to the fence wall of decadence (pǐ), and walked through this rainy alley.

In the lamentation of the rain, her color was extinguished, and her fragrance was scattered.

dissipated, even hers.

The eyes of the breath, the melancholy of the lilacs.

Holding an oil-paper umbrella, alone.

Lingering in a long, long.

Another lonely rainy alley, I hope to float through.

A clove-like.

A girl with a grudge.

Rain Alley is Dai Wangshu's early famous and representative work. After the poem was published, it had a great impact, and the poet was also called the "Rain Lane Poet". The poem depicts a gloomy picture of the alleys of Jiangnan during the rainy season, thus forming a lyrical mood rich in strong symbolism.

Here, the poet metaphorizes the dark and gloomy social reality of that time as a long, narrow and lonely "rain alley", with no sunlight, no vitality and vitality. And the lyrical protagonist "I" is a lonely wanderer in such a rainy alley.

In "Rain Alley", the poet created a lilac-like girl with a grievance. The use of lilac knots, that is, the buds of lilacs, to symbolize people's sorrow is a traditional expression method in ancient Chinese poetry.