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The Ministry Edition of the Fourth Grade Volume I Language Garden VII: Communication Platform.
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First, in terms of the idea of wheel town, it is necessary to combine all the pieces.
Whether you are writing an article or writing an article, it is very important to plan the layout of the article.
article, that is, to have a main line. The idea should be highly clear and clear.
block, is to figure out how many parts.
Second, in terms of content, the main points are combined.
It is necessary to combine micro and macro, there are big scenes, there are also small details, the upper antenna, and the lower ground.
Third, in terms of rhythm, it should be soothing and combined. The bureau is rotten.
It's like playing a piece of music all the time, with high notes and low notes. Some are fast, some are slow. Passionate when it should be exciting, lyrical when it should be lyrical.
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1. Topic extension method. The title of some articles can highly summarize the content of the article, and if you expand and enrich it a little, you will get the main content of the article. For example, the title of the lesson "Flying to Capture the Huding Bridge" should be appropriately added:
This article is about the Red Army's journey to the 25,000-mile Long March, overcoming many difficulties and seizing the Luding Bridge. That's the main point of the text.
2. Element induction method. Narratives generally contain four elements: time, place, people, and events. Identifying the four elements of the text and organizing them properly is the main content.
For example, the four elements of the article "Dong Cunrui sacrificed himself to blow up the hidden fort": the time is May 25, 1948, the location is near Longhua Middle School, the character is Dong Cunrui, and the incident is that Dong Cunrui sacrificed himself to blow up the hidden fort. Summarizing these four elements leads to the main contents:
On May 25, 1948, in the battle to liberate Longhua, Dong Cunrui resolutely sacrificed himself at a critical moment to blow up the hidden fort on the way.
1) Huang Jiguang's battalion received a new combat mission; (2) Huang Jiguang asked the instructor to fight; (3) Huang Jiguang fought tenaciously and died heroically.
For example, in the article "Raising Flowers", it can be summarized according to the ending paragraph: the text mainly writes that there are joys and sorrows, laughter and tears, flowers and fruits, fragrance and color. It requires both labor and knowledge.
5. Take the main rounding method. For articles that have written about several events, first distinguish the priority of the event, and then summarize its main content according to the main one.
For example, "Falling Peanuts" writes about planting peanuts, harvesting peanuts and tasting peanuts. Judging from the article, "planting peanuts" and "harvesting peanuts" are written briefly and are secondary; "Taste the peanuts" is written in detail and is the main one. According to the order of the text, the main content of the article can be summarized as follows:
My "family had a peanut harvest festival.
6. Problem method. Some questions, as long as they come out, summarize the main content. For example, "Flying to Luding Bridge" raises the following questions:
The text is written about under what circumstances did the Red Army fly to capture the Luding Bridge? How did they "fly" and how did they "take"? The result?
Summing up these issues is the main content.
In short, there are many ways to summarize the main content, and no matter which method is used, we must first read and analyze it carefully.
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Writing ideas: Take the text as the main content, and look at this matter through the perspective of his father Jerry
When Jerry came running and told me that Hunter was trapped on that cliff, my heart felt like it was being tugged at hard. When I ran to the cliff, I saw that familiar little shadow, and I wanted to rush up and carry him down, but I soon found that Hunter was not very high, and the average child could definitely come down, and my heart was relieved.
I realized that this was a good opportunity to help him out of this situation. I shone a flashlight on him to make him realize I was coming, and said, "Come down, kid." I tried to keep my voice as calm as possible, "Dinner is ready." ”
If I don't go down, I'll fall to my death. Henry cried out. "Listen to me," I said, "don't think about how far it is." You just have to think that you are taking a small step. You can do it, and after a while, the little figure began to move. ”
I suddenly felt a little sour in my nose, like I saw him walk for the first time. I looked nervously at the figure, so weak in the light of the flashlight, but it moved slowly and firmly. Finally Henry came down safely, and I caught him.
Well done, cowboy! I'm so proud of you! "I realized that my palms were covered with sweat.
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Writing ideas: Write about the beauty of osmanthus rain.
When the osmanthus flowers were at their most mature, my grandmother and mother came to collect the osmanthus with plastic film, dustpans and other things. Laying out the plastic film under the osmanthus tree, my sister and I were very excited, and my grandmother shook the osmanthus tree desperately, the golden little osmanthus shook down all the way, and suddenly it was like a rain of osmanthus flowers, it was soft and fine and dense, and it fell on our hair and shoulders, and a few homeopathic got into our arms.
My sister and I were wrapped in the refreshing fragrance of the whole body, and we all became fragrant "osmanthus people", and the earth dog Lao Huang also put on the "osmanthus jacket", excitedly snorted a few times, wagging his tail and circling in the yard. We were playing in the yard, the ground was covered with golden osmanthus flowers, and it was soft to step on it, and our hearts were a little unbearable. So he stopped and helped his mother collect the osmanthus flowers and move them to the middle of the yard to bask in the sun.
The context of the article is clear, the writing is fluent, and the reader is easy to accept.
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