What is the expressive effect of the contrast in the summer feeling?

The author of this article grasps the characteristics of summer's warmth, urgency, and unfulfilled harvest to depict the vigorous growth of all things on the golden land in summer, expressing the author's love for summer and his deep praise for the working people.

Xia Gan adopts the writing order of (total - points - total), which is clear and hierarchical. The article uses metaphors and personifications of speech.

Appreciation of summer sense.

1. Change the word to taste. Example: "But I want to shout praises about this ** summer between spring and autumn."

**Is it good to change to "golden"? "**" not only writes color, but more importantly, writes Xia's "precious". Teacher Zhao changed like this, and this change, the children not only "tasted" the sentence, but also "tasted" the "summer".

2. Look at the beauty of rhetoric. Example: "It's as if a pot of water on a stove is gradually bubbling and bubbling until it finally boils."

It has a visual effect and should be closed in the first sentence of the opening chapter to highlight the "intense, warm, and urgent" characteristics of summer. Originally, these "characteristics" were abstract, but here we use metaphors to turn abstraction into concreteness.

3. Look at the sentence structure. "The color of spring is cold green, like blue waves, like tender bamboo, full of hope; The color of autumn is hot red, like the sunset, like red leaves, marking the ultimate of things. These two sentences describing spring and autumn are highly generalized and vivid.

They have the same sentence structure, the same number of words, and the sentences are staggered and catchy.

4. Look at the keywords. "The fine grass on the hillside gradually grew into a dense thick hair, and the faint green smoke on the forest belt also condensed into a long wall of dark colors. There are two verbs here, "nourishment" and "condensation", both of which are written as "grass" and "green" in summer, one is like "thick hair" grass, and the other is like green smoke on a long wall.

The two verbs write the process of change from spring to summer, "nourishment" contains the meaning of prosperity and growth, and "condensation" means condensation. Another example: "The fiery red sun bakes a golden earth, and the waves of wheat roll, beating the mountains in the distance, the clouds in the sky, and the cars on the road, like the waves of the sea surging ships one after another."

The words "baking", "fluttering" and "gushing" can still be playful.

1. The eagerness to yearn for spring——— looking forward to, looking forward to, and using two "anticipation" in a row is a repeated way of writing. Repetition can more vividly highlight the urgency.

2. "Glad to be Ran" contains the author's joyful mood, and the long-awaited spring is coming.

3. Through lyrical techniques, the author uses repetitive and anthropomorphic rhetorical methods to write us his eagerness to yearn for the arrival of spring, as well as his closeness to spring and his feelings of liking spring.

Theme: The author of this article grasps the characteristics of the warm and rapid summer, the harvest has been unfulfilled and the hope is not exhausted, depicts the scene of the vigorous growth of all things on the golden land in summer, and expresses the author's love for summer and his deep praise for the working people.

Summer Sense" Liang Heng.

Excerpt from the original text: The whole summer is filled with a tense, enthusiastic, and rapid melody.

As if a pot of water on the stove was gradually bubbling and steaming until it finally boiled, the fine grass on the hillside grew into a dense thick hair, and the faint green smoke on the forest belt condensed into a long wall of dark colors. The fluttering bee butterflies are gone, but they are replaced by annoying cicadas, which chirp one after another among the underlying leaves.

The fiery red sun baked a golden earth, and the waves of wheat rolled, beating the distant mountains, the clouds in the sky, and the cars on the road, like the waves of the sea surging against ships.

Gold dominates everything in the world, hot winds.

Floating, wafting across the fields, blowing the scent of ripe wheat. After half a year of accumulation, the spirit of spring has become a majestic momentum, rolling on the fields and rising between heaven and earth. Summer is here.

The central idea: The description of plants and trees in the article is very charming. Next to the branches, spring represents the germination of tung oaks, autumn represents harvest, and summer represents tension and enthusiasm.

The scenery in reality and the author's mind reflect each other, harmonious and beautiful. The plants are all sprinting towards maturity, majestic and imposing. The author eulogizes life, and he loves summer.

This article describes the scene of summer, showing the tense, enthusiastic and rapid characteristics of summer, and expressing the author's unique love for summer.

The author's thoughts and feelings: praise the summer scene, but also praise the working people.