In the third grade, 10 sick sentences were modified, and the third grade was revised in sick sentenc

Uncle PLA shot down five enemy aircraft and three **.

Complacency is an obstacle to learning.

These are artifacts unearthed in the Tang Dynasty.

watched this TV series and was deeply impressed.

The park has two new British-funded rides.

I guess he must have done it wrong.

He rushed into the classroom and happily announced the good news of tomorrow's spring outing.

Listening to this report has made us understand many truths.

In winter, the cold wind howls and makes people shiver.

Even if you are a genius, you are also inseparable from the training and education of teachers.

Modify the sentence for the third grade as follows:First, the composition is incomplete.

1. When I heard the news that my country had launched another artificial satellite, I jumped for joy.

2. Xiao Zhou humbly accepts his classmates.

3. We need to practice patriotism among young people.

4. We have a good habit of eating since childhood.

Second, the word order is confused.

1. We must carefully correct and carefully check the mistakes in the homework.

2. This is a very large ocean-going cargo ship made in China.

3. In the past, our school did not pay enough attention to hygiene.

4. The young reporters of the brigade department learned a lot about Xiao Ming's advanced deeds.

3. Repetitive and cumbersome.

1. In class, students listened attentively and attentively to the teacher's lecture.

2. We are dancing beautifully.

3. The main reason for Lingling's good academic performance is the result of her hard work.

4. The old man picked up the hoe and beat the wolf in his pocket to death with a hoe.

Fourth, improper matching.

1. If we have shortcomings, we should improve them.

2. What a beautiful season Xiangshan Park is in autumn!

3. The small football game increased the friendship between the students in each class.

4. Reading more good books can improve our knowledge.

5. Improper use of words.

1. Marx and Engels debated the truth of communism very hotly.

2. "Half a bottle of water, jingle bell" people with shallow knowledge always like to praise themselves.

3. The wounded were carried off the front line intermittently.

Common types of sick sentences include incomplete sentence components, improper collocation of words, repetitive and verbose semantics, incorrect word order, inconsistencies, ambiguous or wrong sentence meanings, illogical, and indiscriminate use of related words.

1. Hang the painting on a nail with a string.

Instead: Dad hung the painting on a nail with a rope.

2. During class, I spoke very actively.

Changed to: During the class, the students spoke very actively.

3. Students should have a clean and tidy campus environment.

Instead: Students should keep the campus environment clean and tidy.

4. Won the first place.

Changed to: Xiaohua won the first place.

5. After class, the campus suddenly boiled.

Changed to: Class is over, and the campus is suddenly boiling.

6. Both the old and the young love to watch sports.

Changed to: Both the elderly and the young love to watch sports.

7. The mountains are full of flowers.

Changed to: The mountains are full of flowers.

8. We read extracurricular books to increase our knowledge and writing skills.

9. We clean the classroom neatly.

Instead: We clean the classrooms.

10. The people's living standards have increased compared with the past.

It read: The people's standard of living has improved compared to the past.

1. Summer in Xiaoxinganling is a beautiful place.

Modified: "Summer in Little Xing'anling" was changed to "Little Xing'anling in Summer".

2. He is full of confidence in whether he can learn the computer well.

Modified: Removed "Can".

3. At present, the concept of environmental protection of the masses is relatively weak, and it really needs to be greatly improved.

Amend: "improve" with "strengthen".

4. Primary school students should love the habit of reading from an early age.

Modify: after "to be" insert "cultivate".

5. Uncle PLA shot down five enemy planes and three **.

Modified: Removed "and three ships".

6. Pride and complacency are obstacles to learning.

Modified: Removed "Up".

7. These are cultural relics unearthed in the Tang Dynasty.

Modified: Removed "unearthed".

8. At the panel discussion, everyone's speeches were very violent.

Modified: "violent" to "violent".

9. The park has set up two new amusement projects built with British aid.

Amendment: "two British-aided" is replaced by "two British-aided".

10. Lanlan's spirit of helping others is worthy of everyone's touching.

Amendment: "moved" to "learned".

11. On the first day of the exhibition, many workers, peasants, soldiers, students and women attended.

Amendment: Remove "and women".

12. It was not until the second half of the 19th century that corals were discovered to be carnivores living in the sea.

Amendment: "Coral is discovered" is changed to "Corals are discovered".

13. When the Eight-Nation Coalition invaded our country, they burned down and ransacked the Old Summer Palace in the western suburbs of Beijing.

Amendment: "G-8" read "Britain and France".

14. After visiting the machinery factory and the children's toy factory, they said in unison: "The equipment of this factory is really advanced. ”

Modify: After this, insert "two".

15. Last year, China's oil output was one of the largest oil exporters in the world.

Modified: Removed "oil output".

16. These descriptions show the humble and simple image of the protagonist.

Modified: "Image" to "Character".

17. Under the education of the teacher, I have corrected my learning attitude and methods.

Modified: "And" to "Improved learning".

18. The students listened to the teacher's lecture with great interest.

Changed: "Bright" to "Concentrate".

19. Beneficial birds such as swallows, woodpeckers, and frogs all eat pests and are good friends of humans.

Modified: Removed "and frogs".

20. Today is the fifth birthday of my little cousin.

Changed: "Birthday" to "Birthday".

Ding went to the supermarket and bought a lot of vegetables, including pumpkin, carrots, watermelon and cucumbers.

Improper classification: remove , watermelon is fine!

Modify the sentence for the third grade as follows:

1. An excellent professor of the Department of Chinese of Peking University with more than 30 years of teaching experience.

Changed to: An excellent professor with more than 30 years of teaching experience in the Department of Chinese, Peking University.

2. In order to write the ** assigned by the teacher, many students in the reading room have been reading the bridge hungrily in recent days.

3. He jumped off the pond, came to the edge of the pond, and quickly swam over.

Instead: he came to the edge of the pool, jumped off the pond, and quickly swam over.

How to modify the sentence:

1. Understand several common types of sick sentences, especially the 6 types pointed out in the "Examination Instructions": improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, chaotic structure, unclear meaning, and illogical. Be familiar with the usual way of correcting sentences.

2. When revising the sick sentence, the original meaning must be retained, and it cannot be changed. Because the purpose of modifying the sick sentence is to make the sentence expression accurate and the sentence clear.

3. Start from a grammatical point of view and grasp the main stem of the sentence. Whether it is a single sentence or a compound sentence, if you grasp the main stem of the sentence, you will also grasp the basic meaning of the sentence, which is conducive to retaining the original meaning when changing the sentence. When grasping the trunk, pay attention to identify whether there is something wrong with the trunk, such as whether there are defective components, improper collocation of subject-verb and verb-object, etc.

Modify the sentence for the third grade as follows:First, the composition is incomplete.

1. When I heard the news that my country had launched another artificial satellite, I jumped for joy.

2. Xiao Zhou humbly accepts his classmates.

3. We need to practice patriotism among young people.

4. We have a good habit of eating since childhood.

Second, the word order is confused.

1. We must carefully correct and carefully check the mistakes in the homework.

2. This is a very large ocean-going cargo ship made in China.

3. In the past, our school did not pay enough attention to hygiene.

4. The little reporter of the brigade department learned a lot of Xiao Ming's advanced deeds.

3. Repetitive and cumbersome.

1. In class, students listened attentively and attentively to the teacher's lecture.

2. We are dancing beautifully.

3. The main reason for Lingling's good academic performance is the result of her hard work.

4. The old man picked up the hoe and beat the wolf in his pocket to death with a hoe.

Fourth, the improper matching of the chain.

1. If we have shortcomings, we should improve them.

2. What a beautiful season Xiangshan Park is in autumn!

3. The small football game increased the friendship between the students in each class.

4. Reading more good books can improve our knowledge.

5. Improper use of words.

1. Marx and Engels debated the truth of communism very hotly.

2. "Half a bottle of water, jingle bell" people with shallow knowledge always like to praise themselves.

3. The wounded were carried off the front line intermittently.