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Snowflakes fell from the sky one after another.

The one in the distance is good.

Like a streamer source, her sinuous body flowed along the soles of the mountain. zhi

The emerald green willows, silver drizzle, verdant mountains and the rejuvenation of the earth that greeted DAO's eyes seemed to be loudly announcing "Spring has arrived, spring has arrived!" ”

The spring girl is the messenger of the god of the wind, constantly blowing the sleepy-eyed misty earth, it is her hospitality, the grass gently sways its tender buds, the wind is crispy and plays with its silky skirt, the spring butterfly also dances for her, and the dance is the remnant of tonight.

The woodpecker seems to be a busy gardener, and in the minds of our memories, there is no shadow of him resting, only the unforgettable back of him when he was buried in Haruki's "medical treatment".

Walking at night in my spare time, what makes me sleepless at night is not only the night incense that blooms that night, but also the white and jade-like moon hanging in the endless sky.

A small stream sings along the foot of the mountain.

Spring has arrived, and the earth has been clothed with new clothes.

The wind blew the grass and danced in the air.

Woodpeckers use their beaks to heal trees.

At night the moon hangs in the sky like a round pie.

A small stream flows happily along the base of the mountain.

The fiery red sun slowly climbed the hillside from the east.

Rows of graceful willow trees are reflected in the mirror-like water.

In the golden orchard, flocks of sparrows chirped non-stop.

When it's quiet, the happy crickets start playing a wonderful **.

1. The red sun slowly spreads golden light to the earth from the east.

2. The green willow trees dye the river green like a dyer.

3. The pesky sparrows chirp selflessly in the orchard.

4. Timid crickets only secretly call in the dead of night.

Don't trample on flowers and plants Rewrite to: Keep our feet away from flowers and trees Prompt: Do not chase and fight Rewrite to: Chase is not fun. Beware of rear-end chases.

Prompt: Please do not make noise in the reading room Rewritten as: Books will also feel noisy, don't let them cover their ears.

If you think it's okay, please add some points, I'm a newbie. \(o^)/~）

1.Flowers and plants are sleeping, don't disturb it2Less chasing and fighting, more happiness and harmony 3The reading room is not noisy, cares about others, and loves everyone.

Don't trample on flowers and plants, rewrite it as: flowers and plants are knowledgeable, and your feet are merciful.

It is forbidden to chase and fight, and it is rewritten as: Chasing and fighting is fun, but please go to the playground to do it.

Please do not make noise in the reading room, rewrite it as: Quietly you go, just as you come quietly.

Flowers and plants are affectionate, cherish them.

Unintentional chasing and fighting may cause harm to others!

Hush! Be quiet. A quiet reading environment depends on you and me.

1.The quiet environment is something you and I want to enjoy.

2.Take away the wisdom and leave the literature to everyone - others want to take away the wisdom inside.

1.Less fighting, more friendship.

2.Less noise, more knowledge.

This is a summer vacation homework 27 pages too! The answer is the same as above!

You are a person, a person is a person.

In the first step, you need to read the example sentences carefully. Understand the sentence structure of example sentences, the rhetorical devices used, the expressions used, etc.

The second step is to understand what the example sentence is about. For example, whether to write about people, objects, or scenes, what is the central idea it wants to express.

The third step is to write a similar sentence first by imitating the rhetorical devices, expressions, and sentence structure contained in the example sentence. This step is done on scratch paper.

Fourth, revise the sentence you have rewritten. After revising it, read it carefully several times yourself. If there are no problems, copy the sentences to the test paper

After this lecture, I was very inspired by everyone.

Through the discussion, our resolve was strengthened.

Through this donation activity organized by the school, I deeply realized that the endless love of the 1.3 billion Chinese can overcome all difficulties.

In the design and construction of the "Bird's Nest" stadium, the extraordinary wisdom of human beings is fully reflected.

When I heard this story, I was reminded of many things from the past.

Because of her good grades, she was praised by her teachers and classmates.

On October 14th, with the idea of learning from the Department of Aeronautics, our blackboard newspaper was launched.

Through this study, I received a profound education.

(Witty)**(excitingly) captivating (thousands) of viewers. (tall, straight) poplar trees (neatly) line the (straight and flat) road. Snowflakes are falling.

( Graceful )** (Constantly) Attracting Audiences (From All Directions). (Tall) poplar trees (neatly) line the (wide) road. Snowflakes fall (from the sky).

The melodious and tactful ** continues to attract audiences from all directions.

Tall and majestic poplar trees line the straight and deep streets.

Clear, white snowflakes swirled and fluttered down.

It can make the sentence more detailed and vivid.