Methods of Describing Scenes 10, Methods of Describing Scenes

Have people, times, places, and events.

The scene is described as follows:

1. The sky is blue, and the white clouds float freely on it. Suddenly, a large cloud gathered from all directions. In a few moments, the sky was completely blackened.

2. All of a sudden, the rain fell like beads with broken threads. The raindrops fell in the pond, causing countless ripples, like flowers on the head of a goldfish. The rain fell on the fields, and the crops opened their mouths wide and drank the sweet rain to their heart's content, and in a moment, the crops seemed to have grown a lot.

The rain fell on the delicate flower girls, and they all immediately lowered their little heads, looking very shy.

3. After a while, the rain became heavier. Rainwater fell on the concrete road, washing it clean.

4. On the road in the rain, people are holding umbrellas and walking slowly. The umbrella is colorful and varied, like a beautiful "big flower" floating around in the rain, very beautiful. No, looking down from a high place, I really think it's a flower!

5. I don't know when, the spring rain fell, the rain was like silk, light and thin, I couldn't hear the sound of dripping, and I couldn't feel the rain.

6. You see, the flowers and plants look like they have just taken a bath and changed into bright new clothes, and they look so vibrant. The little animals that had just disappeared without a trace also ran out of the four places, and they seemed to be fighting to breathe in the particularly fresh air after the rain. And so, the world was noisy again.

The main function of scene depiction is to serve the shaping of the character image and the expression of the theme of the work. Scene depiction refers to the depiction of the prosperous life picture centered on the activities of the characters within a specific time and place, and is the main means of portraying the characters, plots, and expressing themes.

1) The most important role of scene description is to serve the shaping of the character image and the expression of the theme of the work.

2) The scene description deliberately renders the atmosphere, or joy, tranquility, or pathos, tension, so that the characters can move in a certain environment.

3) The scene description deliberately highlights the theme, or explicit or dark points, so that the characters can complete their mission in the activity, and the author's tendency is naturally revealed in the specific scene description.

1) It is necessary to look horizontally and see what is happening at the same time in the whole scene, and not just one point.

2) It is necessary to use the combination of points and surfaces.

The method of writing the whole scene is in condition. It is necessary to have an overall summary and a specific description of the key points, and generally adopt the method of first summarizing and then describing.

3) The activities of the characters should be intertwined, which is biased towards dynamic depiction and dry writing. If it's an environmental depiction.

It focuses on static depictions.

Scene description: It is a description of the general situation of the activities of many characters in a specific time and place. (It is often a comprehensive use of narrative, description, lyricism and other expression methods, and is a concentrated expression of the natural scenery, social environment, character activities and other depicted objects.)

Common scenes include labor scenes, battle scenes, sports scenes, and various meeting scenes. In order to show a specific atmosphere, it is not enough to use a single way of expression and writing technique, but to comprehensively use narrative, description, lyricism, argumentation and other means of expression, as well as contrast, symbolism and other techniques, so as to make the scene into a vivid and appealing picture. ）

In the description of a scene, there can be one, many, or one thing. However, it is necessary to focus on character description, supplemented by scenes. The scene description should serve the performance of the characters and the center of prominence.

The description of the scene is indispensable to the scenery, the psychological activities and language of the characters.

Explain the background of the scene.

For example, the time, place, and environment in which the event took place, so that people can know what kind of social or natural environment the scene is taking place.

It is necessary to write specific on the basis of writing the overall situation.

When writing a scene, it is necessary to have a general summary of the scene, so that the reader has an idea of the overall appearance. However, at the same time, the scene should also have a key part, and this part should be written in detail and concretely, so that it can be a little bit and comprehensive.

To write about the atmosphere.

Atmosphere is a mood or emotion that a person sees or feels in a certain environment. No matter what the scene, there will be an atmosphere, such as a celebration scene with a joyful atmosphere; There was a tense atmosphere in the game scene; The farewell scene has an inseparable atmosphere and so on.

How to describe a scene:The description of the scene should explain the time, place and atmosphere of the scene, so that the reader can easily grasp the general outline of the scene.

In the description of the scene, you can write people, scenes, things, things, and feelings combined, so that the whole scene is dynamic and static, and the image is real and full of strong life atmosphere. Therefore, the description of the scene should be wide and ink.

Scene description examples.

1. The sun has set, and the sunset fills the sky on both sides, dyeing the campus bright orange red.

It's beautiful. At the end of the labor, we did feel very tired, and there was still soil on our hands, but when we saw the campus after the labor, we thought of the small trees, green grasses, and colorful flowers that would soon appear, and we didn't feel tired, but felt relaxed and happy, and our hearts were sweet.

2. First of all, the opening ceremony will be held. Lo and behold, the colorful flags are fluttering in the wind, greeting the audience! Listen, the mighty drum sound came into everyone's ears, into everyone's heart, aroused the athletes' heart to compete upward, and the whole stadium looked solemn and solemn in a drum sound.

Environmental Description: 1The description of the natural environment is the description of the place, season, climate, time, and scene of the person's activities. It plays a role in setting off the mood of the characters, driving the development of the storyline, and highlighting and highlighting the center.

2.The description of the social environment generally refers to the description of the social background, the atmosphere of the times, and the regional features.

In addition, according to the narrator's expressive techniques, descriptions (including character descriptions and environmental descriptions) can be divided into frontal descriptions, side descriptions, scene descriptions, and detailed descriptions.

1.Positive depiction (direct depiction) is a direct depiction of a person or environment.

2.Side depiction (indirect depiction) is the effect of "baking clouds and supporting the moon" by depicting other people or the environment and highlighting the characters and scenes from the side.

3.Scene depiction is a description of large-scale social activities or scenes of life, battle, labor, and entertainment in which many people participate, reflecting the face of society and various aspects of life, and reflecting macroscopic natural phenomena.

4.Detail description refers to the detailed description of some small changes that have a special role in the performance of characters and plot development, including actions, expressions, objects, environments, etc.

Scenes with momentum are the most attractive, and they will make people feel thrilling after reading. The following is a combination of points and facets for everyone, welcome to read for your reference.

Use point-to-point composition 1

On Thursday, our school held the XX Winter Athletics Day. On this day, the playground was bustling with cheers, cheers, and applause. Lo and behold, the 200-meter run is about to begin, and the athletes on the field are ready to go, like warriors on the battlefield, all ambitious, because they have to fight for the honor of the collective.

With a whistle, the athletes rushed towards the finish line like arrows off the string, speeding past us. "Come on, come on! The shouts of the cheerleaders were deafening, and the audience was boiling.

You see, Jiang Yuheng, the runner in our class, saw him swinging his arms and his feet like the wind, and finally ran in front. But the classmates in other classes were not to be outdone, and ran forward after Jiang Yuheng. When they got closer and closer to the finish line, they were still up and down, and the cheerleaders shouted higher and higher.

The hearts of my classmates were so tight that my heart almost rose to my throat, and I really wanted to go over and push Jiang Yuheng. Jiang Yuheng really lived up to our hopes, he heard the cheerleaders shouting for themselves, his feet were like stepping on hot wheels, and finally the second one crossed the finish line.

We won, we won! "The students in our class cheered, and the joy was indescribable. In this sports meeting, Xiao Jie was the first place in the 100 meters, and the second place in the 400 meters was my ......These students have won the honor of our class and are the pride of our class.

This athletics meeting is so intense! It's wonderful!

Use points and surfaces to combine composition 2

In the classroom, I was just a little rat, locked in a hole. I really want to be able to get out of the cave one day, see the wild world, and complete my dream!

In the classroom, I can only listen to the teacher's constant nagging; Looking out the window, I can only envy the birds flying outside. However, when I get out of the classroom, I can fly freely like a bird; I can bloom the flowers in my heart, and I can enjoy the beauty of the world! Stepping out of the classroom, I may be able to add a lot of safety knowledge that the teacher has not taught and will not teach.

When I walk out of the classroom, I will run to the clear blue sky and the blue sea; When I walk out of the classroom, I don't think about those few paragraphs of Yuzai anymore, I just hug the world.

As a kid, I could literally play with my classmates all day in the classroom, but that's not the case anymore! The teachers are more fierce than the other, and each one is more terrifying! So, just want to get out of the classroom.

I've been delusional about how nice it would be to get out of this nightmare! The exam is like a monster, the grades are like a witch, and the big exam is like hell. Unfortunately, this is not a dream, and during class, I really want to take time off, so I love to take time off because I can get out of the classroom.

When I was in class, I could only look out the window, and I wanted to get out of the classroom and see the beautiful world!

On the first floor is the food section, where all kinds of mouth-watering snacks, desserts, vegetables, aquatic products and fruits are placed on the shelves. I was so excited that I ran to the fruit section to grab my favorite golden oranges, round grapes, and big, round watermelons, and fill my shopping cart without hesitation. Mom was dumbfounded.

Ha! I winked at my mother and stuck out my tongue, who told her to promise me to decide everything today. Mom pretended to be helpless and shook her head.

Then we came to the vegetable and meat sections, where the cabbage was fresh and tender, the spinach was green, the beetroot was shining, the red peppers were bright, and the alluring colors made you stop, so I mercilessly filled the basket with vegetables of all colors. Finally, we came to the clothing area, and the clothing of ** can also be described as a thousand gestures. Some stood heroically, some politely, and some were already lying in the arms of their new masters.

I didn't buy anything this time because my mom had already bought me new clothes.

In the afternoon, we ran into Niu Niu, and we sat on the ground and chatted back and forth. After all, we didn't have much opportunity to talk to each other since the class was divided, so our chat grew and eventually developed into a small meeting. We joked with each other and gossiped about the recent situation of learning from Dazhou, anyway, it was not our age that we talked about it, and we all talked about it.

Everyone had a pleasant afternoon under the deafening march.

1. Scene description refers to the social environment and natural environment in which the characters are located.

depiction. 2. Among them, the social environment refers to the buildings, places, furnishings and other scenery that can reflect the characteristics of society and the times, as well as the folk customs of Laohuai. Scene depiction refers to the depiction of the activities of characters (often many characters) in a certain time and environment.