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It's better to find it yourself, it's too demanding!

Writing without skill.

Read more books, you can read any book, the so-called "well-read books".

Writing training, you can write what you see, the more detailed the better.

Practice slowly this month, accumulate knowledge to a certain extent, and you will succeed.

Tricks for this stuff vary from person to person! If you want to improve your writing, you can't rush it! Whatever you do, take it one step at a time!

So if you want to improve your writing level, you still have to read more famous books and magazines such as "Yilin", "Reader", "Sprout" and so on!

Inspired by life, we must be good at observing life, experiencing life, starting from the details, reading more, thinking more, writing more, there is no shortcut to writing.

1 All grace. This article first looks at it from the structure.,The landlord uses the total score.,The opening point question,The end of the question,Although there is no sublimation at the end,But at least it has deepened.,Rhetoric doesn't seem to be much.,Only the opening paragraph.,The landlord has a little bit of a very good.,The article is detailed and appropriate.,Focus on the process and application of accumulation.,But,Well。。 I'll give you a small opinion.,If you guess correctly, the first paragraph is what you found from the Internet.,This may be the same thing your classmates do.,The teacher also advocates this.,But,That is, the style of your beginning and the part of your own writing in the middle is very different.,It feels a little weird.,It may not be able to achieve the effect you want.,And then there are some unnecessary words in your article.,For example, "four exams in a row......When the fifth exam, "This paragraph is not necessary, maybe you want to reflect your accumulation of ancient poems and the like are more hierarchical, and you will use it in the end, but it gives me the feeling that your accumulation is not necessary, and it is only used by chance, well...

Dear, is this your homework?

Well, the content is rustic, the events are mundane and small. It shows that the author is more observant. And the composition is higher than life and higher than life.

Structure.. A very normal narrative. I used a little skepticism (the exam was useful to excerpts). The structure is flat and stable. There is a front and back to take care of the end.、It is worthy of praise、

Rhetoric. There are quotations of some sentences, and the beginning of the use of metaphors and comparisons (should be counted as comparisons). It's good, it's worth carrying forward.

Good words and good sentences: On the road of life, understanding is essential. Understanding is a bridge, it can cross the moat; Understanding is a beacon that leads us to success. [The beginning is good.]

Well. My personal humble opinion. Some places are not mentioned or unreasonable, please bear with me!! Hee-hee. By the way, I found that you had a typo. Be careful next time.

Meaningful sentences 1Even if the whole world betrays you, I will stand by you and betray the whole world. 2.

I'm not afraid of going to hell. I'm afraid of hell. 3

I've tried what you want, but I still can't afford it. And what I really want, only you have, but you can never give it to me. 4.

It is not the best that you can't get, it's difficult. A person's goodness can only be understood by those who end up with him. But what is certain is that in everyone's mind, the softest place hidden in the bottom of their hearts is probably the one who once fell in love with the depths but never got it after all.

So, if you meet it one step later, will it only be reduced to a defective product? So, how much risk do you have to take to tell that truth? 5.

Some people can only remember, and some things can only be remembered. No one can do anything about the years that have passed in their lives - whether they have loved, hated, happy, sad, and finally turned the page by time. An inch of acacia and an inch of gray, half an inch is left for yesterday, and half an inch is kept today.

6."Qingzhi, if you can choose it, what would you like to be in the next life? I thought about it:

Flowers, butterflies, insects, fish, birds, birds and beasts. If there is really an afterlife, I only want to turn into flowers, butterflies, insects, fish, birds, birds and beasts. — Swear not to be a man.

7."I taught the people I like how to love, but it's a pity that ......The person he loves is not me. ” 8.

Something bloomed with these meteor showers in the body and then disappeared. Fall into the sea and there will be no trace. The so-called dream is like fireworks, the heart is like water, coming and going, the real is also virtual.

Shall we be together forever? May I? May I?

9.If two people meet each other and look up together, that place is heaven. 10.

Xia Yunchu's smile was exactly the same as that morning in his memory, like a breeze blowing the bright moon shining on the river: "As long as the eldest brother does not dislike Yun Chu, although Yun Chu has not liked to laugh since he was a child, he is willing to raise his eyebrows for the eldest brother." ” 11.

I don't believe in happiness, I believe in you 12As long as I breathe, I will call you my everything. As long as I live, I will never hide you.

13.There is no fault in life, only missing 14The Aegean Sea is you, the Black Sea is me.

Here we are half of the ocean. ......I hope that in the next life, we are an indivisible ocean. 15.

As long as you shed a tear for me, I can live for you. 16.I smiled and saw his future, happy and not related to me, so ......That's enough, whether my position is a friend or someone who once loved him, this ending is no regrets.

One is loyal to another. 17.Don't comfort me if you leave me, you know that every time you stitch up, that heart will suffer a puncture pain.

18.When you love someone, even torture is a kind of happiness. The initial love is the best, and only later does it turn bad.

Don't squander love, love will run out.