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Supplementary topic: Tour the West Lake.
Writing ideas: At the beginning, it is a simple description of people's praise of the scenery of the West Lake, and then a detailed description of the West Lake is made to write the characteristics of the West Lake.
Text: It's already summer vacation, and my mother wants to take me to Hangzhou West Lake for a trip, and I am so happy that I jump three feet high. "There is heaven above, and there is Suzhou and Hangzhou below", this sentence is a proverb that almost everyone knows, expressing people's praise for this "fairyland paradise on earth" full of myths and history.
Hangzhou is especially famous for the beautiful and charming natural scenery of West Lake. The beautiful West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides, one side is close to the city, two embankments lie on the waves, the three islands float in the water, the scenery is beautiful, and the four seasons are different.
The West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides, with sparkling blue waves, and the natural conditions are very superior. There are many strange peaks in the mountains around the lake, and lo and behold, that pair of peaks towers into the clouds, and the clouds and mist are shrouded, as if they have reached a fairyland, looking down, it is really terrifying. We saw the turquoise water again, it was so beautiful!
The water of the lake is crystal clear, tranquil, turquoise and fascinating.
In the lake, each red carp weighs at least three catties. They swam around in groups of three or five in groups of five. Some of them were playing, some were looking for food that tourists threw into the West Lake, and some were welcoming us and performing wonderful dances for us.
On the shore, rows of weeping willows sway in the wind, as if beckoning to visitors to welcome their arrival.
The tender branches were like a young girl, combing her long hair. We took a boat ride around the lake. It happened to be drizzling. The surface of the lake is as if it is white, like a shy girl standing on the blue waves.
Hangzhou West Lake is so beautiful! Make the tour even forgetful.
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Writing ideas for visiting the park: Write down what you see and feel in the park when you play.
Spring has arrived, the green grass quietly shows a green little face from the land, the trees are gradually lush, and the spring flowers are now the most beautiful time, the yellow flowers are so big, it seems that the spring is vibrant, this season is also a good season for farmers to sow seeds, it is very good to go out for a walk in spring.
No, I changed into light spring clothes with my mother and came to the park, the weather is very good today, there is no wind in the sky, the park is full of people who visit the spring, because it is now the Spring Festival, you can see a few mighty dragons at the gate of the park, as if the park is wearing beautiful new clothes, it looks more magnificent, and then go inside, I see rows of peach trees and willow trees, and the branches have grown tender green buds.
The peach tree was covered with small pink flowers, they seemed to think: Hurry up, grow beautiful little flowers, let the sun give us warmth, I walked, I saw the children's favorite pirate ship, then I remembered the scene when I was a child playing with the pirate ship, then I laughed, because I was only five years old at that time, I just went up and started to shake, I just cried and had to stop.
I went to the zoo with my mother, and I saw the animals basking in the sun, and I saw the bear lying on the ground, its eyes motionless, and it was too lazy to stand up and look at the tourists, and the tiger, which was also lazy, licking its paws with its tongue, and falling asleep, and the baby fish, which was in the water, motionless.
There are also sika deer, they snuggle up one by one, with their eyes closed, and there are cute monkeys, some little monkeys jump over, some old monkeys catch lice for the little monkeys, I reluctantly walked out of the park Spring not only brings life to everything, but also the beginning of a new year.
The ancients said well: "The beginning of the year lies in spring", and I want to learn and progress in the new year.
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Essay on Lushan Mountain 400 words.
This summer, my parents took me to Lushan for a trip, and finally let me witness the style of Lushan.
There are beautiful splendid valleys, misty Lulin Lake, Huanglongtan where you wash your hands and make good luck, beautiful Ruqin Lake, spectacular Sandi Spring, and Grandpa Jiang's summer resort. . . Wait, what I remember the most is Lulin Lake and Sandi Spring. Lulin Lake is like the divine lake in the sky, the lake water is clear and blue, the lake surface is shrouded in clouds and mist, the lake is "slim and elegant", a breeze blows, the smoke drifts with the wind, and it is like being in a fairyland.
We were all stunned and reluctant to leave for a long time, it was so beautiful!!
I was also impressed by the Sandi Spring, on the first day of Lushan, I heard the tour guide say that the Sandi Spring is a big challenge, and there are many steps to climb. On the last day of the Lushan tour, we went to the Sandi Spring, along the way we talked and laughed while looking at the scenery along the way, taking pictures, while climbing the stairs, about an hour later, there was a very spectacular scene in front of us, a waterfall like a water curtain, from a distance like a huge white cloth belt, from the cliff straight down, and like who sprinkled the sky with thousands of cotton. The waterfall pours into the pool, the water droplets splash in all directions, such as clouds and mist, it is impossible to distinguish which is the water, which is the fog, and the pool water shows a beautiful rainbow under the sunlight.
This time, I really felt the spectacular scene of "flying down 3,000 feet, suspected to be the Milky Way falling for nine days". Standing there and looking up at the waterfall, the breeze is blowing, and it is very cool! Although it was tiring and hard to climb the mountain, Sandi Spring did not disappoint me.
Lushan is so beautiful! I loved it and I will come back next time.
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How can I write a good essay???
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It doesn't have to be exactly, it could be prose.
Scene writing is a kind of narrative essay, usually referring to the article that focuses on writing scenes, and scene writing is to express the author's praise of certain scenes and his own emotions through the use of description, narration, lyricism and other expressions.
Writing scenery prose, this kind of prose is to take natural landscapes, artificial scenes, and folk customs as the main objects of description, write their shape, sound, color, taste, and modal characteristics, and fully display their style and charm, so as to achieve the purpose of conveying the author's affection, and attracting and infecting people's reading.
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<>1. The content of the writing is different, the writing of the scenery is about the appearance of the scenery and the scenery, while the travelogue is about the experience of visiting a certain place in Nianxiang.
2. The object of writing a cheating manuscript is different, writing a scene essay is about a certain scenery or scenery, while a travelogue is about going to a certain place, seeing a certain person, and encountering a certain thing.
3. The sense of writing is different from high filial piety, writing scenery essays will write out some imagination of the scenery, while travelogue is to write about the feelings and feelings seen and experienced.
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If you choose a certain event according to the requirements of the topic, you should carefully recall it, ponder it carefully, think about it repeatedly, dig out the life truth contained in this event, or find out where it shines. It is necessary to explain the time, place, people, and events clearly, so that readers can understand who the article is written about, when, and where what happened, as follows:
Sun Moon Lake is like a beautiful "jewel", embedded between Yushan and Alishan, the center of its macro and void is Layu Yinlu Island, the lake in the north of the island is like a round of sun, the lake in the south of the island is like a round of crescent moon, and it is a vivid ancient hieroglyph - Ming.
This magnificent lake is famous all over the world, and I have long remembered its name in Xi'an, far away from Taiwan, so when I heard that my family was going to Sun Moon Lake, I was extremely excited.
The car was driving on the way to Sun Moon Lake, looking at the buildings and trees flying behind the window on the road, I still felt too slow to stare. Gradually, I finally saw the Sun Moon Lake surrounded by mountains.
That night, it was drizzling, the distant mountains were like daisies, the light blue lake was shrouded in white mist, like a veil, this veil came and went, sometimes hidden, Sun Moon Lake was like a shy girl, smiling to welcome friends from all directions.
Sitting under the shed at the stern, looking at the scenery, the stern of the boat splashes with water splashes, like a water dragon escorting behind the boat, the lake is sparkling, the lake water turns blue for a while, and turns green for a while, and the colorful colors make people fascinated. There is a small wooden island in the lake, with a wood-carved owl that looks like the owner of this large forest castle, standing on the railing on the edge of the island.
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The differences are as follows:
1. The content of writing is different, primary school students write scenery essays about the scenery they see, while travelogues write about what they see and hear about a certain place they visit.
2. The object of writing is different, primary school students write scenery essays about a certain scenery or scenery, while travelogues write about going to a certain place, seeing a certain person, and encountering a certain thing.
3. Writing impressions are different, primary school students will write some imagination of the scenery when writing scenery essays, while travelogues will write about the feelings and feelings they have seen and experienced.
4. The writing requirements are different, primary school students only need to write the scenery and scenery to write the scenery, while the travelogue requires experience and feelings.
5. The subject matter is different, primary school students write scenery essays only to imagine and express their feelings while writing about the scenery, while the range of travelogue themes is very wide, which can depict places of interest, beautiful mountains and rivers, can also record customs and customs, can reflect daily life, can also record major events, and express the author's thoughts and feelings.
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Travelogue: A narrative essay on the theme of a tour, and it is also a way of writing to introduce a certain attraction to the reader.
Writing a scene: It can be a pure description or it can be specific to a certain place. Different from travelogues: a tree in front of your house or a small rockery in a school can be the object of your writing, mostly lyrical and loosely defined.
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The scope of the travelogue is wider than that of writing scenery, and travelogues can be written in the same way as travelogues.
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1. Don't write a travel road map as a travel essay.
2. Write an essay about a place you visited that left a deep impression.
Third, we must consider the order, space, time, and angle (far to near) of the travelogue Fourth, the description does not have to be exhaustive, and we must know how to cut branches and leaves.
Fifth, choose the points that leave a deep impression to play, which must be detailed, and which ones are written in detail to think clearly.
6. Pay attention to historical things and historical events, and the ingenious combination of legends can highlight the significance of the tour and the depth of the article.
7. The lyrical technique of borrowing scenery should be used.
8. In the description of the cultural landscape, it is necessary to set off the environment, and choose the appropriate scenery to set off.
9. In the description of natural landscapes, rhetorical devices should be used, but do not fall into the ordinary, feel it with your own heart, and it is best to have some appropriate rhetorical innovations.
Generally, it is written in the form of travelogue prose, and it is not written as an event in the tour map.
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First of all, pay attention to observation. After determining the object of observation, it is necessary to observe it for a long time, comprehensively and deeply, not only to observe its whole, but also to observe its parts, to observe its static (color, posture, etc.) and its dynamics (growth process, seasonal changes, wind and rain, etc.); It is also necessary to be good at observing from different angles, and strive to be vivid, vivid, clear and distinctive. It is also necessary to compare it with other scenes to find out the similarities and differences.
Only by comparing and grasping the distinctive features can we grasp the characteristics of the scene.
In addition, when writing scenes, you should choose a good observation point and write it in a certain order. Some write the whole picture first, then the part, some from top to bottom, some from the inside out, and some from far and near ......In short, there should be a base point to determine the order of observations.
Moreover, writing scenery composition is inseparable from lyricism, writing scenery is the means, lyricism is the goal, and there is no article that writes scenes simply for the sake of writing scenes. Through vivid and detailed descriptions, express your feelings. Only by infiltrating the author's true emotions can the center of the article be better expressed and play its due role.
So, how can we put our feelings in the description of the scene, so that the scene and lyricism can be combined?
First of all, you should look for the scenery that is suitable for you to express your feelings, the scenery of a scenic spot is rich and colorful, and you can't "grab the eyebrows and mustaches", and write them all in, so that the article is very complicated and I don't know what to do. It should be written according to the needs of emotional expression, rebellion can be allegorical scenes. At the same time, the author should have rich associations and use a variety of writing techniques, such as personification and metaphor, so that the depicted scenery is visualized, with human characteristics and feelings, so that the article can be organically integrated with the scenery and the scene.
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Use figurative sentences and other rhetorical devices, when writing, the "scene" has feelings and scenes, just add to describe your mood, and be detailed and appropriate, from top to bottom, from small to large, and so on, and it is not appropriate to say more.
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You have to pay attention to observe, and then you see if there are any writers who have also written about this landscape, and if there is one, quote it directly! When you play, pay attention to it, write from different angles and different directions, and the writing will be different!
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Accumulate your own words and sentences first. Then, when you play, write down some things that you feel at the right time, and then add them to the article, write them according to the order of your play, recall the scene at that time, and then describe it with the words and phrases that you have accumulated in your daily life.
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The writing order is good, the sentences are beautiful, and you can use personification, metaphor, analogy, and so on.
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Don't write empty examples, the most touching things are often the small things. It can be said that it is from the small things to see the truth, to see the big from the small, the sentences should not be very gorgeous, and the simplicity is the mainstay. There must be a sense of truth, and there must also be a detailed description.
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