Moonlight on the lotus pond Autumn prisoner green in the old capital of the comparison

The author organically combines the bitter "taste" with the vivid description of the scenery to create a special verve. He does not write about the royal palaces and gardens of the old capital, nor does he write about the many beautiful natural scenery in the suburbs, although those scenery also represent the characteristics of the old capital, but it seems to be very far away from the lives of ordinary people. He only observes and experiences the autumn of the old capital through the eyes of an ordinary cultural person, and the autumn flavor, autumn colors, and autumn artistic conception and posture of his pen are all shrouded in a layer of strange subjective colors.

For example, it is written that "the tenant lives in a rafter and a broken house", and "in the waist of the broken wall, quietly facing the blue morning glory", which can be seen and experienced from the ordinary scene and even the dilapidated scene. Writing "The Locust Tree of the North", "There is no sound or smell when you step on your feet, you can only feel a little bit of extremely fine and soft touch", and "The silk lines of the broom left on the dust look delicate and leisurely, and subconsciously feel a little lonely", these delicate and unique feelings, melancholy and beautiful feelings, I am afraid that only a reader with civilian tendencies and suffering from displacement like Yu Dafu can experience and express them delicately and profoundly. The best way to express the unity of the scene is the description of "clear", "quiet" and "sad".

"Qing" and "Jing" are not only the description and summary of the characteristics of the objective scenery, but also the author's inner feelings; "Sadness" is more of the author's subjective feelings, which are both related to the scenery and not necessarily related (because autumn can be sad or happy, and the sad may not be derived from the autumn scenery). "Clear" and "quiet" are what most essayists can perceive and write, and they may not be wonderful, while "sadness" belongs to Yu Dafu alone, and it is the most wonderful. In short, this article is full of emotion, mainly to express inner feelings, and the scene does not occupy a lot of space like other writers' prose masterpieces.

At this point, it can be compared with "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond", the scene of "Lotus" seems to be written with a fine brush, carefully painted, the scenery is impressive, and the feelings are hidden by the scenery; This article is slightly more about the scene, trying its best to be lyrical, and the text gives people a sense of intimacy and heaviness.

This essay is a famous piece of modern prose, with strong feelings, timeless meaning, and beautiful rhetoric. Since the writing of this article is far away from today, it may be difficult for students to fully grasp the meaning and sentiment of the text, so they should first make some introductions to the author's situation and background, and remind students to read, it should be slow rather than fast, and seriously experience the thoughts and feelings contained in the description of the scenery, and when reading the author's direct expression, they should seriously feel the author's mind and feelings. It is necessary to pay attention to the text of the text, that is, "However, the autumn of the northern country is particularly clear, quiet, and sad", this sentence outlines the lead, covering the whole article, and it is necessary to carefully comprehend it, and follow this clue to grasp the general idea of the article as a whole.

Summary. Appreciation of "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond": There are long sentences and short sentences staggered, which is catchy to read; There is also a great deal of rhetorical use, especially metaphors, which are more than a dozen; There are also classic sentences tempered with words, such as "the moonlight is like flowing water, quietly pouring on this leaf and flower" and "the thin green mist floats in the lotus pond", the word "epsom" not only writes the softness and uniformity of the moonlight, but also makes people read the tranquility and tranquility of the environment; The word "floating" vividly depicts the hazy and poetic artistic conception of the night getting thicker, the water vapor and the poetic and dreamy artistic conception.

Enjoy the scenery in "Autumn in the Ancient Capital" and "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond".

Appreciation of "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond": There is time to use the staggered use of long sentences and short sentences, which is catchy to read; There is also a great deal of rhetorical use, especially metaphors, which are more than a dozen; There are also classic sentences tempered with words, such as "the moonlight is like flowing water, quietly pouring on this leaf and flower" and "the thin green mist floats in the lotus pond Douchang", a word "epsom" not only writes the softness and uniformity of the moonlight, but also makes people read the tranquility and tranquility of the environment; The word "floating" vividly depicts the hazy and dreamlike artistic conception of the night getting thicker, the water vapor and the poetry and dream.

Autumn in the Ancient Capital": Yu Dafu in the article he haunted the well-known scenery that haunted his dreams, only Yu You brushed it aside, but capitalized morning glory, acacia stamen, autumn cicadas, autumn rain, autumn dates, these common scenes in the daily life of ordinary people in Beiping. But through the description of Yu Dafu, the ordinary scenery has an extraordinary taste, and the small things have the autumn flavor of the old capital.

Because he wrote about the traditional charm that permeated the bone marrow, the Beijing flavor of the fluttering birds, and the clear, quiet and sad characteristics of the northern autumn, which can resonate with readers after reading.

The two articles have their own merits, and you can read them from different angles to read different charms!

Same: mobilize multiple angles, both have sight, hearing, and smell. There is also a sense of touch in "Autumn in the Ancient Capital".

The scene is very layered.

Different: The emotional tone of "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond" is a faint joy in a faint sorrow, a temporary tranquility. A lot of rhetoric is used.

In particular, the use of synaesthesia. The scene depicted is a small lotus pond. The emotional tone of "Autumn in the Old Capital" is clear, quiet, sad, and has a nostalgia for the autumn of the old capital.

The rhetoric used is not as classic as "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond". The scenery depicted is unique to northern China, especially Beijing.

Same: mobilize multiple angles, both have sight, hearing, and smell. "The Autumn School of the Ancient Capital".

There is also the sense of touch.

The scene is very layered.

Different: "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond".

The emotional tone is a faint joy in the light dust and sorrow, and a temporary tranquility. A lot of rhetoric is used. Especially synaesthesia.

of the application. The scene depicted is a small lotus pond. The emotional tone of "Autumn in the Old Capital" is clear, quiet, and sad, and there is a love for the autumn of the old capital. The rhetoric used is not as classic as "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond". The scenery depicted is unique to northern China, especially Beijing.

"Moonlight on the Lotus Pond" (

hereinafter referred to as "He") and "The Autumn of the Ancient Capital" (hereinafter referred to as "So") are by Zhu Ziqinghui and Yu Dafu respectively.

A: The masterpiece is also a classic of our secondary school Chinese textbooks. In the past, they appeared in different volumes, and they were difficult to gather, but now they are placed in the New Senior Secondary Compulsory Language 1 and placed in a prominent position as intensive reading texts. Two similar articles are selected into the same textbook and the same unit as "committing a heavy offense", and the editors do this with the intention of selecting the most exemplary and heavy famous articles, otherwise it is not enough to show the classics and high grade of the textbook.

What is the similarity between the two articles? This is the basis for a comparative study of them, and if there is no similarity, there is no comparison. Written in roughly the same era, they both belong to descriptive or artistic prose, with both wonderful scenes and appropriate lyricism, and they can be called skillful and complete in language expression, and they are well-deserved teaching models.

However, stopping at the similarity is only a superficial level of extensive reading, and the real valuable reading is to go deep into the text, carefully dissect the respective characteristics of different texts, and discover their unique wonderfulness and deep taste from the correspondence of similarities.