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It is not easy to write a short essay of a few hundred words about Singapore's "very", at least, it made me see that Singapore is "very" clean and tidy, and the people are very civilized. The grammar is not very big, and the sentences are very simple. In fact, for modern people, popular language is more acceptable, your language is very popular and beautiful, and the most important thing is that you can see your emotions here - you like this land, and lament that there is a gap between cleanliness and civilization in such a large area of land.

I think there are a few questions, it would be better to change them: 1. If the content is not very moving, can the title of Very Singapore be moved, changed to smaller, looser, more casual or narrower; 2 If you don't change the title, you can add some other materials to emphasize the "very", for example, when you write about a scenic spot or landscape, you jump out without going deeper, you can go deeper, then you can also say very; The whole is written visually, occasionally a little smell, is it possible to add a little hearing or taste; 3. Miscellaneous close-ups, such as contact with a specific person or a specific prominent landscape, are written in a little detail to serve the very theme.

Nonsense, just for reference.

Actually, it's a bit like the composition of a junior high school student who has just transferred to junior high school.

It's true. It would be better to beautify the article with some words.

Or, quote some good sentences.

The writing is a little naïve and not sophisticated enough.

w I don't want to.

I just don't have the skills.

The same lives well.

As long as you have a head, there is money everywhere waiting for you. It's still useless to talk too much, and people are learning the West all their lives.

I'm still the same.

If you want to be happy, what does it matter if you have money or not.

Maybe that's the people. Can't live your own way. Tired of life. In this world, too many people are walking by. But not of his own.

1."I will correct the grammatical error in this article" should delete "I" and replace "this article" with "this article".

2."Thank you" should be replaced by "Thank you". (Don't imitate the Chinese of the Internet, the Chinese of the Internet is often not standardized enough).

3."Describes his life is very bleak" should be changed to "describes his own bleak life".

4.The meaning of "single cold bone phase" is not clear enough, there is no such word in Chinese, and there is no such way of word formation, if you want to express the meaning of loneliness and coldness, you might as well change it to "lonely and cold".

5."Dreams called ideals and hopes" should be replaced by "dreams". (Ideals and hopes belong to dreams and do not have to be repeated).

6.The expression "as one's own excessive thing" is not standardized enough, and it is easy to cause misunderstanding, so it can be changed to "as one's own excessive request".

7.The word "to break thoughts" should be replaced by the words "to break thoughts". (Not all words can be abbreviated).

PS: As a foreigner, your Chinese can reach such a level, which is already relatively good, and many Chinese may not be as good as you. At present, due to the proliferation of online languages, many people are not standardized in terms of Chinese expression, and even make people unable to understand the meaning.

Therefore, I advise you not to imitate the language of the Internet. If you really want to learn Chinese well, I think it's best to buy a Chinese grammar book to read, I hope your Chinese level is getting better and better.

It should be: I am Korean, and my Chinese language proficiency is not very high.

Please help, I fix the grammatical mistakes in this article! Thank you, I think Zheng Banqiao's poems are a bit similar to Kanekasa's poems.

Because these two poems express that their lives are very bleak.

Zheng Banqiao believes that his single cold bone background cannot be changed.

But Kanekasa thinks that all his things are like flowers and leaves, so he regards dreams called ideals and hopes as too much for himself, so he can only stop thinking about them.

Zheng Banqiao also thought that all false names were not wanted, so he destroyed all the books.

I think Zheng Banqiao's poems are a bit similar to Kanekasa's poems.

Because both poems describe their own very bleak lives.

Zheng Banqiao and Jin Li, both of whom believe that their own ?What does that mean) cannot be changed.

But Kanekasa thinks that everything about herself is like a flower and a leaf,??

Therefore, dreams called ideals and hopes are regarded as excessive things for oneself, and one can only stop thinking about them??? What does that mean).

Zheng Banqiao also expressed in the poem that "all false fame is needed", so he destroyed all the books.

Ahhhh I can't even understand what you're talking about, so I've changed it a little bit and read it slowly for myself Hehe.

I think the feelings of Zheng Banqiao's poems and Jin Li's poems are a bit similar, and their poems reveal the poignancy of life and their attitude towards life, which has to make people reflect.

Both of them believe that they cannot change their life experience with their birth, only acceptance. And Jin Li thinks that his life is like a flower, which will eventually wither, and he can only break his mind about the ideals and hopes that cannot be reached.

Zheng Banqiao's poems show that the false name is only a passing cloud, fleeting, and finally burns the book.

Because the poems of these two people describe their lives very clearly.

I don't understand the rest of it.

I think Zheng Banqiao's poems and Jin Li's poems are a bit similar, (here it can be a common object, pay attention to punctuation.) ）

Because both of their poems describe their bleak lives. (They indicate the subject, but describe the .......)A predicate should correspond to an object, not a definite. ）

Zheng Banqiao and Jin Li both believe that their "single cold bones" life experience cannot be changed. (The two people refer to Zheng Banqiao and Jin Li, which can be removed.) Shan Han Gu Xiang, the poem of Zheng Banqiao is quoted here, and it is best to put double quotation marks. Note the use of the word "of". ）

But Kanekasa thinks that everything about herself is like a flower and a leaf, (there are all things here, so you can add "all" to strengthen the coherence.) ）

Therefore, if we regard dreams called ideals and hopes, etc., as excessive trivialities for ourselves, we can only stop thinking about them. (Words don't make sense.) ）

Zheng Banqiao also once thought that everything was in vain in his poems, so he destroyed all the books. (It would be better to replace "all" with "all.") ）

Question 6: 152 pieces of plant specimens, 152 insect specimens: 152*5/8

How many fewer insect specimens than plant specimens = 152 * (1-8 points 5) = 57 pieces.

Proof: Because ac=cd,ab=ce,bc=ed, abc is equal to dce

So b= e

From the principle that the two internal wrong angles of parallel lines are equal, ab ed can be obtained

"Feeling the Ordinary".

I often think that it is the green leaves that reflect the red flowers, I often think that the cowards set off the heroes, I often think that the fools cite the wise, I often think that the sentient beings have transformed the Buddha, and I often think that it is the ordinary that gives birth to greatness.

I'm looking for it in nature.

Look, it's a plum tree on the edge of a cliff, here"It's already a cliff full of ice"in the season"There are still flowers"。In the cold winter season, the wind blows it, the rain beats it, the snow bullies it, and the frost weighs on it. But it still stands upright, with a faint fragrance.

It resists the ravages of the wind with strength, and it repels thunder and lightning with fortitude to avoid other ......

Have you ever heard the story of the grass that grows in the crevices of the rocks? Whenever I think about it, I am impressed by its tenacious vitality and shocked by the fact that ordinary life can have such a great spirit.

In nature, I feel the ordinary. Grass, plum, pine ......Finally, I understood that as long as there is perseverance and cherishing life, there is also greatness in the ordinary. I'm looking for ...... in the world

Thousands of years ago, Jiang Taigong and Zhuang Zhou fished together, but they had very different purposes. Jiang Taigong fished, and the wisher took the bait, so he assisted King Wen and became a great man. As for our Zhuangzi, he only likes this ordinary and quiet life of the people, so he became"Trolling tail in the paint"Xiaomin, but it is precisely this ordinariness that makes Zhuangzi have a sharper vision and a wiser mind, which left "Getaway", allowing us to appreciate true freedom; only stayed"There are butterflies in dreams, and I don't know if the butterfly is me or I am a butterfly"The magic is for us to play with.

Thousands of years later, the ordinary Xiaomin Zhuangzi has become a symbol of our pursuit of freedom, and no one denies his greatness.

If it weren't for the bravery of ordinary flood fighters, the catastrophic flood of 1998 might have spread throughout China. If there were not thousands of ordinary human soul engineers like Teacher Wu Ling, perhaps people would still live in slash-and-burn; If there were no ordinary workers and peasants, there would be no socialism today!

In the world, I feel the ordinary, Zhuang Zhou, soldiers, doctors ......Finally, I understood that as long as I stick to myself, have the courage to sacrifice, and realize the value of life, even the most humble life will shine with strange brilliance.

I'm looking for ...... by my side

The mother is ordinary, and the father is also ordinary. But the love they gave me was great: a mother's love trickled like a stream, trickling into my heart; Father's love is like a mountain, sheltering me from the wind and rain, and teaching me to be strong.

Mother, will be old; Father, too, will be old; But their love will not grow old, they are one of millions of couples, living ordinary days, never seen them give each other a gift on Valentine's Day, but each other remembers each other's favorite dishes. I think no matter how time changes, they will always hold hands like this"Life and death are broad, happy with the son, holding the hand of the son, and ......growing old with the son"

Finally, I understood: as long as there is family affection and love in the world, ordinary life can also interpret the great meaning.

Don't mind too much about the ordinariness of life, I often think that the ordinary breeds greatness.

Feeling the ordinary, greatness has another meaning.

Can you just write a little, and you have to write the rest yourself.