How to write an essay that criticizes Chinese education and society? Please advise. Don t be a model

What kind of school are you going to, and this essay has a score of 0. If you want to take the exam to vent your anger, you might as well stop reading it now and save you a waste of time. If you can't write lies and clichés, you can be regarded as sincere and flawless, and if you can't even tell the truth, you have to ask for help on the Internet is incompetent, and you need a gunman to even say what you think in your heart, sad.

This in itself is a failure of education, what an irony.

You have obviously not yet discovered your true self, frustration drives you to seek revenge, your eyes are so low that you can't even speak your heart, your empty heart doesn't produce nourishment, only anger, and you aim your anger at whoever you think is in your way. Labeling your own decadence and nothingness as a righteous one, criticizing this and criticizing that, in fact, everyone can see very clearly that you are not a victim of the education system, you are incompetent.

Khan - Why did you say it earlier... In fact, if you add one or two sentences to your composition to criticize social phenomena, you should master each degree and see how you can add this sentence to your composition, so that the sentence and the composition can be beautifully integrated. Personally, I suggest not to add a sentence or two criticizing social phenomena, because in the junior high school and middle school exams, you will add that it is the best, but you will not add suggestions that you write lyrical well, and the sentences will be smooth.

If you don't write essays, you can also take a gamble.

I wish you success in the high school entrance examination... o^)/~

It's troublesome, or you go.

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Next time, next time, next time,

Criticism is something that everyone does not want to encounter, criticism is accusation, everyone sees it as an enemy, but once I was criticized, I changed my view of criticism, and I regarded criticism as a friend.

One Sunday, my classmates and I went to the market to play and forgot to write homework, so I used two pens to write my homework in a hurry, although it was a little more difficult, but I could write words twice at a time, and I secretly enjoyed my cleverness.

The inspection homework began, the group leader was blinded, I was happy, I felt that I was too talented, just when I was complacent, the teacher stood up, picked up my notebook and said, "Look at Feiyang's homework .......""Stunned, didn't speak for a while, it turned out that the neat homework was too regular, the teacher found out, I wrote with two pens at the same time, the criticism began, I was ashamed, the teacher said me regardless of any emotion, and finally ended the criticism of me with cleverness but was mistaken by cleverness, yes, I am smart, I don't use the place, I reflect, I carefully taste every word of the teacher, it turns out that the teacher's words are not only criticism, but also encouragement, encouragement, and love ......

There will be introspection without criticism, how can there be corrections? Later, I realized that there was encouragement and love in criticism, "Yangyang, why don't you eat vegetables?" Can you grow taller, eat more, are you wearing hot?

Cold no? Warm or not? Yangyang, what do you see you do with your clothes?

How you should ......"Nagging mixed with criticism, I have heard enough, but after today's reflection, how to listen to my mother's criticism and nagging are so pleasant, this criticism tells me the way to do things, this criticism is full of love and education.

In my eyes, criticism is no longer an accusation, criticism is encouragement, love, and teaching. I see criticism as a friend.

Whenever I stand on the podium and look at these proud sons of tomorrow, I am very proud. I am a teacher in an ordinary middle school, and the class I teach does not have the focus of the school, and the students do not have the focus of the school. But I don't care, because I know that students need to have their own space to develop.

I don't want every student to go to a major university, I just want them to have a skill and contribute to society. Big things are not good, big things are not good! My "quasi-champion class" actually squeezed into a guy who didn't know what to do!

Not to mention this person's ugly appearance, the most important thing is that his grades are actually the first in my class and the tenth in the class next door! Every time I see his back, I can't help but shake my head. If it weren't for his dad knowing the principal, he wouldn't even be able to reach our school.

However, this student is strange, other top students only bury their heads in their own "small stove", but he takes all the tiring and rough work that others are unwilling to do, and often uses his appearance "advantage" to make his classmates laugh. It's also good that the "would-be champions" won't be distracted. It's been a blistering time lately.

There was a transfer student in the class, although he was not good-looking and had mediocre grades, but fortunately he was kind-hearted and helpful. He remembered the birthday of every classmate in the class clearly; If a classmate is uncomfortable, he is always the first to inform me; He rushed to do the dirty work in the class; He also often makes witty remarks, which makes the classmates around him laugh forward and backwards. I also found that this "pistachio" has a lot of learning potential, and with a little encouragement, it will definitely have a great future.

Today's class meeting is on the topic of "My Ideals". I asked the students about their dreams, and they all answered "engineers, doctors" or something, and I was very satisfied, they were all very ambitious. In the end, he was the only one left in the class who was not asked, and I did not want to be perceived as biased, so I reluctantly asked him to answer.

He stammered, "I, I want to be a clown." "If you don't have great ambitions, you can't teach your children!

I didn't say it out of embarrassment, but the class burst into laughter instead of "a thousand words." With laughter, he ran out crying and never came back. Today's class meeting is on the topic of "My Ideals".

When I asked the students about their ideals, they all answered "lawyers, doctors" or something, which I thought was a bit cliché. So, I picked him to answer. He said generously: "I want to be a comedy performance artist. ”

I feel that if you don't have a certain amount of social influence, don't do these things, at the moment it is the most important thing to make yourself successfully graduate, and when you have influence in the future, you can do these things again, and the effect will be better, like Han Han, Xiao Cui, how good.

It depends on the level of your criticism, if the criticism is very obscure, like Qu Yuan (aggrieved and wronged), it is not a big problem.

Thanksgiving is a word full of warmth. Everyone has been grateful and grateful, and has felt the happiness of being grateful and being grateful.

In this world, there is no one who gives me the most love than my parents. From the moment I hit the ground, my parents took on the responsibility of raising me. Dad once shed tears because of one of my misdiagnoses; My mother used to take me to and from the city hospital more than 100 kilometers away from my home every Saturday in order to straighten my teeth, rain or shine for more than a year. They gave up their stable and generous treatment for me and came to Shanghai to work hard ......All of this is done so that I can thrive in a good environment.

A parent's love for their children is selfless and unrequited; Our parents have done their best to raise us at any cost. But sometimes we quarrel with our parents over some trivial things, and give them a look on their faces, which is really too ignorant and undeserved. In fact, parents do not ask their children to give them much material satisfaction, as long as they hand their parents a cup of hot water when they get off work; Send a blessing on the day of your parents' birthday; Help your parents thump their backs when they are tired......These small things are enough to show our deep love for our parents, and I feel the joy of giving from their satisfied smiles.

We should not only be grateful to our parents, but also to our classmates, teachers, relatives, friends and many other well-wishers who have helped us. After the theft of Roosevelt's house, he lost many important things, but he still thanked God: "Because first, the thief stole my things, and did not harm my life; Second, the thief stole only part of my things, not all of them; Third, and most thankfully, it was him, not me, who was the thief.

We may be unlucky, but we should still be grateful to others with a grateful heart, so that you will find that you will live a happier life if you are grateful for everything.

With gratitude, we can live in a world of gratitude, as one poem says: Be grateful to those who raised you, because they made you grow; Be grateful to the people who care for you, because they give you warmth; Be grateful to those who have educated you, for the number of source states has enlightened you for your ignorance; Be grateful to the one who has hurt you, for he has tempered your mind; Be grateful to him who deceives you, for he has increased your wisdom; Be grateful to the one who despises you, because he awakens your self-esteem ......