Zhu Ziqingchun s original text is segmented, and Zhu Ziqingchun s sixth paragraph is appreciated

Appreciation of the sixth paragraph of Zhu Ziqing's "Spring": "Look, like cow hair, like flower needles, like filaments, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof of the house" uses "metaphor", "comparison" and "personification" figures of speech. The author compares the continuous spring rain to cow hair, flower needles, and filaments, and these three metaphors are used together to form a comparison.

Then, with the word "weaving", the spring rain is personified, and the spring rain is also depicted as unusually wet. "The leaves of the trees are shining, and the grass is so green that your eyes are strong" is a wide (non-strictly sense) "duality".

Through this rhetorical device, the author deepens the "green" of the leaves and the "green" of the grass in the spring scene, making the whole picture more colorful. The trees, grasses and other plants depicted in the picture are all full of vitality and vitality.

In the countryside, on the path, by the stone bridge, people walking slowly with umbrellas; There were also peasants who worked in the fields, clothed with hats and hats. Among them, "on the path, by the stone bridge" and "wearing a hat and hat" use the figure of "duality" to depict the activities of various people in the countryside.

Holding up an umbrella, walking on the path and by the stone bridge, the mood is relaxed and slowly experiencing the drizzle of early spring "oblique weaving"; And the farmer was busy in the field with a good harvest of the year, taking advantage of the good spring light.

Their houses, sparse and sparse, silent in the rain" use the "overlapping" and "anthropomorphic" figures of speech. The "overlapping" here embodies the beauty of sound and language. The house "silent in the rain" is to personify the house, to depict the house that has been dormant for a winter to be more spiritual, and to decorate the countryside in the early spring.

The main idea of the article is the yearning for the realm of freedom. Although Zhu Ziqing was in the filthy and dark old China at that time, his spiritual world was clear and clear, and his spirit was still high.

Zhu Ziqing fused his healthy and noble aesthetic taste, his infinite love for beautiful things, and his unremitting pursuit of life ideals into the article. Cast into a language as beautiful as poetry. As a result, the whole article is filled with a strong sense of poetry and produces an enduring artistic charm.

Use colloquialisms to enrich the content of the article, express the love for spring, make the article vivid, express the central idea, and at the same time play the role of a topic.

Part 1 (paragraph 1): Pan Chun, write about the mood of Pan Chun;

Part 2 (2 7): Painting Spring, depicting the rejuvenation of the earth, the revival of all things, the vitality of life, and the competition of plants, trees and flowers;

Part 3 (paragraphs 8 10): Ode to spring, praise the vigorous vitality of spring, emphasizing its "newness", "beauty" and "vitality".

"Spring" is Zhu Ziqing's masterpiece of writing scenes. The whole article is closely related to the theme of spring, from looking forward to spring, to describing spring, and then to praising spring, the author methodically presents the beautiful, moving and vibrant pictures of spring in front of the reader, so that the author expresses his inner feelings, that is, he loves spring.

The art of rhetoric. Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring" is full of endless poetry and endless paintings. The whole text uses more than 20 rhetorical devices, and the frequency is astonishing.

The work is based on "spring" throughout the whole text, which is composed of three parts: looking forward to spring, painting spring, and singing spring, which are in-depth and interlocking layer by layer. And the author uses figures of speech as the "pigment" of "Spring", vividly depicting the colorful picture of early spring.

1. Eagerly look forward to the return of spring.

1) "Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the footsteps of spring are near." At the beginning of the work, the author uses a repetitive figure of speech. The repeated use of the verb "hope".

Abruptly, powerfully, and eagerly, it reflects people's eagerness to look forward to the arrival of spring. Then, use an "anthropomorphic" word to convey the message of spring.

2) Spring is what people love, it can be felt and known, and it is lovely and amiable. The footsteps of spring are very familiar. It's coming, it's coming, it's what people are looking forward to after the cold winter.

Hereon. The author writes about people's anticipation for spring and their joy to welcome it.

2. Paint spring scenery with enthusiasm.

1) "Everything is like just waking up, and I gladly opened my eyes" uses the word "anthropomorphic". In the author's pen, the spring breeze is light, the earth is warm, and everything is revived, as if a person who has "just woken up" "happily opened his eyes". In early spring, there is a faint atmosphere; In early spring, it was a hazy scene.

2) "The mountains are moistened, the waters are rising, and the sun's face is reddening." Among them, "the face of the sun is reddened" uses the word "anthropomorphic" to personify the sun, which not only captures the characteristics of the spring sun, expresses the warmth of the spring sun, but also shows the inner charm of the spring sun.

3) The whole sentence is composed of a comparison sentence, the application of "personification" and "comparison", starting from a large position, the mountains, water, and the sun are described in thick lines, and the general outline of early spring is concisely outlined. Pave the way for the following in-depth and multi-perspective depiction of spring scenes. In particular, it is worth mentioning that the mountains described by Zhu Ziqing with "Langrun" make the mountains shiny and extraordinarily free.

The full text can be divided into three parts: looking forward to spring, painting spring, and singing spring; The second part depicts spring sketches, spring flowers, spring breezes, spring rains, and spring greetings. The full text is in a "total score" structure.

Spring is a work by modern essayist Zhu Ziqing. "Spring" is a famous prose by Zhu Ziqing Gao Qi, which was originally published in July 1933 and has been used in Chinese middle school Chinese textbooks for a long time since then. In this "hymn to spring", which is "full of poetry", it is in fact full of the writer's thoughts and emotions in a specific period, his pursuit of life and personality, and expresses the traditional cultural accumulation in the writer's bones and his yearning for freedom.

After 1927, Zhu Ziqing has always been looking for and creating an ideal world deep in his soul - the world of dreams, which is used to place his "rather unquiet" heart and resist the disturbances of the outside world, so that he can "be alone" in the claustrophobic study and achieve his education. "Spring" describes and eulogizes a vigorous spring, but it is also a realistic portrayal of Zhu Ziqing's spiritual world.

Part 1 (1) Hope for Spring.

The second part (2 7) depicts spring, and the five paintings depict a strong sense of spring, expressing the author's love and praise for spring.

The third part (8-10) celebrates the vigorous vitality of spring, emphasizing "newness", "beauty" and "vitality".