Revise the sentence and state the reason Thank you 10

A father was busy putting decorations on the Christmas tree, but when he hung them up, his two-year-old son took them down. - Both are not simultaneous.

When he was about to put the child in the guardrail, his wife suggested that it would be wiser to put the tree in the guardrail and the child outside the guardrail. -- It makes sense to read this way.

You can move the tree away from the child instead of moving the child away from the tree. -- What to replace with what.

Lateral thinking (refers to) looking at things in a different way through the side. Lateral thinkers try to find other ways to think consistently in a particular way instead of being fixed in a particular way. --This sentence is an introduction to the concept of lateral thinking.

You can't dig one of the holes deeper by digging a hole in a different place. The Commission is convinced that parking meters are the only way to control parking in the city. --The use of the toll collector is the way.

So the committee takes the time to decide what kind of equipment to use, where to put them and how to patrol them, and the lateral thinkers look for other ways to get people to park anywhere, as long as they have their headlights on, to give people licenses, to allow free parking for one day a week, and to encourage carpooling. That is, if a motorist wants to park anywhere in the city, he has to buy a visible license. --Licensing is a condition.

1. Add the audience in front.

Because the subject of the first two sentences is different from the subject of the last sentence This is the most common sentence in the sick sentence 2, I changed it more cumbersome to tell you** show the will, the speed is wrong Improper collocation 3, remove the cumbersome.

4. Rich content and unique insights. Improper matching.

5. The first way to change: when you hear the bad news The second way: when the bad news comes. 6. Remove the surplus ingredients and harvest. Excess ingredients.

7. Remove the pair. What caught our attention was their practical difficulties, plus the lack of a subject for the pair.8 Can they be removed. This is a common two-sided mistake just my personal opinion I hope to adopt !!

(1) Change it to make the audience in it.

2) Add before the speed.

3) Infinity and containment are reversed.

4) Removal and insights.

5) Remove the heard.

6) I changed the product to yes.

7) Put us before what should happen.

8) Add whether or not you can before going deeper.

1. The Chinese performance of the fifth class of the ninth grade is the best class in the whole school. (Improper collocation: the main grade is a class, removed.)"One class"）

2. Measures such as tracing the source of the disease and isolation and observation have been taken to prevent the spread of influenza A (H1N1) from no longer existing. (Mismatched: removed.)"Not anymore"or"Nope", or will"Not anymore"Instead"Continue"）

3. Due to the use of scientific review methods, his learning efficiency has been greatly improved. (Improper collocation: Improper efficiency and improvement, change efficiency to increase).

4. This year will be the 14th military parade in New China and the first in the new century. (Mismatch: in.)"This year"Add"of the parade", or will"Yes"Instead"Held"）

5. Eating lobster for bronchitis and allergic rhinitis will lead to aggravation of the condition. (Misplaced: subject and predicate.) In"Allergic rhinitis"Add"patients"）

6. With the re-excavation of the Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses after 24 years of silence, it has attracted the attention of the best at home and abroad. (Ingredient mutilation: Missing subject, deleted.)"with"）

7. At this World Table Tennis Championships, after the hard work of the athletes, they won the men's team rest championship again. (Ingredient mutilated: missing subject, will.)"Passed"with"of"Delete).

8. The more than 150 students in this nine-year boarding school are the least among the schools and the earliest to resume classes after the earthquake. (Misplaced: subject and object.)"Students are the school"）

9. These activities, which are deeply loved by students, have enhanced and cultivated students' sense of ownership. (Improper collocation: consciousness cannot be cultivated and should be deleted.)"and nurturing"）

10. The improvement of academic performance mainly depends on whether students work hard. (One side to two sides: should be put.)"But"Delete).

11. We sincerely thank our teachers for their silent dedication over the years. (Semantic repetition:.)"Heartily"with"In the heart"Repeat).

12. Recently, the punishment for drunk driving has been increased across the country, in order to avoid the recurrence of those appalling traffic accidents. (Multiple negations cause semantic confusion: should be used.)"Not anymore"Instead"Again"）