Who knows how this poem will be!?

I think this poem is well written, and it has the feeling of Zhou Gong's dream butterfly.

In and out of the dream, I was already drunk, and I wanted to hold on to these beautiful things.

The poem is healthy and gentle.

Personally, I feel like that.

I thought that writing poetry should not care too much about what other people think. Narcissism? It's a good thing, it's a performance that you appreciate yourself, it's a sign of self-confidence!

Only by appreciating one's own work can one write better works, and this is the personality of a poet. I don't appreciate my own works, how can I create?!

There is no need to care about the slander of some people.

Seeing your works, I feel that people nowadays are in the mood to write poetry, which is a very valuable thing, support you! Keep up the good work.

The language is beautiful, very good, and "there are people who can observe it in both literature and science".

That's great. It's just that the ending is too straightforward.

Honestly, how about it? Not good! What else? Do you want to hear what your poems are? Only longing to hear words of praise, not listening to different voices, that is a manifestation of narcissism!

Insist on playing the original Wang sedan chair mold, this poem is Huang Chao's "Chrysanthemum", the whole poem is: The sassy west wind is planted all over the courtyard, and the cold fragrance and cold butterflies are difficult to come. If I am the Green Emperor in his year, I will report that the peach blossoms will bloom together.

Qingdi can be understood as the god of spring, and this sentence literally means: if you become a spring god one day, you must let the chrysanthemums and peach blossoms bloom together.

If you don't look at the author, many people may regard it as a poem expressing their love for chrysanthemums, but the author of this poem is Huang Chao, that is, the rebel professional, so this poem not only expresses the love for chrysanthemums, but also lies in the "poetry and words".

Huang Chao has a similar, and it is also sleepy is the very famous "full of cities with ** A" sail school, so to speak, Huang Chao also expressed that in this poem, how to say it... Rebel against the pride of professional households...

Landlord, please ask if you have any questions.

The translation of the poem "Evening Walk on the Spring Mountain" is as follows:The peach blossoms at the entrance of the cave are fresh and moist with rain; The willows at the head of the stream are still in the wind. All kinds of birds reflect the remnant sun, flying up and down to return to the nest; Different characters move freely along the flowing water, east or west.

Original poem: The peach blossoms at the entrance of the cave bring rain, and the willows at the head of the stream lead the wind.

The birds are up and down the remnant sun, and the people follow the flowing water in the west and east.

Poetry appreciation of "Spring Mountain Evening Walk".Huang Wenhuan of the Qing Dynasty believes in his "Diagram of the Four Spectrums of Tone" that the six-character quatrain is affected by the number of words, and it is easy to write it in the style of "couplets are coupled", and "Spring Mountain Evening Travel" is such a poem. The first two sentences are against each other, writing about the scenery seen in the evening trip to Chunshan, and writing about the demeanor of the plants in Chunshan, which is picturesque.

The last two sentences are still confrontational, and they also write about the scenery seen in the evening trip to Spring Mountain, from plants to animals and people. The whole poem is composed of two dual sentences, and the poet strives to deal with the dialectical relationship between the rigor of the external format and the diversity of internal changes, without pretense, using natural and smooth language, and eliminating the disadvantages of "sound and tone", so that this poem has become a poem with good lyricism in the six quatrains.