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The stream sang again.
A small stream lives at the foot of the mountain, and the green hills feed it with its babbling spring water. The clear water of the stream reflects the red flowers and green grass, and the blue sky and white clouds.
The drizzle fell gently, and the little stream sang merrily, and it sang, "Thank you, Brother Drizzle!" You've given me so many new friends! The stream kept "walking" forward. "Yikes! What a beautiful singing voice! A little girl said happily.
The little stream was naturally very proud when he heard this, and thought to himself: If my timbre is so beautiful, why should I stay a little longer? Since then, she has stopped singing, and her very pure and clear "body" has begun to be muddy.
Brother Drizzle persuaded him, "Little stream! Only by moving forward will there be clearer flowing water and beautiful singing!
Little stream, you sang, sang! You're singing again! You sing:
Ah--I am a little stream, the babbling spring feeds me, and I reflect the red flowers and green grass, and the blue sky and the white clouds! ”
How beautiful the song of the small stream is! The song of the small stream is beautiful, everyone sees and loves it, and the song of the small stream is great, and everyone wants to listen to ......"The children kept singing and dancing! Cheers to the little stream!
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The small stream lives at the foot of the mountain, surrounded by green hills, and fed by babbling springs. The clear water reflects the red flowers and green grass around you, and the blue sky and white clouds overhead.
The drizzle fell gently, and the little stream sang happily: "Brother Drizzle, thank you for sending me a new partner." Now, I'm going to sing even better!
The stream keeps going. The people who walked by the stream praised her: "What a clear and beautiful stream, and how beautiful the song she sings."
The little stream listened to the compliment and was very proud. She stopped beside a large bluestone and thought, "My water is so clear and beautiful, why should I run again?" Take a break! "The stream stopped running and didn't sing. Gradually, she became cloudy.
Drizzle advised her: "Little stream, keep going!" Only by moving forward can we always be clear. "After listening to the drizzle, the little stream went around the big bluestone and sang again. The water of the stream became clear again. Red flowers, green grass, blue sky, and white clouds are reflected in the stream again.
1.At the foot of the mountain, the green mountains, the spring water, the safflowers, the green grass, the blue sky, and the white clouds are very beautiful.
2.The stream was so proud of the people's praise that it stopped beside a large bluestone, and gradually she became muddy. Later, she listened to the advice of the drizzle, went around the big bluestone, and sang again, so she became clear again.
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After reading Yan Wenjing's grandfather's fairy tale, "The Song of the Little Stream", I really benefited a lot.
The stream in the story has the noble quality of perseverance, and no matter how difficult it is, it will flow all the way forward. On the way to the stream, the stream met the dead stump and the dead grass, two lazy creatures who did not understand why the stream kept flowing. Yes, I think lazy people will never understand the true meaning of diligence, they will only waste their time in vain, and in the end they will not achieve anything and become losers.
In this way, the small stream has been going up, never stopping, never tired, and despite the dissuasion of the crows, the small river has become a big river, and it is precisely because of its perseverance and spirit that it has finally succeeded in converging into the ocean. I remember that year when I was eight years old, my grandfather began to teach me to write calligraphy, I first started to practice by drawing red, at first because I was not in the correct posture, either I could not draw the outside, or the strokes were wrong, and I practiced for a long time or did not know the essentials. Whenever I see the old words crooked, I feel very bad, and my grandfather is a little sad when he sees my depressed appearance.
That night, my grandfather told me that if you persist, you can succeed. My grandfather started again and taught me how to write step by step. I finally got my calligraphy done, and my grandfather gave me a thumbs up and praised me for being awesome.
Like a stream, we can succeed if we work hard and persevere.
Teacher's comments: The language of the assignment is beautiful and fluent, the structure is reasonable, the young author can connect with his own life reality on the basis of reading, the examples are real and vivid, and the words are flashing with philosophy, which is a relatively good exercise.
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The stream sang again, and it sang again as a figure of speech for anthropomorphism. There is no doubt about that.
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It also sings a figure of speech of anthropomorphismA small stream lives at the foot of the mountain, surrounded by green hillsHer gurgling spring water feeds her clear stream, the red flowers and green grass around her reflect the head, the blue sky and white clouds at the top, the drizzle falls gently, the stream sings happily, drizzle, brother, thank you for sending me a new partner, now I want to sing more beautifully, the song of the stream keeps moving forward, and the people walking by the stream praise her for how clear and beautiful the stream is.
Small streams
Singing is so beautiful again, the stream listens to the praise of the people, very proud, she stopped next to a big bluestone, thinking that my water is so clear, so beautiful, why run again, let me live a few days of comfortable life, the little stream, don't run, the stream doesn't sing, gradually she became muddy, the drizzle advised her that the stream continues to move forward, only by moving forward, can it be clear forever, listening to the words of the drizzle brother, the little stream bypassed the lapis lazone, and sang a beautiful song forward.
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The little stream will sing, whoa! Wow, whoa!
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Main content: The character of the small stream is cheerful and aggressive. He kept running forward, and no one could dissuade him. Eventually, the stream grew into a sea. He still sings happily and never stops.
After reading: The article writes about the process of the growth of the small stream and the self-improvement of the small stream.
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The stream sang again, and it sang again as a figure of speech for anthropomorphism. The anthropomorphic rhetorical method is to personify things, to turn things that do not have human actions and feelings into things that do not have human actions and feelings. The use of anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques gives life to something or the characteristics of people, and vividly writes about a certain characteristic of something.
Introduction to anthropomorphismAnthropomorphism refers to the rhetorical device of imitating an object, including an object, an animal, a thought, or an abstract concept, into a human being, giving it the appearance, personality, or emotion of a human being. Personification can be manifested through adjectives, verbs, or nouns. To personify is to personify things.
That is, to treat things as people, and to write them with the same feelings, words, and actions as people.
Anthropomorphic writing can make the article more vivid, vivid, and concrete, which can not only vividly write a certain feature of something, but also have a unique concrete effect after anthropomorphism. Give things the characteristics of human behavior, vividly express the author's emotions, make the reader feel that the objects described appear more lively and close, and make the article more vivid and vivid.
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The song of the little stream is a song that always moves forward, is not afraid of all resistance, and continues to grow and develop in the process of moving forward. This song embodies the spirit of moving towards the set goal, not afraid of all difficulties, unswerving, always moving forward, and never giving up until the goal is achieved.
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After reading the fairy tale of Grandpa Yan He Tsai Wenjing, "The Song of the Little Stream", I really benefited a lot. The stream in the story has the noble quality of perseverance, and it flows all the way forward, no matter how hungry or dangerous it is. On the way to the stream, the stream met the dead stump and the dead grass, and these were two lazy things, who did not understand why the little stream kept flowing so fast, and sang a beautiful ballad.
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