Urgently, urgently, in the language to change the sick sentence, to modify the sick sentence, in a h

Changed sentence:

1. In recent years, Wang Xiaolan has almost never forgotten to collect and sort out folk songs, and has accumulated a lot of information. (The negative form is too complicated, change "all the time" to "at the moment").

2. This cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward youths and save runaway youth, and has been commended by superior leaders many times. ("Cultivating runaway youth" is unreasonable, delete "and cultivate").

3. When the old man was 80 years old, he still clearly remembered his brother's evaluation of his brother when he participated in student activities: a warmer. (The reference to "self" is vague, and "brother" should be added to make the reference clear).

4. Carrying out criticism and self-criticism is an effective way to straighten out the party's style and enhance the party's cohesion. (Replace the words "effective" with the words "effective").

5. Mr. Lu Xun created essays in the struggle, and essays became a wonder in the book of literature. (In the case of inconsistency between the subjects of the two clauses, the subject of any clause cannot be omitted, so "essay" should be added before the second clause).

6. China is the most populous country in the world. China is one of the most populous countries in the world. (There can only be one "most" in the world, so delete "one" or replace "most" with "many").

Summer in Little Khinganling is so beautiful!

It's said that summer is so beautiful.

It's not that the Little Khing'an Mountains are really beautiful.

So change it to. The little Xing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful!

The first sentence is almost removed.

The second sentence is to culture and remove.

The third sentence is ambiguous whether he is an old man or an old man's brother is changed to an old man.

Replace the fourth sentence with a proven methodology.

In the fifth sentence, replace the word with .

Remove one of the sixth sentences.

1 Almost all the time.

2. Cultivating runaway youth.

3 To the elder brother himself.

4 Proven one.

5 In the book of literature.

6 One of the most countries.

The Little Khing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful.

The little Xing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful!

1. Our city took the lead in establishing the New Residents Affairs Administration and promulgated the Regulations on the Management of New Residents

2. In order to build a conservation-oriented society, improve the ecological environment and improve the quality of life, we should vigorously develop the solar energy industry.

3. "Nanhu New Area as one of the top ten cultural and leisure bases in the country" was changed to "Nanhu New Area as one of the top ten cultural and leisure bases in the country".

Replace "three" with "three".

1) Our city is the first in the country to establish a new resident affairs administration.

2) In order to build a conservation-oriented society and improve the ecological environment, we should vigorously develop the solar energy industry.

3) As one of the top ten cultural and leisure bases in China, Nanhu New Area launched the cultural and leisure project "Nanhu Weekly" for the first time this year. Last Friday night, the teachers of the three schools participated in the performance together, and the wonderful ** brought a new artistic enjoyment to the citizens.

(1) Our city took the lead in establishing the New Residents Affairs Administration and (formulated) the "Regulations on the Management of New Residents" in the country

2. In order to build a conservation-oriented society, improve the ecological environment and improve the quality of life, we should vigorously develop the solar energy industry.

As one of the top ten cultural and leisure bases in the country, Nanhu New Area launched the cultural and leisure project "Nanhu Weekly" for the first time this year. Last Friday night, the ** teachers of the three schools participated in the performance together, and the wonderful ** brought a new artistic experience to the citizens.

The parentheses are modified.

My father pondered for a moment, and then solemnly pointed out my mistake. [Cordiality and seriousness are contradictory together]. We read books outside of class, which can increase our knowledge and improve our writing.

The level cannot be said to have grown] After a physical examination, the doctor concluded that he was in good health. [Bad words] Everyone's criticism of him is correct, but it is snarky.

Grow your knowledge and improve your writing skills. The level of writing cannot be described as an increase.

Doctors can't decide how good he is

As night falls, a round of bright moonlight spills onto the surface of the lake, and the lake water is sparkling.

Fixed: Wrong wording, "moonshine" can't use "one round", remove "one round".

Instead: When night falls, the moonlight shines on the lake, and the lake water is sparkling.

The shore is brightly lit and lively. "There's nothing wrong with that.

It turns out that people are holding the annual Lantern Festival. "There's nothing wrong with that.

On both sides of the street, there are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and crane lanterns."

Modification: Lack of object, change: There are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns on both sides of the street, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and other lanterns.

The revised paragraph would read:

When night falls, the moonlight shines onto the lake, and the lake water sparkles. The shore is brightly lit and lively. It turns out that people are holding the annual Lantern Festival.

On both sides of the street, there are rabbit lanterns, lotus lanterns, cotton lanterns, as well as slim pandas, cute lanterns and other lanterns.

1.We have to learn"Guardian of the Sea and Air"Comrade Wang Wei's heroic and fearless spirit.

2.Chinese young people in the new century should foster the spirit of forging ahead courageously in spite of difficulties.

3.The 21 st century requires a large number of intellectuals to build the motherland.

4.After the party, her beautiful posture will still be like in front of my eyes, and the beautiful song will still be like in my ears.

1.The teacher is a hard-working gardener. [Subject and object reversed] 2

After the start of the school year, the school [presented] a new and vibrant scene. [Lack of predicate verb] 3We need to get rid of bad habits.

Repeat, remove the "bad"] 4Zhou Yu saw that Zhuge Liang was very talented, and he was very jealous. [Repeat, remove "stiff"].

1. The teacher is a hard-working gardener.

2. After the start of school, the school presents a new scene of vitality.

3. We need to get rid of bad habits.

4, Zhou Yu saw that Zhuge Liang was very talented, and he was very jealous.

The teacher is a hard-working gardener.

When school started, the school was full of life.

We need to get rid of bad habits.

Zhou Yu saw that Zhuge Liang was very talented, and he was very jealous.