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1.Lei Feng spirit.

Of course, it is necessary to give it a new connotation, but who can deny that there is no need to learn the spirit of Lei Feng now?

Logical error, changed to:

Of course, the spirit of Lei Feng should be given a new connotation, but who can admit that there is no need to learn the spirit of Lei Feng now?

2.From the above-mentioned facts that are obvious to all, it is proved that what they have done is beyond reproach.

The sentence structure is mixed, and from the above-mentioned facts that are obvious to all, it is an adverbial and should be changed to:

From the above facts that are obvious to all, we can draw one conclusion: what they did was beyond reproach.

Or. The above-mentioned facts prove that what they have done is beyond reproach.

3.When he was first admitted to high school, his mental outlook was indeed very different from what he is now.

To figure out who is comparing with whom, change to:

His mental outlook now is indeed very different from when he was first admitted to high school.

4.Today, when different ethnic cultures are blended with each other, more attention should be paid to inheriting and developing traditional festival culture.

The subject is missing, and it is changed to:

Today, when different ethnic cultures are blended with each other, we should pay more attention to inheriting and developing traditional festival culture.

5.In ancient times, this kind of ** works only had written records, no musical score materials, and could neither be played nor sung.

The meaning of the sentence is unclear, it can neither be played nor sung, is it an ancient thing or a modern thing? The sentence only has the time adverbial "in ancient times" at the beginning, and there is no explanation in the later text, which is really confusing. Instead:

In ancient times, this kind of ** works only have written records, no musical score data, resulting in modern people can neither play nor sing these **.

1.Words with meanings such as "still" and "return" should not be changed or deleted.

2.Delete the words "from" and "in".

The position of his character is placed after high school.

The fourth sentence is missing a subject before the word?? Up in the air.

It should be ......Also ......changed to a choice sentence (uncertain, discretion).

Section 5: Exhausted vehicles on the road. Tired of running with a derogatory meaning, here is not the right match, can be changed to: vehicles coming and going on the highway.

There is no problem with the sixth statement. This sentence is a variant sentence, and the regular sentence should be: However, I feel that my hometown really seems to be missing something. Really posterior belongs to emphasis. Similar sentences such as Lu Xun's "Blessing": There is a broken bowl inside, empty.

Without 123 sentences, 123 questions can't be answered.

In the fifth paragraph, I think it is necessary to replace the phrase "I can't help but praise aloud" with "I can't help but praise aloud".

In the sixth paragraph, I think it is appropriate to emphasize that I really think that the hometown lacks the original... Simple, beautiful environment or something, add yourself)

I didn't find the exact answer, I did it myself, I'm not sure if it's right or not, hehe.

Sentence 5 1, the equipment is wrong, because standing on the mountain and looking into the distance, it is impossible to see the equipment; It can be changed to a beautiful village-run elementary school.

2. Exhausted and indescribable vehicles, you can use the endless flow and galloping

There are sentences in the paragraph with a speech disorder.

The vehicle cannot be described as exhausting, and the river is constantly changing.

Laughing is used to ask others to accept their gifts, which is used incorrectly. Instead: Accept.

Love, for elders, here is the wrong object. Instead: Love.

Your dog, humble words, used the wrong word, changed to: Ling Lang.

Helping each other is generally used as kind words when asking for help, and it is the same mistake as laughing at the hail. Instead: Do your best.

Favorites, generally speaking, thanks to someone's favor, it is not appropriate here. Changed to: Gift.

Also, pay attention to punctuation when quoting proverbs. As the saying goes: "If you don't come and go, you will be rude"...

I have received your letter, I have accepted the souvenirs sent, and seeing these souvenirs from my hometown reminds me of your consistent care and love for me, for which I am really grateful. As for the fact that you have asked me to contact your son, I will definitely do my best to help him, please rest assured. As the saying goes, "come and don't be rude", the source replied that after a few days, I will give you an item back to Qin, I hope you can like it.

Answer laugh instead accept.

Love and change the pin to love;

Your dog is changed to Linglang;

Helping each other has been replaced by doing what we can;

Punctuation colon after the colloquial cloud.

The gift is changed to a gift.

Analysis (1) misuse of honorifics, (2) excessive meaning, (3) misuse of humility, (4) misuse of honorifics, (5) misuse of honorifics.

Sentence modification: the first place: (inappropriate wording) let the bird shed "laugh" to "accept".

The second place: (the meaning of the word is too heavy) "love" is changed to "love".

The third place: (humility is inappropriate) "your dog" is changed to "Linglang".

Fourth: (Improper honorifics) "to help each other" is changed to "to do what you can."

The fifth place: (Honorific inappropriate) Replace "gift" with "gift".

He told an interesting story at the class meeting. I am a teenager. (Juvenile is a general term, and no numbers can be added in front).

I am a big fan of classical Chinese classics, including Romance of the Three Kingdoms. (The Romance of the Three Kingdoms itself is a classical Chinese masterpiece, repeated before and after).

During the Chinese New Year, red lanterns are hung on the gatehouse. (Each color refers to a variety of colors, and the red lantern at the back refers to only one color, red, which is inconsistent).

At the class meeting, I told an interesting story.

I'm in my teenage years. Or I'm a Young Pioneer.

I love Chinese classics, especially "Romance of the Three Kingdoms".

During the Spring Festival, lanterns of various colors are hung on the gatehouse.

I told an interesting story at the class meeting.

I'm a teenager. I am particularly fond of classical Chinese classics, especially Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Because I can't use it in the same sentence anymore, I love it very much.

During the Chinese New Year, red lanterns are hung on the gatehouse.

These are typical examples of corrections, so you must remember them. I hope you pick it.

An interesting story was told at the class meeting. Lack of subject, raise your hand and add subjectI am a teenager. This one won't either.

I especially love Chinese classics, especially "Romance of the Three Kingdoms". Delete the first special Chinese New Year, the gatehouse is hung with red lanterns of various colors. Colors contradict red lanterns, delete them.

I told an interesting story at the class meeting.

I'm a teenager. I especially love "Romance of the Three Kingdoms".

During the Spring Festival, lanterns of various colors are hung on the gatehouse.

The teacher told an interesting story in the class meeting.

I am an optimistic and cheerful teenager.

I am particularly fond of classical Chinese classics.

During the Chinese New Year, red lanterns are hung on the gatehouse.

1.The sentence begins with the subject, "he" or "I".

2. Go to "one".

3·“ Particularly liked" changed to "in".

4. Go to "all colors" or "red".