My son s small essay begged for revision. How to help your child revise their essays

I didn't write the essay title, but your son wrote it really well I wish your son progress in his studies.

Pick out grammatical errors.

If we need to tutor our children's composition, we must first read through the content of the child's composition and correct the grammar problems first.

Correct the mistake of using the word "Enlightenment".

In the whole article, whether there are typos, or inaccurate wording, this requires us to pay attention to it and correct it in time for the child to correct.

Focus on strengthening the description.

We should let the child associate more descriptive sentences, which is a very important factor in improving the child's writing level and cannot be ignored.

The beginning of the top priority.

The beginning of the composition is an important part of the whole composition, and the teacher can basically judge the child's composition level when he opens the beginning, so the beginning must be considered.

The ending is appropriately sublimated.

We should note that the end of the essay is the part that should sublimate the theme, and this part must be grasped by the child so that the theme can stand out.

Consciously help children accumulate materials. The most important thing in writing essays is the material, parents pay attention to the material of good life, usually after tea and dinner, you can tell your child about the new things that have happened around you recently, or hot topics in society, as much as possible to talk about it in an easy-to-understand, vivid and interesting way, so that children can understand and are willing to listen.

When children lack materials for writing essays, guide them to think of materials. When the school assigns homework for writing essays, parents see that their children can't write it, so they write it for their children in order to let them hand in their homework the next day, which is absolutely undesirable. What parents should do at this time is to guide their children step by step according to the topic to think about what materials can be used, and let the children write by themselves.

Take your children out for a walk on weekends. There is a saying: only learn without playing, and smart children become stupid.

Parents should take their children to participate in more social activities, such as visiting supermarkets and vegetable markets, organizing family outings, etc., and teaching children to carefully observe the details of life, which will help children broaden their horizons and increase their knowledge.

Double-check your child's composition. After most children get the teacher's corrected composition text, they usually look at the score and throw it aside and wander quietly, and what parents need to do at this time is to look through it carefully, look at the teacher's corrected comments, and guide the child to correct the deficiencies, so as to improve his writing level step by step.

An atmosphere conducive to children's learning should be formed in the home. Parents can regularly help their children recall what type of composition to write, and review the accumulated good words and sentences. In addition, it is also necessary to cultivate children to develop a good habit of reading books and newspapers, only by reading more, can they apply what they have learned, and they can also stimulate children's interest in writing through reading.

The last point to note is that primary school students often make typos in the writing process and cannot write a certain word, so parents should let their children dictate more error-prone and difficult words, so as to deepen their children's memory. Parents should also tell their children about punctuation and other misuses, so that they can subconsciously correct them.

Ask questions to revise your essay.

Just ask questions, huh?

There is still ** to change the question.

The first sentence saw that the puppy was injured, and the white fur was dyed red.

Lu Tian wanted to hug the puppy, and the puppy had a good lick of Lu Tian's hand.

Circling around Lu Tian, like a relative, aroused Lu Tian's pity, as if to say to him: "I am very hungry and injured, go and save me......

Lu Tian immediately went to find pharmacies and food stores, and bought something to eat with only 20 yuan on him, iodophor gauze, etc....

Lu Tian treats his wounds while feeding.

After applying iodophor, carefully bandaging the wound, waiting to bandage the wound, picked up the puppy to find the nearby volunteer comrades, and after finding the volunteer comrades, Lu Tian decisively dragged off his coat and draped it on the puppy's body, Lu Tian thought to himself that this would be warm, the puppy was very spiritual, knowing that Lu Tian wanted him to give it away, looking at him.

Lu Tian said to the volunteer comrades: Our community does not let us raise small animals, I am helpless......He said to the volunteer comrades: "We can post it on the Internet, and we can help him find the owner of the puppy**, where he found it."

Comrade volunteers said: Good way.

After a while, the volunteer comrades sent ** to the circle of friends. Weibo....

Lu Tian's mobile phone rang suddenly, a stranger**.

Lu Tian picked it up, and before Lu Tian could ask, the other side hurriedly said: My puppy asked you well-wishers to help find it, you are here, I'll wait or something.

After a while, his master was gone, and the owner said: He is a police dog, he was on a mission, and walked away, thank you for helping to find him.

Fortunately, Lu Tian and the volunteer comrades widened their eyes and said: "Police dogs" No wonder there is spirituality.

The owner of the dog said goodbye to Lu Tian and turned to leave.

Lu Tian and the volunteer comrades watched the puppy and his master leave, and their hearts settled down, only if everyone has love, give a little love, the society will be better ......

Can you look at this?

I am my son.

Child, an innocent word, but today it is not the same. Today's children are a kind of score-controlled puppet ......For example, now, children can't rest during the summer vacation, even if the Education Bureau explicitly prohibits extra classes, maybe this is also the surface, the school is constantly making up classes, constantly putting pressure on students, and constantly instilling in students the idea that if you don't swim forward, you will drown.

Can't you give your child a childhood with blue skies and white clouds? Can't pull your own children out of the sea of homework and questions?

If I have a child, I will not force him to read, but I will let him read, I will not ask him about his grades, first I will take him out to see the sea, see a clear blue sea, tell him how beautiful the world is, and I will laugh when I see the child laughing.

If I have a child, I will squeeze out 60% of the time to spend with the child, parents, you ask yourself how long you haven't had a good time with your child, how long has it been since you have had a good chat with your child, how lonely the child is when you are away, you know, don't look at the child smiling all day long, some children are very sensible, but you don't know, they don't want to cause you trouble, they also want you to laugh, they just want you to spend time with them, just ...... for a whileDo you only need to feed him when you have a child, and don't care about them, you may retort, I care, really? Ask the kids, really? If I have a child, I will not teach my children indiscriminately, some parents think they know more than their children, and when their children make mistakes, they always use all kinds of life principles to educate, but you often don't know that children sometimes have more truth than you, but they don't dare to publish it, and some children publish it, their parents will scold him fiercely, or use all kinds of crooked reasoning, or forcibly break the child's thinking, "You are wrong, I am right", because you can't lose face.

But the children will never say their opinions again, because they know that if they do, they will be beaten ......Ridiculous, ridiculous, what a wonderful relationship between parents, children, education, ......

If I had a child, would my wish come true?

1. Check whether the sentence is smooth and whether there are any typos.

Many children write essays in one go, writing whatever comes to mind, and there are often preambles and afterwords. Therefore, when the child is revising the composition, parents need to guide the child to revise while reading. In the process of reading, children will find out where they lose words and where they do not flow well.

Whenever a child reads awkwardly, it is necessary for the child to use his brain to think, carefully find the problem, and make revisions. At the same time, children may be sloppy in the process of writing essays, resulting in typos. Therefore, in the process of reading, children should also pay attention to it, and correct it in time after discovering it.

2. Check the formatting and punctuation of the article.

Since most of the child's attention is focused on the content of the essay in the process of writing, it is inevitable that there will be negligence or mistakes in punctuation and formatting. Therefore, in the process of revision, parents should guide their children to pay attention to the format to see if there are any errors, such as: whether there are two blank spaces at the beginning of the paragraph.

Whether the punctuation is used incorrectly or not, it must be corrected in time.

If the jade is not cut, it will not be made. When jade is mined, it has to go through many processes such as carving and grinding to make exquisite utensils. Writing essays is also a complex creative labor, and nature is no exception.

At the primary school level, parents must help their children develop a good habit of revising their essays, so as to help their children make faster and greater progress.