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The water in Hanjiang River is cold and clean swim---swimming,build---building.Let's not talk about the translation of place names, the fruit names are definitely mistranslated.

Add you after long time no see

how are you doing these days?Replace how with what

will be followed by there, delete, the united states, and arrive to arriving

i'll go to the united states is the i of the sentence'll go to change to i go to

Take about 3 days changed to need about

See a the scene of the Houston rockets game, remove the first one in the scene of the.

stay 1 day, change to stay for 1 day

I thought it was a correction of the question...

I only correct your inappropriateness, as for the style of writing, I will not change.

The third sentence, because I make a new friend

He comes is not come ; A single family doesn't need a parent

The following sentence is a bit of a problem with logic.

It should be said that a few days ago he was an ordinary friend to me, but later I found out that he was very good at singing and very special . It can move me and encourage me.

a few days agos,he is just an ordinary frient to me.

but now i find that he sings well and his voice is special

And then you could say that he has a lot of fans, and I can feel his loneliness (ican feel his lonliness).

his voice touches me deeply

Nothing too much of a problem with the others.