Is there an excerpt plus appreciation of 300 words, and a famous American digest of 300 words

Shen Congwen "Border City".

The place of Chadong builds a city by the water and the mountain, and on the side of the mountain, the city wall is like a long snake, and the edge of the mountain climbs to it. On the waterfront side, there is room for a wharf by the river outside the city, and small caravans are moored in the bay. When the ship goes down, it transports tung oil and green salt, dyed canopy.

On the upward side, cotton, cotton yarn and cloth groceries are transported at the same time. There is a river street that runs through the various wharves, and most of the houses are half landed, half on the water, and because of the limited space, those houses have stilted buildings. When the spring water rose in the river, when the water gradually entered the street, the people on the river street used a long ladder, one end of which was set up at the mouth of the eaves and the ridge, and the other end was set up on the city wall.

If the water comes particularly violently in a certain year, there will be one or two stilted buildings along the river that will be washed away by the big water, and everyone will be waiting for the city.

Appreciation:

A good scene should be concise and descriptive, you can't find gorgeous rhetoric in Shen Congwen's pen, but you can clearly feel the outline of the scene from such brushstrokes, "the city wall is like a long snake, and the edge of the mountain climbs", the indescribable taste, and the faint atmosphere of the article complement each other.

Zhang Xiaofeng's "First Snow".

Now, as the sun rises and the fog clears, the field is so green that it looks so soft that I feel that even if I accidentally fall down this mountain, I won't scratch a piece of skin, but at most I will be bounced twice and stained with a sock that can't be washed off. There is also the small river around the foot of the mountain, which is also green, which is another kind of green, bright and shining, as if mixed with oil, as for the mountain, it is still green, but it is a bunch of rich and lush green, which makes people feel that no matter from the **, they can't pull out a crack, which makes people feel that even if they cut it down two layers, its green will still not be reduced. In addition, my screen window is also green, very light green, and when the sun shines, it really flutters like the gauze skirt of an ancient beauty.

You think, when I write to you on such a green morning, how can my heart not be filled with vibrant green?

Appreciation:

The author fully mobilizes the visual and tactile senses to write about the green of spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage, because it's very warm to read.

This kind of warmth is expressed from **, I think, it is from those warm words that flow, "bright and shiny", "rich and lush", "vibrant", because it is written for children, so it is more poetic and beautiful. The green color of the author's pen seems to be alive and flowing, as if it appears in front of his eyes in the letter. I also like green, and I like the author's green.

Their vitality makes people feel happy and hopeful.

1. The prosperity of the city confused my eyes, and I couldn't find myself, but my hometown was still there. Even if you live happily in a certain city, in the depths of your heart, there is always an invisible thing pulling you, one end in your hometown, the other end firmly tied to the bottom of your heart, and it hurts when you pull it. Especially for people who have been away from their hometown for a long time, especially in the dead of night, the more mellow the glass of wine in their hometown, the clearer the image of their hometown, and the mellow do not want to wake up, which is clearly distressing.

Away from hatred is just like spring grass, go farther and live. It is because of this nostalgia and nostalgia that cannot be solved even if we go to the ends of the earth that we can be comforted by wandering, and our wandering hearts are no longer lonely.

Good paragraph appreciation: This passage expresses my concern and bond for my hometown. The language is beautiful and lyrical, just right, and infectious, which makes us all feel a little bit of nostalgia for our hometown. quoting "Away from hatred is just like spring grass, go farther and live", borrowing verses to express our longing for our hometown at the ends of the earth.

The use of duality in many places strengthens the tone to express the author's deep attachment to his hometown.

The smoke and rain fall and the flowers are buried under the feet, and the clouds are thousands of miles away to tell the lovesickness.

Stay, just one word, make me haggard. Reading it, just one word, made me cry.

The figure lurking in the depths of the memory was seduced by the memory touched by the eye, and the laughter and laughter of the past sank into the silence with the floating dust and was buried under the falling flowers.

Wander through the memories that come and go, waiting for your love, waiting for your return. The bleak night, the gloomy sky, the moment you leave, are all dyed with loneliness. I never thought that after you left, I would be dyed with lovesickness, but unexpectedly, now the eyes that condense tears have become a window of longing.

Look at Youyun, look at Guyan, look at the direction you are in, and chew the happiness of holding hands alone. A wisp of fragrance dormant in the palm of the hand, portraying the figure of a dream, uncovering the memories of happiness with you under the years, drunk, sighing, crying, the plot of the changing picture, no matter how fast and short, it has not been able to annihilate the affection, shadow, broken memory, and memories with you, which has always made me unable to rediscover a new journey, just because I fell in love with melancholy you.

There are three thousand weak waters, and I will only take one scoop; There are thousands of dreams, but I only dream once.

Do you know, you who dream, that in this season of spring, I stand in the place where you once stood, watching in the direction in which you once watched.

If you are a dreamer, do you know that in this season when the catkins are flying, I step on the place where you have stepped and look at the memories that you have never missed.

If you are a dreamer, do you know that in this rainy peach moon, I came to the place where you left the day and continued to write lovesickness with tears.

Ba Jin: Sunrise over the sea.

The sky is still a light blue, very light in color. In the blink of an eye, a red glow appeared on the horizon, slowly expanding its range and intensifying its light. I knew the sun was going to rise from the horizon, so I looked there without turning my eyes.

Sure enough, after a while, in that place appeared the little half of the sun's face, which was really red, but there was no light. The sun seemed to be carrying a heavy load, slowly and slowly, and at last it finally broke through the clouds and jumped completely out of the sea, and the color was very lovely. In an instant, this crimson round thing suddenly emitted a dazzling light, which made people's eyes hurt, and the cloud next to it suddenly became bright.

Appreciation: This paragraph describing the sunrise describes the sunrise from the color, line, action, and light to the sunrise out to sea, grasping the characteristics of the rising sun red but not bright, gradually rising, and rising relatively slowly, the description is meticulous, the writing is unique, and the Chaoyang writes the lovely and rich people's actions, expressions and even feelings, and in the description of the rising process of the rising sun, it also shows that the author's mood is also changed with the rising sun, sometimes excited, sometimes anxious, and finally as relieved as the rising sun, This paragraph directly describes the rising sun, and finally uses contrast and contrast, writing about the changes in the surrounding clouds, so as to highlight the characteristics of the rising sun, making the passage unrestrained and full of changes.