Excerpt sentences plus appreciation 30, excerpt sentences plus appreciation

Sunrise over the Sea - Ba Jin.

Excerpt: Sure enough, after a while, a small half of the sun appeared there, and the red was very red, but there was no light. The sun seemed to be carrying some burden, slowly, step by step, trying to rise upward, and at last it finally broke through the clouds and jumped out of the sea completely.

It's a lovely red.

Appreciation: This is a passage describing the first birth of the sun. The second sentence uses anthropomorphic writing techniques, showing the sun rising "step by step" as a "man carrying a burden".

Such a depiction not only depicts the slowness of the rising sun, but also highlights the beauty, magic and grandeur of the sunrise. This reflects the author's love for nature and meticulous observation of life. We should also be like Ba Jin with a pair of eyes that are good at discovering and be a person who is good at discovering the beauty in life.

Only in this way will the beauty in life be everywhere!

1.Yes, it was lonely snow, dead rain, and the spirit of rain.

2.But I could see the winter flowers blooming in the snow, and there were many bees flying busily, and I could hear them buzzing.

The first sentence is adopted.

formula, passed. wrote about the loneliness of the snow, and the author seemed to vaguely feel the darkness of the society at that time, so it was said to be the rain that died, because the rain and snow were originally a family. Only the spirit of the rain, so it can penetrate.

The reality of this society.

The second sentence, this sentence is the author's imagination from the snow, the author is looking forward to the appearance of spring, but the upright winter, where are the flowers blooming? So in the vast snowfield, the author sees the flying snowflakes as blooming.

As for the busyness and flying of bees, it is hoped that the flying of snowflakes can bring the society back to the prosperity of spring!

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Good sentence: The sky is as blue as a wash, and the brilliant sunlight is shining down through the gaps in the dense pine needles, forming bundles of thick and thin pillars of light, illuminating the shade of the trees floating in a light gauzy mist.

Appreciation: This is a description of the scene, using a figurative rhetorical device, comparing sunlight to a pillar of light to let us know the shape of sunlight.

Original text: In the midst of a hundred quiets, I seem to have many iron tongs stretched out of my head, clamping the flow of "born in the wilderness"; I also heard the sound of my own anxious recitation trembling, like a cricket in late autumn, as if the traveler was chirping in the night.

Appreciation: This is the emotion in Mr. Lu Xun's heart when he was about to go to Dongguan to see the Five Rampant Meeting, but was suddenly stopped by his father and asked him to recite an ancient text before allowing the family to go. I sympathized with him, it was a happy thing, but I had to memorize ancient texts, it was really disappointing to dismantle, and there was no one to help him.

Examples of excerpts and appreciation phrases are as follows:

1. Excerpt: The moon is rising from the place where the water and the sky meet, and the microwave is sparkling on the sea, and the silver light is sprinkled all over in an instant.

Appreciation: The moon is like a painter, the moonlight is like silver paint, the moon pours the moonlight into the sea, and the sea immediately flashes with silver light.

2. Excerpt: I look at the rolling mountains, they are like dancing water sleeves, like endless charm staves.

Appreciation: Ah, I seem to have seen the mountains. The lines of the mountains are so soft, just like a Chinese painting that is rendered only in green and not outlined with ink lines, flowing green everywhere and gently flowing into the clouds.

3. Excerpt: When the sunrise is so slender that its tentacles poke out of the clouds, and the golden thread-like light passes through the gaps in the leaves, there will be a sound of closing the door on the ginkgo tree.