Correct mistakes in the short article, a total of ten mistakes, find the second

Plain and insipid maternal love.

I once saw the scene of the mother's sacrifice for her children in the news of Wenchuan Da**; I have read many inspirational stories about mother's love in various magazines; I once browsed some poems in praise of my mother in my composition book. These loves are nothing more than vigorous love, chic love, love that gives life. The love between me and my mother, although not so vigorous, I think that maternal love can also be plain.

Mom and I don't have much to say on the surface, unlike the mothers of some classmates, who ask for warmth, and nag about all the trivial things in life. However, every morning, I find a cup of hot water at the head of my bed; Every morning, the food that I brought to class was packed into my school bag; Every afternoon when I got home from school, it was already 7 o'clock, and the hot dinner was already on the table; Before going to bed, I usually had a cup of hot water and a warm quilt, all of which I naturally accepted. These silent movements and actions have turned into wisps of clear water that flow into my heart, making me feel warm every time.

My mother and I became closer because of the clear water. I often call her affectionately, and I often confide in me when I go out for a walk in the evening, and she is a good observer. Every time I finished talking, my pain was reduced by half, and she came to comfort me, increase my self-confidence, teach me how to deal with things, and sweep away my unhappiness.

Mother is the wings that give us strength; Mother is the sunshine and gives us warmth; Mother is a clear spring that gives us nectar. Let's understand our mothers and be grateful to them!

Summary. Hello, thank you very much for your question, this row is removed, long removed er, wonderful removed ly, many changed to mush, only these few places are found at present, I wish you a happy life!

Hello, thank you very much for your question, next to the slippery Dan, this row is removed, long removed er, wonderful removed ly, many changed to mush, at present, only late lines are now these places, I wish you a happy life letter oak! Thank you

You're welcome as it should be. Well.

29---29th (is not complete).

joined in--- remove in

Eleven Thousands---ThousandsRemove Sactive---Actively

holding---held

Add that after hope

that it is

were spend -- remove were

Add of of worth after worth

help to helps

Effient changed to effiently

The corrections are noted in parentheses, for a total of 10 errors. This is the original question of the 2011 Liaoning College Entrance Examination English test, which is guaranteed to be accurate. In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports (changed to was).

2.Remove the IN after joining

Thousands Students was changed to Eleven Thousand Students

Active part of of an active part in

Holding was hold

6.we were spend remove wereus and replace it with helps

efficient to more efficiently

1.Add the TO after 1 line

2.2 lines by to to

Row cover changed to covering

Replace that with what

5.The penultimate line must be changed to can

6.In the penultimate line, remove the to after pro

7.The penultimate line of knowing is changed to know

The row of the changed to were

The row of we is changed to they

10.In the penultimate row, replace independent with independence

Answer] [Question 1] The second sentence: before

Changed to. ago

Question 2: friend

Changed to friends

Question 3] The third sentence.

Changed to own's

Question 4] The fourth sentence: and

Change to but question 5] The fifth sentence: of

Changed to. for

Question 6] The sixth sentence: Replace good with well

Question 7: Sentence 7: Remove result

The eighth sentence of the IS question 8] is removed.

Being Question 9] Sentence 9: Sure

Add whether at the end

Question 10] Sentence 11: needed

Changed to need

Answer Analysis] Test Question Analysis:

Question 1] ago means "some time ago from now", which means "...... from nowBefore", it needs to be used in conjunction with the past tense or past continuous tense. Before is a general meaning of "a certain amount of time from the past", which means:

...... some time in the pastPreviously "" with its ......(rather)", often used in conjunction with the perfect tense, so the second sentence: before

Changed to. ago。

Question 2: one

The plural form of a countable noun.

Question 3] Own means one's own, so the third sentence.

Changed to own's

Question 4: I tried my best to get him to change his mind, but failed. So the fourth sentence: and

Changed to but.

Question 5] Meaning: I realized that it was very difficult for me to change his mind. So the fifth sentence: of

Changed to. for。

Question 6] Use adverbs to modify verbs, so the sixth sentence: good is changed to well.

Question 7] This sentence is a table structure, is redundant, so remove result

The back is.

Question 8] There is a passive relationship between "stay" and "90 days", so the past participle is used, so the eighth sentence: remove.

being。

Question 9] There is an object clause here that indicates "whether", so the introductory word whether is used.

Question 10] indicates the present situation, using the simple present tense.

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