The last battle is like a small practice pen

1. I think that the comrades-in-arms who once fought with me in bloody battles have died on the battlefield, and I look at my companions, but I can't do anything, I can only use my strength to continue to kill the enemy, to defend our homeland, and to avenge my dead comrades-in-arms! After you all died, I survived. This is not a blessing for me, it is a great shame, and I have infinite resentment and shame in my heart, because I am not with you, I have not shared your ups and downs.

How I look forward to living with you forever. I was carried ashore here, and I was doomed to die with you, and as a comrade-in-arms who fought with you in bloody battles, my heart was filled with shame and guilt. But I want to be thankful for this, for Bononddin and the villagers, for saving me.

It allowed me to live another 26 more springs and autumns. Now it's good! Comrades-in-arms, I'm here, and I'm finally all with you.

2. Ga Carol is leaving, it looks back at the village, and thinks: I will spend the rest of my life in this village, this is like my second home, how reluctant I am to leave here! However, I already felt my companions and death calling me, and I had to get out of here!

Because to me, my companions are my brothers, and I will lie down with my brothers in a "mound of elephants".

Goodbye, villagers! I'm gone, please don't worry about me anymore, if there is a next life, I will come to you again.

Goodbye, villagers, goodbye, Bonondin. Thank you for taking care of me all these years, but now, I have to go. I'm going to the Hundred Elephant Tomb and lie down with my comrades-in-arms who used to fight side by side.

Because I am a war elephant in my bones, I have never forgotten my mission. Even if you die, you have to lie down with your comrades-in-arms and treat death as home!

Goodbye, villagers, goodbye, Bonondin.

When it walked up to the turtle-shaped reef, it thought to itself, this is where I fell. It kissed and kissed on it, feeling the smoke of gunpowder and the breath of comrades-in-arms. I finally died with my comrades, and I died without regrets.

Ancestors, I'm sorry, I didn't go to the elephant grave you left behind to bury myself, but buried myself with my comrades. I'm sorry, I'm sorry!

Friends were waiting for me, and here I am.

Lin Xuejiezhi wrote, the composition should be written by yourself, not copied.

Unit 7 of the sixth grade Chinese volume 23, "The Last War Elephant".

Three small practice pens.

One of them: the scene of Gacar's farewell to the village.

The news that Ga Carng was leaving spread all over the village like wings, and men, women and children flocked to the threshing floor to see Ga Carng off. Many people wept silently ... Ga Shan was both moved and sad, tears welled up in its eyes, it thought to itself:

Thank you, good villagers, thank you! I should have died on the battlefield back then, but everyone worked together to save me and heal my injuries, and I can't repay everyone's kindness. For more than 20 years, everyone has been so good to me, I don't have to work to move things, but I have caused a lot of trouble to everyone, and I am really ashamed that you have wasted so much food!

Now I'm old and leaving! I want to say goodbye to you, we will be separated forever, I will remember your intentions, and if there is an afterlife, I will come back to you again and be with you. Keep these things for your own use!

However, I am very reluctant to go like this, I am reluctant to let you go, I will walk around the village three times to see one last look. Farewell, dear ones!

Second: the scene of Gali standing on the river beach and reminiscing about the past.

It stood on the pebbles of the river beach and stared at the rippling river for a long time. "I remembered, I remembered! "The reflection on the river suddenly became the picture of the year:

Under the leadership of Gaqing, seventy or eighty war elephants raised their heads, waved their sharp tusks, and pounced on the Japanese devils who were about to cross the river. Then, stepping on the rushing river, it walked to a turtle-shaped reef, and thought to himself: Isn't this the place where he stood and commanded his comrades to fight?

It clearly remembers that on this reef, it repelled the devil's attacks again and again, did not let the devil take a step forward, and even killed seven devils with his own hands, but there was a devil who fired more than a dozen shots at it, and when it was hit by dozens of bullets, it hanged which Japanese devil with its nose, rolled him up and threw him dozens of meters away, and finally was seriously injured, it was this stone that blocked itself, so it was not washed away by the river! Ga carboxy kissed and kissed the stone. After a long time, he raised his head again, and let out a deafening roar towards the fiery red morning sun on the horizon.

It's like saying: I'm not old yet, I'm okay!

Third: the scene of Ga Carol standing in front of the "Hundred Elephant Mound".

Ga Shan left the Taluo River and burrowed into a dense ditch. On a gently sunny hillside, it came to an abrupt halt. In the middle of the barren grass, there is a stone tablet engraved with three large characters with peeling gold leaf and a little blurred handwriting:

Elephant mound. "Comrades-in-arms, comrades-in-arms! You have been here for more than 20 years, you are my bravest warriors, you are the most fearless heroes in the world of war elephants, and I am proud of you.

Ga has lived more than 20 years in vain than you, if you have a choice, time can be turned back, I would rather choose to be like you back then, bloody battles and deaths, bravely kill the enemy to repay the motherland. Now, I can finally be with you!

Ga looked at the fiery red sunrise in the sky, and her heart fluctuated:

Looking back on my life, it is like the rising sun on the horizon, red and prosperous; It is like this lake and river, plain and ......

This is the beginning of the first paragraph, and then I think to myself, or I will hurt you)

Perhaps, my companion summoned me with the Grim Reaper......I'm sorry, my ancestors have been saying to me for generations, Bononddin and the villagers are my "family", my companions are my brothers, the village is my second home, and I want to lie down with my brothers in a "hundred elephant mound".

This is the beginning and end of the second paragraph, and then I think to myself, or I will hurt you).

Accustomed to charging in a hail of bullets, accustomed to smelling ammunition mixed with rot. Suddenly it was quiet. It's a bloody loneliness. Seeing my comrades-in-arms fall from bullets, and I can only charge and kill the enemy, this is nothing more than the greatest resentment and shame ...... my life

This is the first few sentences of the third paragraph, and then I thought to myself, and I can't copy it, this is my "copyright", I got A, and the teacher read it in the class, and I want to protect the composition that I wrote until half past ten, I hope to understand).

Goodbye, villagers! Goodbye, Bonondin! I left, not taking a cloud with me, only left, a trace, regret ......

Ga Shan walked all night, and at dawn, he came to the bank of the Taluo River. It stood on the pebbles of the river beach and stared at the rippling river for a long time. Then, stepping on the rushing river, it walked to a turtle-shaped reef and kissed it again and again, which had saved its life.

After a long time, he raised his head again and let out a deafening roar towards the fiery red morning sun on the horizon.

This is the battlefield where Gakar and his companions fought bloody battles back then, more than 80 war elephants, and in one battle, only one war elephant remained. Although in these twenty-six years, the villagers were very good to it.

However, these twenty-six years of lonely life! Twenty-six years of nostalgia for my companions! These twenty-six years of hatred for the enemy!

It all erupted at this time. At this time, its body swelled up, its four legs were tense and shiny, its eyes were blazing, and its roar was agitated and tragic, startling the fish in the river to jump out of the water.

Ga Carol thought of a lot of ...... at this time

Comrades-in-arms! Companions! I came, and I have not forgotten you.

Twenty-six springs, summers, autumns and winters, I have been thinking about you, my dear companions. Comrades-in-arms! Companions!

I came, I knew that one day we would meet again, and now, I'm finally with you!

Terrible enemy! You have killed my companions, and you have taken the lives of more than eighty of my companions. Let me be alone from now on, and let me be separated from my companions for twenty-six years.

If you could turn back the clock and go back to that day. I will not let you hurt my companions, and you will not want to take the lives of my companions again! Let you taste the pain of losing your companions.

I won't forget this day!

Thank you, kind villagers! You are the one who gave me a second life, and I can't thank you enough for that. Farewell! Kind villagers!

Messenger of Peace, where are you! I'm looking for you so hard! Wake up the mad humans and stop killing each other! This has cost me my most precious companions, and I don't want history to repeat itself.

The last war elephant.

Then, as he stepped on the rushing river, he came to the turtle-shaped reef and thought to himself, "This is where I fell." It kissed and kissed on the turtle-shaped reef, feeling the smoke of gunpowder and the breath of comrades-in-arms. As if recalling the terrible things that happened back then, it seemed to see the scene when it fought with the Japanese invaders, as if it saw its companions fall to the ground one by one, and only it, Ga Carol is still alive, it is the last war elephant left behind back then, it is now going back to its companions, it roars, roars with grief, as if telling friends that it is coming, its heart is fluctuating, thinking:

Companions, I'm coming, and we're reunited again after twenty-six years of absence. At this time, Gacar's body began to swell, its heart was sour, and it wanted to cry, its two legs were tense, as if thinking: "My life is so prosperous, I am leaving now, I hope everyone will take care, I have received your help, I have no way to repay you, everyone does not have to worry about me."

After a while, Ga Karma left the battlefield where he had been fighting.

It seemed to see, to see the comrades who had fought with him in the bloody past, and they stood up one by one with the scars of the past, walked to its side, and roared. Ga Shan roared towards the sky, thinking of the battlefield of the bloody battle of the year, thinking of the Japanese devil who killed his companions, Ga Carang's eyes were full of anger, it left the Daluo River, left the battlefield of the bloody fight of the year.

It's gone again, it's going to find its former comrades!

He came to the Hyaksan Mound, where more than 80 war elephants were killed by the Japanese devils. He found a platform, stood on it, and seemed to say, "Friends, I'm coming!" ”

For more than 20 years, the war elephant, who has never forgotten his responsibilities, misses his comrades-in-arms and walks next to his companions. Fear of harming the plate.

This data is ** on the map, and the final result is subject to the latest data on the map.

Looking back on my life, it is like the rising sun on the horizon, red and prosperous; How lucky I am, twenty-three years ago I was rescued by Bonondin, who freed me from the hands of death, but I always had to die. I have to go.

Perhaps, my brothers have summoned me with the Grim Reaper......I'm sorry, my ancestors, I didn't go to the elephant mound you left behind, for me, Bonondin and the villagers are my "family", my companions are my brothers, the village is my second home, I want to lie down with my brothers in a "hundred elephant mound" I want to be a loyal war elephant

I've come a long way, goodbye, friends, for the dream in my heart, I look forward to being with my companions, goodbye, villagers! Goodbye, Bonondin! I'm gone, thank you for saving me twenty-three years ago, I won't forget the care you and the villagers have taken care of me for the past twenty-three years, and I'm going to lie down with my brothers who used to fight side by side......

The illustrations in the book show the actions of the villagers when they go to the elephant mound when they want to open the carbox.

The homework may not necessarily be handed in, and if it is handed in, it may not be written by yourself, but it is written.

Not necessarily, if you know, you may not necessarily pass the exam, if you pass the exam, you may not be able to graduate, if you finish your studies, you may not be able to find a job, if you find a job, you may not find a wife, and if you marry a wife, you may not be able to get a wife.

Giving birth to a child, giving birth to a child is not necessarily your own. Oh my God, hand in your homework.

What are you doing!!

Let P do your own thing.

This is a tragic, touching, thought-provoking animal**. The text tells the story of Gaqing, the last elephant who survived the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, knowing that the end of his life had come, he put on the elephant saddle again, came to the bank of the Taluo River to remember the past, hung on the battlefield, and finally dug a pit next to the "Hundred Elephant Mound" where his comrades were buried, and solemnly buried himself.

The text is chronologically detained: "The Twilight of the Hero" (1 4 natural paragraphs), "Re-donning the battle armor" (5 11 natural paragraphs), "Hanging on the battlefield" (12 16 natural paragraphs), and "Solemn Return" (17 23 natural paragraphs), which describe the last glory and solemnity of Ga Qi's life. In particular, the description of Ga Carng's movements and demeanor is meticulous, and the spirituality of Ga Carb is vividly portrayed.

For example, Ga Carng's demeanor and expression when he saw the elephant saddle again, his long gaze and roar by the Daluo River, and the scene of silently digging a grave next to the "Hundred Elephant Mound" will leave a deep impression on the reader.

The article is beautifully written and vividly described, and it praises the noble feelings of the war elephant Ga Carng with affectionate strokes. Reading the whole text, evocative, thought-provoking, animals still have this noble feelings, should we humans understand something from it, learn something?

This lesson should guide students to read at a certain speed, and practice retelling the text in their own words on the basis of grasping the main content of the text and sorting out the structure. And through the affectionate reading, feel the affectionate language of the text, and experience the noble feelings of kindness and loyalty of the war elephant; The difficulty is to feel the author's expression method and comprehend the author's creative intention through reading aloud.