Seeking poetry and the image of a sunny day in spring, urgently seeking a way to appreciate poetry a

The starting point of this poem is a little higher than the previous ones. There are two problems (both of which are actually present in all of your poems).

1. The choice of words is cold and the metaphor is grotesque. Comparing the clear sky to an upside-down pot may be vivid, but it's wrong. Generally speaking, the clear sky is said to be how open and boundless, and you take a pot to buckle it up, giving people a feeling of suffocation.

Unless you want to make grotesque poems, don't use a pot. The same problem is with the word "indiscriminate" at the end.

2. There is no poetic heart. There is nothing else to say except to depict the scene, and one symptom is to spin in place, and the four sentences are repeating the same thing. Good poems should be progressive, and each sentence has development.

Recombine your sentence and change a few words (the color word is repeated, not good, and the other 4th sentence is out of rhythm):

The clear sky is like a painting, and the sky is dyed blue.

Bai Yun was faint and gentle, suspicious of splashing the jade water of Yaochi.

The last sentence is the finishing touch, which should be different from the first three sentences, and also give people room for imagination.

Yulu washed the blue sky last night, and the light clouds smeared the color softly.

The dawn on the horizon is like dye, who makes the giant light faint?

I think your original poetic intention is to write about the sky and clouds and shadows in the clear sky, as if the effect of dry and wet rendering in Chinese painting, and I also feel this way, such as the mountain shadow in the rainy weather, which is also very similar to splashed ink painting. It seems that the combination of poetry and painting is very effective, the ancients said, there are paintings in poems, there are poems in paintings, and this is what you want, and it would be better if you paid attention to the accurate expressiveness of the language.

If you want to learn words, it is better to have a primer called Baixiang Lexicon.

Yes, it's okay to write. Nothing to change.

The last two sentences are good, and the first two sentences can be appropriately changed to make them look a little more literate

1 The grass is luxuriant, but the bean seedlings are sparse. It shows that the author is not good at farming, and what he wants to express is the joy of retreat.

2 Morning and moon. It shows that the labor in Xianzhen is very hard, but he does not complain, and the picture of returning to the ploughing on a moonlit night with the moon and lotus hoe in the following article shows this.

3 The idea of retreating to the mountains and forests. It also contains the meaning of not losing oneself in the filthy real world.

The intention is right) brother search rough.

From the scenery to the love, the guests miss their hometown.

The faint clouds are red and the rest of the glow is shining. (faint clouds set off the sun's sinking, leaving afterglow) stars soaked in the Milky Way water (bright stars are like soaking in the clear water of the Milky Way). Pillow painting eaves wind (leaning on the pillow with your head propped up, and gently drawing the eaves in gusts of wind).

Sorrowful grass scorpion (suddenly sad because of the cry of the cold scorpion in the grass). The geese left the jam late. (Rows of geese fly away from the plug in the evening).

No, Hengyang is far away (I don't know how far away Hengyang is.) At this moment, the poet began to return from the wild geese, and began to miss his hometown even more). Returning to the hatred of the mountains (I want to go back to my hometown, but there are countless mountains).

The height of the building does not rely on the railing (do not snuggle on the railing of the high building, for fear that you will forget the direction of your hometown as soon as you go up, and you will miss your hometown even more, which is a kind of loneliness of thought). I'll give you a little translation, and you'll see what kind of technique you're using. I don't know much, you can check the appreciation of Song words.

There is a confidant in the sea, and the end of the world is like a neighbor.

Inaction is on the wrong path, and the children are stained with scarves.