Hmm, which kind brother or sister can help me revise my essay?

very good！！！If you count it as 100 points, you can score 95 points for this essay The whole essay seems to have almost no flaws, from the rainbow after the rain to the rain, and then to the selflessness of the rain, to human beings, to nature, to the world to bring beauty, and finally to the rainbow as the center... It's really well written, oh 555 makes me, a scumbag of essays, feel ashamed of myself.。。。

PS: It is recommended that you publish this article in a magazine, and if you are selected, you can also get a manuscript fee! If you like to write, it is recommended that you keep this love of writing all the time, because your writing is very good, the words are appropriate, and the sentences are beautiful.

PS: That's just my opinion. Dear, if you're satisfied, don't forget to like + yo 3q

It should be written first that crops survived the wind and rain, and finally how to see the rainbow without experiencing the wind and rain, it is best to add a small story to tell my sister how to see the rainbow without experiencing the wind and rain, personal opinion, you can ignore it.

In the second sentence "My good friend Junbao and I are as usual again", the name "Junbao" in it is different from the "Junbao" in the back.

The second sentence "looking for a good hole and going home" does not make sense.

The first sentence "Grandpa Tao's noble quality" almost does not mention the words related to Tao Lao's quality, this sentence is so abrupt.

Many people envy the freshness, simplicity, nature, and leisure in the paradise, and the author begins the article with the sentence "The long-awaited Saturday has finally arrived again." "It seems to have the meaning of looking forward to a leisurely time; But later, "I decided to leave after a meal" and was not attached to it. I don't know why?

Hey, hey, what did you write? Why can't I read it? It should be written like this: The name "Junbao" in the second sentence "My good friend Junbao and I are as usual again" is different from the "Junbao" at the end.

The second sentence "looking for a good hole and going home" does not make sense.

The first sentence "Grandpa Tao's noble quality" almost does not mention the words related to Tao Lao's quality, this sentence is so abrupt.

Many people envy the freshness, simplicity, nature, and leisure in the paradise, and the author begins the article with the sentence "The long-awaited Saturday has finally arrived again." "It seems to have the meaning of looking forward to a leisurely time; But later, "I decided to leave after a meal" and was not attached to it. I don't know why?

"We were welcomed by the villagers, and after a meal, we decided to leave ......”

The word mix is not very good!!

Well, I know about your Homecoming. But honestly, I didn't expect us to see you. ”

But seriously, "put a comma after it."

The first sentence "Grandpa Tao's noble quality" almost does not mention the words related to Tao Lao's quality, this sentence is so abrupt.

I'm beautiful because I'm confident.

Self-confidence brings me a lot of joy. Self-confidence makes me beautiful, floating freely in the ocean of youth, and feeling the good times of youth.

I'm beautiful because I'm confident. In the speech contest, I kept cheering myself on: believe in myself, I can!

So, in the speech, I relied on my perseverance to overcome the nervousness of the competition. My efforts were not in vain. Match Results:

1st place. I'm beautiful because I'm confident. In my studies, I keep motivating myself. Believe in yourself, as long as you put in the effort, you will definitely be reported. The result: the grades in the class rose again and again.

I'm beautiful because I'm confident. When my idea was opposed by my classmates. I mustered up the courage and confidence and did everything I could to get them to recognize.

I see all difficulties as so small, and it is because of my self-confidence that I am not worried about it, nor am I afraid of it, because I have a good "talisman" self-confidence.

In my studies and life, I am full of self-confidence; I am also full of confidence in my interactions with teachers and classmates. A confident life has made me colorful.

Confidence has you, confidence has me. As long as you are confident, you also have a colorful life. Self-confidence is honed, not something that exists. However, as long as you are willing to try, you will also have self-confidence.

Let our lives have it and make it perfect!

Look at! I, a beautiful girl because of self-confidence!

I am beautiful because I have self-confidence, in the speech contest I keep cheering myself up and saying that I will be able to do it, I am the best I am beautiful in my studies and keep encouraging myself to believe in myself Only by putting in the effort, I will definitely be able to achieve good results Look at me a confident little girl.

The article didn't mention Grandpa Tao's lightness.

Essay on Japan** 600 words.

At 13:46 on March 11, while we were still in class, a major event occurred in Sendai, Japan, a neighbor of our country, which was the largest in Japan and the fifth largest in the world so far.

This time** is divided into different levels, the largest ** did not occur on the island of Japan, but occurred in the Pacific Ocean east of Miyagi Prefecture (a county in Japan), the depth of the epicenter is about 20 kilometers, because the magnitude of this ** is too large, so it caused a huge tsunami that engulfed several prefectures, including Sendai, and the Japan Meteorological Agency issued a high-level tsunami warning.

It is said that the tsunami will reach the eastern coast of Taiwan at around 17:17:13 on March 11, with a wave height of 50 to 100 cm, and reach the coast of Zhejiang and Fujian around 21 o'clock, with a wave height of about 30 to 60 cm; It reached the eastern coast of Guangdong at around 22 o'clock, and the wave height was within 40 cm; It arrived at the coast of Jiangsu and Shanghai at around 2 a.m. on the 12th, with a wave height of about 30 cm.

After the incident, Japan **sharply**, several people are currently known to have been injured, and at least 2 people have been buried. Local television footage shows that due to the strong tsunami triggered by **, there were meter-high waves in the port of Iwate, Japan, dozens of cars floating in the water, and Miyamoto Prefecture, Japan, which is closest to the epicenter, has been declared "severe**". According to the latest news from Japan's Kyodo News Agency, at 3:25 pm local time on the 11th, all naval ships docked at the Yokosuka Port Base in Japan have been ordered to sail to the waters near Miyagi Prefecture to help the earthquake area.

In addition, Miyagi Prefecture Governor Yoshihiro Murai asked the Ground Self-Defense Force to dispatch disaster relief personnel at about 3 p.m.

Alas, Japan, there was a tsunami on your side, I deeply sympathize, but you have killed so many of our innocent compatriots before, I deeply hate, but one love is better than one hate, I still sympathize with you, I could have donated money or materials to you, but there is no such activity, so I can only wait silently. Ah, I pray for the Japanese and may they be safe!

Is there anything about growth? What are the troubles? Want me to tell you! That can only quote Stephen Chow's sentence: "It's like a surging river, continuous; It's like the Yellow River flooding, out of control! ”

I'm 14 years old, but I'm still a child. It is in our nature to play as children, and it is our right to be overbearing! However, when we enter the student stage, do we have fun?

Want to play? "Have you done your homework? "It's done" "Checked?"

Also checked. "Then review your previous homework, or preview tomorrow's lesson!" Don't be idle!

I don't know how many times I've had conversations like this. To learn, but that doesn't stop us from taking a break, right? Parents and teachers, less homework, less practice, less supervision, give us some time to rest!

When you grow up, you should do the housework yourself. "When you grow up, why don't you know how to be sensible? "As you grow up, why are you becoming more and more disobedient?

These conversations are not strange at all, and in your growth, you have often heard your elders say such things to you, right? After listening to it, I felt so uncomfortable! We are now growing, we are moving towards a mature stage.

Saying that we have grown up is ...... like thisThat'......Don't you still treat us as children? Since we are still children, and we are treated as children, don't be so anxious to urge us to grow up, I don't want to grow up so soon! Mom and Dad, please learn more about our inner world!

Oops - there are so many growing pains! Thinking about tomorrow's math test, there are still two essays, three test papers, and four practice questions after 10 o'clock in the evening, my parents don't understand me, my parents always peek at my diary, my classmates don't socialize with me, and my friends misunderstand me......There are too many of these troubles, how much joy and laughter do we have less? How attached I was to the time when I was still croaking and staggering?

However, growth is like this, where there is happiness and trouble, and when there is sorrow, there is joy. Like a rainbow bridge, red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, although numerous, but not inferior to colorful. It's also like a ghetto, sweet and sour, spicy and salty, and the taste of it is only known after trying it!

Let go of your hands, accept your troubles, and paint all the current events that are sad and happy as your rainbow bridge. Take all the vignettes of your life growth and make a unique cruet for children.

Growing pains.

The pace of growth has come, and the growing pains have followed. It makes people shroud in melancholy all day long.

Why are you so careless, the uppercase letters of English are written in lowercase; Mathematics is either forgetting to add the decimal point, or the brain can't turn around; The same is true of language, what should not be wrong is always wrong. ......Grades are always not improving! "Since the beginning of my childhood, these kinds of words have always haunted me.

Sometimes it's my parents' criticism, sometimes it's my self-discipline, and sometimes it's my sister's sarcasm.

I also want to improve my grades, but I can't get my way. Either this subject missed, or that subject failed. These are things I never expected.

Who doesn't want to get a good score, but everyone's ability is different, and the effort is different, so the "fruit" of the harvest is also shriveled and full. That's why I can only say, "Do your best!"

Finish. Life is only wonderful when there is competition – these are my words of consolation. But despite this, there are still a lot of worries that linger on me: as a student, I told myself that I couldn't get too bad grades; As a daughter, I told myself not to let my parents down; As an older sister, I told myself to give my sister a good example ......As a result, there is an increasing number of troubles.

But on the other hand, if I get a good grade so easily, wouldn't it be a great loss of its own meaning and people's desire to have it? When you think about it this way, there are a lot fewer worries. But there is another view formed in my mind - although there is some truth in the above statement, it is too naïve, a bit like saying that grapes are sour if you can't eat them.

If you don't work hard, good grades won't come to your door. So, my troubles are still like a shadow, following me all the time. This may be a mediocre nuisance, but it is true that this should be the trouble that most students face.

The solution to this problem is to study, study, and learn again. "I've been annoyed lately, and I've been annoyed ......"I now finally understand that this song actually sings about the helplessness and confusion that our teenagers show in the face of the troubles of learning. Growing pains are constantly coming, and I hope that we can withstand the "attack" of all troubles and learn to grow healthily in them!!

The bounty score is so low...

Growth, we are in the stage of growth ... In the process of growing up, we will go through many things, and it is these things that make us grow.

In the process of growing up, we cried and laughed. We laugh, we laugh when we are praised, we laugh at the funny things we do, we laugh at the jokes we see ... We cry, we cry because we are ashamed that we have done something wrong, we cry because we cry because we stumble into the wounds that arise from stumbling, we cry when others have wronged us...

In the journey of growth, you will encounter more troubles, physiologically, psychologically, spiritually...

A few examples, some of the things you experienced growing up)

"Growth" can be a headache at times, but growth is inevitable. "Growing pains" Because of "troubles", we are growing.

Growing pains.

Under the dim table lamp, I stared at this cup of tea, and the impact of boiling water again and again made me feel the fragrance of tea. The slight sweetness in the bitterness was also occupied by my greedy mouth, and the hazy eyes outlined the hazy memory, but the memory was no longer hazy. The amount of homework is "difficult" and there is little play, and the seriousness of the teacher "hinders" the laughter and the heavy pressure, which "creates" us in the dream - the growing pains.

Open the thick book of memories, and the thoughts are a little bit, maybe some of the past that you are tired of looking back on. When the "beginning" arrived, a fragile me was targeted at the "weak point" by the "enemy" and fired a shot, and the vulnerable me was sacrificed on the "blood" field, but I stood up again when I "picked up the lamp and read the scroll in my sleep, and dreamed of reciting poems when the bell rang". During those years, I was confused in the dark, and in addition to studying, sometimes I would find a place on the grass that had not yet withered yellow, and sometimes I would be in front of my desk or by the windowsill, watching the rows of trees standing in the distance fighting, just to give out the last trace of bright green.

What kind of trees are those? I don't know, but what does it matter? As long as they are trees, that's enough.

When I look at them in a daze, my heart is full of thoughts, and when my eyes return to the tree, my mood suddenly brightens, the stress is gone, and I can devote myself to my busy studies. It seems that the fragrance of tea has filled the "world", and my mood is boiling. My struggle, overcoming the troubles, overcoming everything, made it seem to be the last trace of bright green, and also emitted the same brilliance equivalent to the height of summer.

The young man doesn't know the taste of 'annoyance'", but at the turn of this "mountain and water", if anyone relaxes, what awaits you is "thousands of swamps and thorns". On the contrary, if it is hard work and perseverance, what awaits you is "willows and flowers, green mountains and green waters". Do you really want to let your troubles turn into wisps of smoke, entangle your soul, make you bored, and make you miserable?

If growing up is a book, then troubles are typos hidden in the depths of the paragraphs; If growth is a blank slate, then troubles are a blemish attached to the back. These tiny things seem to be familiar, as if they have been bothering us, in the nature of growing up, the past like a breeze of learning, is now blown away in the depths of memory by the storm of learning and pressure attack. The temperature of the tea was no longer felt in the hands, and the fog that permeated the room quietly disappeared.

Taste the water of "bitterness and happiness" more attentively, taste the troubles of growth, "annoyance and annoyance", time is also "walking", and the experience is "more", and taste the tea again, the "bitterness" seems to have disappeared with the temperature and the time measured with the soul.......