English Essay Expansion I only thought of 120 words, and asked for help me to expand it to 150 words

One sunny morning, the little rabbit happily went to mow the grass in the field. Cutting and cutting, Lele found that Xiaoyu had his head exposed to the water, and Lele asked curiously: "Xiaoyu, why don't you play with your friends?"

Why are you showing your head? The little fish said, "It's going to rain, and the water is too stuffy, so I'm going to show my head."

Lele looked up, the sky was high and the clouds were light, it didn't believe the words of the little fish, and it still played while mowing the grass. Lele saw that the little swallow was flying very low, which seemed to be parallel to its ears, and asked, "Little swallow, why are you flying so low?"

Uncomfortable? Little Swallow said, "It's going to rain, and the air pressure is pressing me down."

Lele looked up and saw that the sky was gray and hail, and Lele slowly walked home in disbelief. As he walked, Lele saw a group of ants moving to a higher place, and Lele asked, "Why do you want to move to a higher place?"

The little ants said, "It's going to rain, so we have to move higher in order to prevent the rain from bringing us disaster." Lele looked up and saw that the clouds were thick, and Lele hurried home.

Walking and walking, staring at the pouring rain, Lele carried a basket on his head and hurried home.

If you are asking this question as a teacher, it is recommended that you improve your self-cultivation and become a people's teacher who leads by example.

If you are a right student, you should complete your homework by yourself, copying the answers will not improve you much, but will only develop your laziness and opportunistic mentality.

If you run into problems, you can ask for help here.

Uncle Little Stone.

1. Review the materials.

The materials provided by the expanded article are often limited, so every word is very important, and it is necessary to read carefully, analyze the original text, and deeply understand the ideological content of the original text. In particular, the title of the article often hints at the main point of the article, so when expanding the article, it is necessary to grasp the topic and imagine it. If you don't think of it, you have to catch it"Really"In the process of writing, we should focus on the psychology of the characters when they start to do things and the final ending is unexpected.

Grasp the topic, and the expansion is half the battle.

2. Excavate materials.

In the expanded essay, although the material provided is limited, there are some clues that provide us with the center of the original text (i.e., the author's intent). Such as the material: the small bolt takes the telescope to the store to buy the ball.

The salesman looked for more money, so he picked up the money and walked out. Suddenly he heard the salesman call out to him, and he ran faster. The salesman finally caught up with him.

It turned out that he had lost his telescope on the counter. The little bolt is very educated and returns the money he has found. In this material, it is necessary to grasp it"Very educated"This key word, so that the expanded content is consistent with the original text, and avoid distortion and unintentional arbitrary patchwork.

3. Imagine boldly.

The purpose of the extended essay is to cultivate students' imagination and creativity. However, when expanding, it is necessary to carry out extensive imagination and association around the main points of the original text, from small to large, from less to more. Therefore, when writing to imagine the wings.

As in the above materials,"Very educated"You can grasp the expression, action, and psychology of the small bolt at that time, boldly imagine, and highlight the quality of the character who knows his mistakes.

In short, in order to write a good extended article, you must dig deep into the materials provided and imagine boldly, so as to make the article flesh and blood and attract readers.

Expansion refers to the form of composition training that expands and exerts rough fragments or short passages without changing the basic spirit of the original text. Its purpose is to make the main content of the original text more vivid and concrete, and to make the central idea of the original text more distinct and profound.

Generally speaking, the expansion cannot change the central idea, main characters and events of the original work, and cannot change the genre, person, time, place, and language style of the original text.

Expand the basics:

1. Read the original text carefully and grasp the main content.

2. Carefully study the original text and grasp the main idea.

3. According to the central idea, determine the expanded content.

4. Imagine wings and enrich the content of the original text.

For those plots that have little to do with the central idea, only a simple expansion is required, while those plots that are close to the central idea and closely related to the main content need to be expanded in detail.

Material 2:

I look forward to it, Wednesday's class meeting has finally arrived! Today we are running for class president, and I came to school with mixed feelings.

There was another difficult excess, and time passed minute by minute, and the class meeting I had been waiting for for a long time finally began! The teacher announced: "The ceremony of running for class president begins now!"

After the teacher explained the conditions for being the class leader, he looked around, and the teacher called my classmates to the podium to give their speeches.

XX's speech was very wonderful: "I will do my best to help the class, so that our class spirit is getting better and better, and every teacher thinks that our class is the best ......."As long as I can do it, I will definitely do it for the class! "I was amazed.

The teacher then called me to the podium, I cleared my throat, greeted the whole class, and began my speech: "Students, I have always been looking forward to being the class president, if I become the class president, I will definitely try my best to guide the students' study and labor, help the students improve their literacy, and make the physical education of our class to a higher level......I hope you all vote for me, thank you. ”

You can add your own content here, such as who is speaking).

The election campaign continues to be in full swing ......

After listening to my speech, the students all rushed to elect me as the class president, and finally I won with xx votes, and I said to the students: "I will definitely do this job well to repay the trust and support of the students, thank you!" ”

Others are not written. Material 1:

Just after the exam on Monday, the teacher said: "Most of the students have lost points in the composition this time, I recommend a copy of "Teach You to Write" to everyone, which is very helpful for writing essays, ** is 40 yuan, interested students can buy it. ”

I thought: my essays are not so good, I want to save up to buy this "Teach You Essays"!

In the weeks that followed, I figured out what to do on my own because my parents were not at home (on a business trip). I sold the old newspapers and cans that I didn't use at home, and after a while, I saved enough money to buy the book "Teaching You to Compose" - 40 yuan.

But on a sunny morning, something shattered my dream. It was at the class meeting that I was stunned when I saw that everyone was donating money to Project Hope. When I came to my senses, I hesitated and put all the heavy 40 yuan in my pocket into the donation box.

Suddenly, all the classmates and teachers present cast a wave of admiration at me, which I will never forget.

It depends on the expansion requirements of your topic. If it is simpler, as long as each sentence is more descriptive and metaphorical, the requirements are higher, that is, the number of words is expanded and the number of words is required to increase a lot, so you must start from the meaning of the material and add more of your own imagination.

Huge rocks stand majestically on both sides of the shore, and the reflection in the lake swells like ink.

The originally narrow river gradually widened, and the current was fast, and the boatman supported the boat to cross the river steadily.

Add descriptions, all kinds of descriptions, whether it's scenery or people.

Write it, send it to the mailbox, and send it to you.

It's dusk, and I'm wandering in the lonely land of Donggao.

Autumn is like a drop of colored ink, falling into the woods, and then rippling layer by layer. Deep purple, striking red, bright orange, brilliant golden, brocade-like gorgeous, dazzling. All the trees are burning up all the colors of their lives in this colder season.

Looking into the distance, the rolling mountains sigh in the afterglow of the setting sun. Even though the gentle twilight edged the mountains with gold, they could not burn like the woods below, but could only irrepressibly and slowly fade their beautiful colors.

The late shepherd hummed a little song and waved a whip in his hand to gently drive a few strong calves, forming a silhouette in the darkening sunset.

The sound of horses' hooves crushed the sunset on the gravel road. The hunter galloped with a rich trophy of the birds, the birds of the forest, and soon disappeared at the end of the path.

At this moment, there is only an old tree that accompanies me, but in this crisp autumn season, the leaves have withered early, leaving only a few dry leaves curled up in a ball, sighing in the evening breeze. Looking around, there is no one around who knows each other. Looking at the vast twilight, I couldn't help but let out a long howl, I wonder if the distant Boyi and Shuqi can hear my chanting?

In the valley, my singing voice echoes freely and freely ......