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In the Andean Plateau of South America at an altitude of more than 4,000 meters above sea level, there is a kind of flower that grows, called Puja flower, which blooms for only two months, and the flowers are extremely gorgeous when they bloom. However, who would have thought that it would have to wait 100 years for a two-month flowering period.
For 100 years, it just stood quietly on the plateau, bathing in the wind and rain, collecting the sun's brilliance with its leaves, and absorbing the nourishment of the earth with its roots ......Just waiting silently, waiting for the earth-shattering moment when life blooms in 100 years, waiting for the eyes of the climber when he is physically and mentally exhausted.
For Puja flowers, waiting is a beautiful persistence. In the real world, what people lack is the perseverance of Puyahua, which is manifested in the high and low vision, so ambitious, only focusing on the glory after success, ignoring or ignoring the efforts and waiting before success.
In the 19th century, William Osler, a student at McGill University in Montreal, Canada, was confused by life, he had high ideals, he wanted to succeed, the little things around him were meaningless, and the ordinary life was boring, so his grades deteriorated.
William Osler's teacher recommended that he read an enlightenment book written by the philosopher Caleri. In the midst of casual browsing, he suddenly found a sentence in the book: "The first thing to do is not to look at a vague target in the distance, but to do the most concrete thing at hand."
He had an epiphany, yes, no matter how lofty an ideal is, it needs to be realized little by little; No matter how big the project, it needs to be built brick by brick. The young William Osler began to immerse himself in his studies and graduated with honors. After graduating, he worked as a doctor in a hospital, treated every patient seriously, and soon became a famous local doctor and was awarded a knighthood.
Life is a process of struggle and a process of waiting. Because life will not be a smooth horse, and it will not always be proud. In the face of too many unsatisfactory, unsatisfactory and even frustration and frustration, what we need is a peaceful mind, like Puyahua, to accumulate strength in waiting, and finally achieve brilliant bloom.
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The design of the composition as a whole is based on abstract thinking. A good essay outline is the foundation of writing a good essay, and writing an essay outline is carried out in three orders: reviewing the topic, establishing the center, and selecting materials.
It is equivalent to writing the main content of this natural paragraph. This is a headline-style outline that outlines the main points of each paragraph in concise text. It is characterized by concise writing and fast speed, which is suitable for situations where the content of the writing is more familiar or the time is tight.
But for beginners, it is difficult to play a role in guiding composition.
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The essay outline generally consists of three parts:
OneTopic。(Middle).
IIMain content and center。Under the title, briefly write the main content of the essay and the main idea to be expressed.
IIIStructural arrangement。This is the most important part of the essay outline.
Fan Wen: Beginning: The most difficult thing to guess about an event is the human heart, and the most complicated thing is the relationship between people. The way in which each person deals with their own interests and those of others varies, but they can be broadly divided into three categories.
It is shameful to harm others and benefit oneself. The selfishness of human nature - all kinds of deception in society, the flooding of the market with counterfeit and shoddy products, etc. - ultimately harms others and themselves.
Benefiting others and self-interest can be advocated. Win-win wisdom - high-quality products make consumers feel at ease, and enterprises have more returns - help others to get spiritual satisfaction after being helped, etc. - and ultimately benefit together.
Self-denial is the most noble. For others, for the collective, for the country, for the world, step by step. Example: A PLA soldier who sacrificed himself to save a man who fell into the water; Lei Feng; Those who gave their lives for the progress of mankind: Voltaire, Copernicus, Bruno.
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1 Headline outline.
This kind of outline is relatively simple, and only writes the headings of each paragraph of the text.
Yong's concise text marks the main points of writing in each paragraph.
2.Bullet point outline.
This kind of outline is more detailed, it shows the center of the composition, and also writes the general content of the composition; At the same time, it is necessary to explain the details of the article.
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Who do you admire the most? They may be leaders, scientists, artists, singers, or ordinary people living around you. The person I look up to the most is my mom.
Although she is ordinary, she is very intelligent and ingenious. They often make me beautiful new clothes! She has big bright and bright eyes, a mouth under her nose that can speak, and she usually wears simple clothes, and does not like to dress herself, but I admire her very much, because of her skillful hands.
Sometimes, I will watch my mother make clothes for me, only to see her crackling and doing it, and it will be done all of a sudden, it seems very simple, so I also have the mentality of giving it a try, and I will do it, and after a while, the thread will be broken, and my mother will be very patient to put the thread on, I will do it again, and the thread will be pulled together, I will not be patient, and I will not do it. My mother comforted me and said, "Don't do it, you have to study hard!"
I nodded. I didn't expect it to be so difficult to make clothes, but my mother did it so well, and so soon at that time, I began to worship her. Later, I wore the clothes my mother made for me to school, and my classmates said that my clothes were beautiful, and I was very happy, because my mother made them!
When my classmates asked me if I bought it, I happily said, "My mother made it!" Not bought.
When the classmates heard this, they looked disbelieving and said, "No! Li Min, don't lie to us!
I eagerly retorted, "It was my mother who did it, I didn't lie to you!" "My classmates finally believed what I said and praised my mother, and I was so happy to listen, listen!
This is my idol, my mother, who is such a clever person!
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You're also in Zhuozhong, and you're still in Class 7 or 8 of the eighth grade, right?
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On this day, my father took me to play, driving a car, suddenly, the intersection was blocked, I couldn't walk, I only heard the sound of the surrounding cars honking, dripping, dripping, very noisy.
I suddenly saw a jack in front of me, and I told my dad to plug in the car, but he didn't hear it and said, "Let's take a detour, it's convenient and time-saving." "I can't help but ask my dad:
Why? "Because, if some people know that they can't go, but they have to squeeze in, isn't that schadenfreude! What if....If we take a detour, we'll be faster than them, right?
I said again. Dad patiently said, "Well......."You must know how to take a detour.
And just like that, I had a happy day.
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The students found that the river is not a straight line, and the curve is zigzag, the teacher said: The reason is that the river will encounter various obstacles in the process of advancing, some of which cannot be passed, so that it can only reach the sea by detour.
The same is true of the road of growth, taking the detour is another way to move forward, only through various obstacles, in order to reach the sea of life, please take a detour, sometimes it is also a wisdom as the theme, write an essay on your own theme.
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In addition to writing about people, memorization, scenes, and objects, there are also some other genres that need to be learned in primary school. Each genre has unique writing requirements and writing methods, which must be understood and learned, but primary school students often cannot grasp the format and expression methods of these genres well, resulting in the written composition does not meet the requirements of the genre, and the writing is nondescript, therefore, mastering the requirements of different styles is an important aspect of writing a good composition. This chapter will tell you some of the ways to write in a stylistic style.
Write childlike. — Talking about how fairy tales are written.
In a composition class, Mr. Yuan assigned to write a fairy tale. Teacher Yuan said: "Fairy tales are a kind of literary style that is more suitable for children to read, according to the psychological characteristics and needs of children, through rich and peculiar fantasies, imagination and exaggerated techniques to create a distinctive image, with a moving storyline, with easy-to-understand language and words to reflect life, punish evil and promote good, and play the purpose of educating people."
Fairy tales are generally anthropomorphic, and there are many such fairy tales in primary school Chinese textbooks, such as "Bamboo Shoots", "The Rose of the Deer", and "The Ugly Duckling". Previously, we have also written several fairy tales.
Fairy tales show our yearning and pursuit of beauty. Writing fairy tales is a form that students love, and most of the stories, cartoons, etc., which you are exposed to, are fairy tales. ”
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1. Highlight the key points and be detailed appropriately.
A good scenery essay often does not depend on how many scenes you list in the essay, nor does it depend on whether each of the scenes you choose will arouse the reader's interest. Rather, no matter how many scenes you write about, there must be one that is the focus of the article, and you can use descriptive language to describe it specifically, or you can use white sketching to outline the characteristics of the scenery to make a deep impression.
The three easiest mistakes to write a scene composition are: first, to write it as a "running account", just like some travelogues, it seems that there are many scenic spots, but each scenic spot is a brushstroke, and there is no good selection of one of them for specific description; Second, although the scenery also has a background introduction or detailed description, it seems a little like a dragonfly dotting water, touching it and bypassing it; The third is that the detailed arrangement of the article is unreasonable, the introduction of the beginning of the cause part is too detailed and too long, and the middle part of the article is not very good, and the 600-word article has not been written to the point of 300 words.
2. Highlight the specific features or characteristics of the scene.
This is to talk about the characteristics and characteristics of the scene, and it also refers to the difference between the thing and other things. Only in this way can we impress the reader, but there is also a premise here, that is, after grasping the characteristics of the scene, we should make a specific description, and we should not mention it in one stroke. In the description of the procedure, it is necessary to make full use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification.
The accurate and appropriate use of rhetorical devices can help to make the scene more vivid and moving.
3. The scene is blended, and the scene is lyrical.
Therefore, the author should integrate his true emotions while writing the scene, so that the reader can not only "see" the beautiful scenery in the article, but also feel the emotions and thoughts that the author wants to express. A single composition of writing a scene for the sake of writing a scene cannot become a good article that makes readers have emotional resonance, which requires us to naturally integrate our own emotions into it when writing articles and writing about scenes, and express our emotions with the help of descriptions of scenes.
4. Write about the activities of people or animals in the description of the scene.
If the scenery in the scene writing essay is "static", then an excellent scene writing essay is also inseparable from "movement", where the "movement" includes the activities of the characters corresponding to the scene, playing, playing, running, animal foraging, jumping, etc., when a scene writing essay will combine the activities of people and animals with the description of the scenery, it will give people a sense of intimacy, the beauty of the combination of movement and static. Therefore, when students describe the scene, they can choose the activities of people and animals appropriately, and as a foil, the text will become more readable.
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