How can I write to make my words more graphic and vivid?

If you want to pursue the picture sense of words, you must first have the restraint of subjectivity, and you can try to write clean words through the means of refining words and the pursuit of simplicity and thinness, and isolate the subjectivity from the text as much as possible. At the stage of entry, what I am most afraid of is self-show-off, and writing is an inflated "me" with words as vanity. If people who have just started writing develop the habit of showing off their skills, they will basically be wasted.

My personal path to tempering the sense of text and picture is as follows: first start by imitating Shen Congwen's writing scene, and at this stage, the first pursuit is conciseness, until the conciseness is thin to the point of thinness. After having a little foundation, you can start to read some Tang Dynasty prose as an advanced level, because it is oriented towards conciseness and thinness, so the Tang Dynasty prose read at this stage is based on Liu Zongyuan's scene prose.

At this stage, it took me four or five years to gradually stop being as deliberate as at the beginning, and the text gradually regained some richness little by little with thinness as the skeleton, and then gradually entered the next stage.

Personal feeling is still natural, have a very keen and detailed feeling of the things around you and life scenes and be able to express them fluently, in short, it is "immersive, good at recording, diligent description and practice". I remember one winter night when I was a child, lying in the quilt to watch Lao She's "Camel Xiangzi", the sultry air before the rainstorm, the wilting leaves, the napping coachman, I saw that I was extremely hot, I lifted the quilt only to find that the house was less than 5 degrees Celsius, and when I saw the thunderstorm hit, the heavy rain poured, crackling on the brick and stone street, chasing Xiangzi to pull the car and run wildly, I couldn't help but wipe a handful of rain that seemed to be poured on my face, very happy. This sense of picture is undoubtedly unadorned, and it is natural.

In ancient Chinese poetry, there has always been this tradition: the display of objects and images, outlining the painting environment. Wang Wei's poems, "There are paintings in poems, and poems in paintings"?

Just because he is good at writing: "The desert is lonely, and the sun sets on the long river". "The bright moon shines among the pines, and the clear spring stone is upstream".

There is a famous "screenwriter's bible" called "Stories". It is mentioned in the book: Writing the whole universe, you must be a rookie; Write about your bedroom, you must be an expert.

Note: Although McGee is mentioned a second time in Zhihu, I am really not his disciple, and I have only read the first third of this Bible at most. And I doubt it's possible that Robert Sawyer said it.

That's not the case, I translated it by impression. That's a wonderful statement. So, as a non-master, if you want to make people feel immersed, to impress others, you have to show that you are more professional than others.

Write only about what you know, only about the mood you have, and only about what you are sure of.

It is important to remember that the words you write and your own subjectivity are two beings who have little connection to each other. Once the text loses its suppression of the subjective, it also means that the subjective loses its control over the text. You think that you are writing your heart in your pen, and the words of your heart go with it, unrestrained and free spirit; In fact, your mind, your subjectivity, can only be felt by you, but your readers can't feel it at all, and what your readers can see is a bunch of words that have broken free from the author's control, and they are multiplying like tumors there.

It is recommended to take a look at the interview with Sina Premier League Chen Chi by People magazine. Brother Chi is famous for writing Premier League lace, and his articles are full of emotion, with a strong sense of picture and context. When Brother Chi first started writing, he was considered to be only at the level of a primary school student, but now he is known as a "lace writer in the sports world", and it only took a year for Brother Chi to complete this transformation.

There is an explanation that "color white is better than snow" refers to the sick and weak pale, which is not true. Although from the dictionary meaning, it seems to make sense. In Chinese, the snow metaphor white is praise, which means that when this child is pampered and beautiful, it cannot be a sick child.

When words with the same atmosphere are stacked on top of each other, the technique is good, and an atmospheric picture is generated. The picture of literature itself has sorrow and joy, fear and leisure, and it is not taken by pressing the shutter.

Writing ideas: Write a composition with a sense of picture according to the appearance, form, characteristics, words and deeds, and manners of the task.

Her figure is like a flying goose, graceful like a swimming dragon. The radiant face is like a chrysanthemum under the autumn sun, and the body is as lush as a green pine in the spring breeze. She appears from time to time like a light cloud and a moon, floating and wide like a whirlwind of snow.

Looking at it from afar, it is as clear as the rising sun in the morning glow; Looking closely, it is as bright as a new lotus blooming between the green waves.

She has a moderate posture, tall and short, narrow shoulders, a thin waist like a bundle, and a beautiful neck showing a fair **. Neither grease nor powder, the bun is towering like a cloud, the long eyebrows are curved and slender, the red lips are fresh, the teeth are white, a pair of shining eyes that are good at looking forward to, and the sweet dimples under the cheeks on both sides.

Her posture is elegant and charming, her demeanor is gentle and demure, her mood is soft and smooth, and her words are decent and pleasant. The costumes are gorgeous, and the appearance of the bones is the same as the one painted on the picture. She was dressed in a bright Luo robe and wore exquisite jade.

He wears gold, silver and jade jewelry, embellished with shining pearls all over his body. She wore patterned travel shoes on her feet, dragged a misty skirt, faintly exuding the fragrance of orchid, and wandered by the side of the mountain.

Suddenly, he lifted lightly, and played and played, leaning on the left side of the color, and the right side was shaded by the laurel flag, stretching out his hand on the river beach to carefully dispel the boredom, picking the black sesame grass on the edge of the water.

Writing ideas: Write a composition with a sense of picture according to the appearance, form, characteristics, words and deeds, and manners of the task.

Her shape and shadow are as beautiful as a flying goose and a dragon. She was radiant, like an autumn chrysanthemum, and her body was as lush as a pine tree in the spring breeze. She is like a light cloud and a moon, drifting like a wind and snow.

From a distance, it is as bright as the morning sun in the morning mist; If you look at it closely, it is as beautiful as a new lotus blooming in a green wave.

She is of medium build, with narrow shoulders and a narrow waist. Her beautiful neck shows a fair-skinned **. No fat, no powder.

The hair is as high as a cloud. The long eyebrows are curved and slender. Red lips are fresh and moisturized.

The teeth are white. A pair of bright eyes are very good at seeing. The sweet dimples on both faces and under the cheekbones are sweet.